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The First Amovta- An Aquarian StoryBook *Invite Only*



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Thu Oct 21, 2010 2:53 am
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It's 2006 here on Earth.

And in Aquariazzi, things are at their worst. The battle with the Cloaks is at its peak, and Aquariazzi has just suffered a great blow and loss to their numbers. The armies were marching for the Dark Provinces, half following young generals Elinia and Forlo-- half following the much older General Torrin.

General Torrin suffered a surprise attack from the Cloaks one night while the camp was sleeping. The unsuspecting camp was lost, save for two survivors who managed to make it back to Elinia and Forlo with the horrible news. After camping out in the Rummosin Desert, about a quarter-mile north of one of the only two oasis.

It's that night that the camp suffers another suprise attack, though they were more prepared than the unfortunate General Torrin. They made it, having only lost three warriors, though many suffered injuries.

But there's hope. While the warriors are fighting with all they have, rumours have been surfacing back in the more tame regions of the land. Rumours that Idoneus has once again been walking the lands. The sightings are increasing dramatically. Idoneus is planning something. Something big.

It's only after the attack that the three Amovta are called, two from Aquariazzi and one from Earth. It's when these three Shift for the first time that General Forlo receives a dream. He has to go to the Mirage Hills. There's something hidden there, something that can only be unlocked with the help of the three Amovta. But they aren't the only three who play key roles in this. Everybody they come into contact to will effect the outcome. What choices they make and how they influence each other could control the fate of Aquariazzi.

And so the treck begins...

Your Path

You will be going through these places, in order.

The Rummosin Desert, which shouldn't take long considering you're already half-way through it.

Next comes the beautiful Purale Forest. Though things here can take you by suprise. Be careful and keep quiet... or really loud.

After you're through the Purale Forest, you're at Sjöid Lake, home to the beautiful Kotata. They'll probably help you get across the lake. After all, it's quicker than walking around it. This should be one of the only terror-free bits of your journey.

Next is one of the worst parts of your journey. The Arenius Sand Dunes, home to the legendary, and very, very dangerous Kostarius lizard. Just pray it doesn't rain...

And finally, it's your second last destination... and the destination it will take you the longest to get through. The enormous Coromen Forest, home to the dwarfs and the Inocki tribe. They'll help you get through the forest in one piece, but be warned. Don't stray far or you'll never find your way out.

Finally, after you're through the forest you're at the hills... what awaits you here is supposedly incredible.

RULES

-Please, no god-modding. It's unfair and extremely irritating.

-ALL posts must be at LEAST 800 characters. I am going to be very fussy about this, and you may get lectured if they're not at least that long. It's not much, so PLEASE make an effort.

-Swearing is allowed, but please keep it to a minimum.

-Romance is great, just avoid descriptive sex scenes. Skipping until after they're over is wonderful.

-Please, please, please do not post anything that aren't SB posts here after it starts. These should be posted on the DT so that they don't disrupt the post. (Meaning no complaint/corrective/apology posts or 'bring me in! I'm lost!' or question posts. Please keep those in the DT, and check it regularly)

-Feel free to design creatures, but please PM me with them first. (Whatever happens in this SB is going down as official Aquarian history. ;) Have fun helping me shape it.)

-NPC characters can be created/disposed of at any time. If there's an NPC in the storybook, and you see a need to post AS that character, then please don't hesitate to do so. (They don't have profiles, but don't have them do anything too... odd. Even for an NPC)

-If you have any questions about Aquariazzi, ask me in the DT so I can answer and everybody knows the answer.

-There are only SOME Aquarians who have any sort of power. If a slot has a *P* by its name, then that Aquarian has a power. (Note that if they don't have the *P*, they do NOT have any powers. If they do, put the powers in the 'other' section. ONE power per person.) *All healers have powers related to their profession. No fire-control or anything like that*

SLOTS

The Three Shifters:
General Elinia - Isha - female
(Healer) Angel - Puzzle - female *P*
(Earthling) Ty - lilgreendots - male

Healers
1- - Male *P*
2 - Chupatoasta - Female *P*

Warriors:
General Forlo - jemjive- Male *P*
Rilian - Phantomofthepotter - Male
Warrior 2 - -Female
(Traitor) - ScarlettFire - *P*

Orphans
Ekki - ninjacookiemonster -female
Auren - TheGreatIthy - male *P*

Misc.
Razu (Tag-along Ferret) - RazHuni - female

(may open more slots later, or take slots away)

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Thu Oct 21, 2010 2:53 am
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Name: Angel

Age: 23

Gender: Female

Rank/Roll: Healer/shifter

Appearance:
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She's about 5 feet tall, slender, oh, and not to mention her pointed ears.
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Personality: She is everyone's mother. If you're doing something she deems inmature, she will lecture you, but she only does it because she cares. She can become a bit naggy and annoying. Don't get on her bad side. Because a time will come when you need her, but she won't be willing to help you. She finds a way to make everything seem humorous to everyone else. Even when that something is bugging her.

