Alright. This is a story I’ve been working on, but it’s making rather slow progress, so I hoped you guys could help me out with the plot/character development. That would just be fantastic.
So, it’s a story about a family living in Chicago. There are five kids, and the story’s focused on them and their lives and interactions. They love to participate in school shows, they perform a lot of rock or pop songs and they’re really talented. You can choose the songs for them to do if you like.
Here are the characters, in descending order from oldest to youngest:
Luke
Age: Seventeen
Looks: Brown hair, green eyes, fair skin, lean but strong
Orientation: Gay
Personality: Funny, charismatic, goofy, likable, not feminine but is proud to be gay
Musical Talent: Singer
Agnatha
Age: Sixteen
Looks: Dark hair, dark eyes, fair skin, slender
Orientation: Straight
Personality: Timid, quiet, kind, thoughtful
Musical Talent: Back-up singer
Steven
Age: Sixteen (he’s Agnatha’s twin)
Looks: Dark hair, dark eyes, fair skin, skinny
Orientation: Straight
Personality: I haven’t figured it out yet so it’s up to you to decide!
Musical Talent: Drums/keyboard
Julia
Age: Fifteen
Looks: Red hair, blue eyes, fair skin, stronger than she looks
Orientation: Straight
Personality: Sociable, smart, nice to people she’s close to, sticks up for herself
Musical talent: Great singer
Ava
Age: Fourteen
Looks: Dark hair, dark eyes, fair skin, slender but could kick your butt:)
Orientation: Gay
Personality: Tough, independent, smart
Musical talent: Singer, electric guitar
With the exception of Steven, please keep my characters IN CHARACTER. I don’t want Luke chatting up a girl or Ava letting someone walk all over her!
Enjoy
PS: Sorry for the uber-long post.
PPS: Thank you!
A Note On Ratings: Right now I'm giving it a high rating because my characters like to swear, but not too much. You don't have to swear if you don't want to, however.
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