Example: A large fly approaches Angel, oh lord how she hated bugs. She glanced over to Nia, taking a step back. "Nia, Nia, it's coming closer. It's going to barf on me. Nia get rid of it!"

Strengths: Healing, fast, motherly.

Weaknesses: Bugs, fighting, easily confused.

History: Angel is originally from Neserada, she was one of the best healers in her village, one year her family traveled to Aquarizzia and her parents were killed by some big monster thing. She was young. She was scared. Then she was taken in by one of the elven people.Years past and she couldn't remember the traumatizing event that killed her parents, one day, when she was instructed to deliver something to a friend in the capital, she came across a large bug. Memory flooded back to her. She never did deliver that message. Now, if she's near a bug, she freaks out.

Up For Love: YAAA

Other: As she heals others, she feels the pain they went through.
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Thu Oct 21, 2010 10:43 am
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I love playing the bad guy. >.> Hehe. One traitor coming up!

Name: Rishima Astyrian.

Age: 22.

Gender: Female.

Rank/Roll: Warrior/Traitor.

Appearance: Rishima has long, dark brown hair, pale green eyes and is about 5’7 in height. She never seems to look straight at you, but past you and through you. She often fades into the background and can easily be overlooked. It’s a talent of hers—fading into the background, that is. She is often seen wearing dark clothing. She usually wears a hooded cloak over her normal clothing and is sometimes seen wearing a dark bandana. Her skin is pale and smooth, and Rishima is slim and athletic. She’s strong, but definitely doesn’t look like it. People often mistake her for a poor begger girl, until she pulls a knife on them, and... well, you get the idea.
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Personality: Despite her somewhat cold first impression, Rishima is actually kind, loving, caring, and smart, determined, fierce and loyal, and sometimes easily distracted. She hates to see those she cares about hurt and gets really defensive if someone she likes is harmed, but if you start asking questions about her past, she’ll often shut down and just not talk if you bring up anything to do with her family, and if she doesn’t shut down, she’s get mad—really mad. And a mad Rishima who has a few interesting talents is not a good thing. And although she’s talented, her downfalls are her mistakes, which are many, her short temper and the grudge she holds against the man who murdered her family. She’s quiet more often than not and thinks a lot before speaking or doing something. She likes to plan things out, if she can, and dislikes when her plans are thoroughly screwed up by stupid mistakes. And she has made a lot of mistakes in the past, and dislikes when this is pointed out. She also hates being called helpless or a coward—it’s another downfall of hers. Rishima often has a blank, cold and uncaring edge to her expression, like she’s lost all emotion or just doesn’t give a damn about the rest of the world.

Strengths: Her Shadow Manipulation, knows how to fight--with the sword and dagger. Smart, determined. Knows how to ride, hunt and climb. Fierce in battle.

Weaknesses: Her many mistakes and having them pointed out. Being called helpless or a coward. Shutting down when angry, losing her temper. The grudge she has. Her aim with a bow--she's hopeless. Sometimes easily distracted. People trying to pry information about her past out of her.

History: Rishima originally comes from a far away land called Curuwen. As a young child, she appeared very talented as a warrior and at disappearing into the shadows, literally. Although her parents were thrilled, Rishima just wanted to be the child she was. Well, for a few more years at least. As far as she can remember, Rishima’s childhood was peaceful and fairly uneventful. At least, it was until she turned twelve. No one is quite sure what happened, as Rishima never spoke of it. But they do know that both her parents and two of her siblings died in the fire that consumed her home. Was it Rishima’s doing? Was it an accident? No one will ever know. At one stage, Rishima made a living as an assassin-for-hire, hiding behind a mask and a cape when she was on the job. Today, she's a warrior of Aquariazzi and has only recently found out about her Shadow Manipulation ability.

Up For Love: Of course.

Other: Shadow Manipulation. (Hope that's okay, Ishy.) Rishima has a cousin back in Curuwen, who goes by the name of Cressida. Cressida can bend the elements. All of the elements, as she is secretly a Spirit Bender. Cressida is currently in Ingemina, searching for Rishima's long lost older brother. Unknown to her generals and her fellow warriors, Rishima has problem--the enemy has something she wants, and she'll do anything to get it back.
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Thu Oct 21, 2010 11:58 am
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Name: Eksuladia. But that's a touch long, so she goes by Ekki.

Age: 14. She's an orphan, remember?

Gender: female

Rank/Role: Orphan/Refugee

Appearance: Ek has choppy black hair and big green eyes, with long lashes. She's a rather small girl, skinny from lack of nutrition and constant action. She's pale and has long limbs, even for her frame. She often looks jumpy and with healthy flush to her cheeks, often from running or climbing or something along those lines. She wears the faded, but functional, clothes assigned to her type of kids, a plain shirt and knee long pants, but being from the South, she's managed to brighten them with dye from flower petals, and always has flowers braided into her hair.

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Personality: She's usually bubbly and sweet, wonderful with animals and optimistic. She's a foster child, and therefore has the foster child reputation. "Where the orphan wallows, the demon follows" and all that. Therefore, if you even start to show belief in that, she will turn sharp and bitter in a heartbeat. It's why it takes her a while to drop the fact that she doesn't have living family in front of strangers. She's fast, good heavens she's fast, and has a knack for survival. Not exactly building fires and hunting and recognizing poisonous food- just coming back from the grasp of death. She can bounce back from just about anything, physically. Emotionally, though... emotionally she's broken. She's been rejected almost every day for fourteen years. Her parents didn't want her. Ever since then, there's been the orphanage mistress, telling them messages of darkness. The adopters who always chose more robust, prouder girls. Even during her brief stint of adoption, the townspeople didn't approve of her. She's lost the ability to vent and show what she's feeling, truly, because of all the reminders to stay quiet, keep your head down. She can feel, she can feel plenty, it's just letting that feeling show that breaks her. But she's relearning, and her true nature, lovable and sunny, is coming back out.

Strengths: Faaaast. Fast, fast, fast. Years of hard work have given her more muscle than most other peasant girls. She can bounce back from any amount of pain, starvation, or sickness short of death, and she knows how to get good food out of scraps. She can cook like any high-end chef, and can stretch out money when it's needed. She's resourceful and a good climber,and actually a really great artist, but she never had the means to do work in the orphanage. Suddenly being put into a world where she can literally see art everywhere, do art everywhere- it's incredible.

Weaknesses: She's not used to fighting, only cooking and cleaning and running and climbing. She doesn't exactly know how to, really. She has a tendency to put others before herself, which is not a good thing, coming where she comes from. It's why she never got enough food or the good gifts. She hates bringing up the past, and will often shut down if someone asks her about it. Her trust has been broken too many times for her to just pick up the pieces and try again, and she always feels awkward in large groups. Adjusting to actually social people might take some time.

History: Ekki was dropped on the doorstep of an old girls' orphanage a week after she was born, and that's where she grew up. She was like a mother to all the younger girls, cooking food for them, snuck from the kitchen (for which she was beaten) and always tried to take care of them as best she could. She was more like their guardian than the orphanage mistress ever claimed to be. Watching them go was like being stabbed over and over; the young, healthy ones were always going to win over the skinny, sickly-looking child.

And then someone decided that skinny and pale was alright. Yulinna Marsh adopted her. For one week, just one week, Ekki started feeling the maternal love she'd missed out on all these years, felt like she belonged. Like her fresh start was going to give out rosebuds, not brambles. And then the raiders came. Everything Ekki knew was lost to the fires and blades. Not a familiar soul left. Her Yulinna was lost. Her everything was gone. So she ran, blowing through small towns silently. She's been running, walking, crawling through the desert, for about two weeks now; she's getting close to the oasis.

Up For Love: Sure, if someone close to her age turns up.

Other: She used to use charcoal from the fire to draw inside her clothes after lights-out, when she was changed into the threadbare nightdress; of you ever do laundry for her, you'll find countless sketches on the fabric. Also carries a short knife she grabbed from the ground when she was running from the fire, and refuses to give it up. Is the only survivor of her town.

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Thu Oct 21, 2010 2:56 pm
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Name: Elinia

Age: 25

Gender: Female

Rank/Roll: Warrior/General

Appearance: Elina has long, wavy, chocolate-brown hair and dark brown eyes. Her skin is tanned from spending hours at a time out in the sun. She stands about 5'6'' and never slouches. She carries herself straight and in a way that demands attention. She's got a wicked death-glare and you will be able to tell if she's angry. In fact, she makes it obvious on purpose. You can usually tell how she feels by the look in her in her eyes or her facial expression. She can hide this if she tries hard enough, though she isn't usually very concerned about keeping her emotions concealed.
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Personality: Nia is fiery, strong-willed, very stubborn and quite independant. She fights for what she believes in and is extremely passionate and loyal to Aquariazzi. On the battle field, she's one to be feared and acts without mercy. She's very brave, and sometimes it would seem as though she fears nothing, though fear is an emotion she tries hard to hide. Off the battlefield, however, she's very empathetic and is a strong believer in second chances. If she meets an enemy off the battlefield, she'd much rather talk first and fight later. When she's not busy being dead serious, she actually has a good sense of humour and loves to joke around. She's known to pull pranks on Forlo and the other warriors (especially new recruits or those with ego issues). She tries to relate well to everybody and is a very fair leader, though she isn't afraid to dish out a punishment if she needs to. She's also known as a thrill-seeker and seems to be unable to turn down a challenge. She also has a major soft spot for children and can't stand seeing one hurt or alone.

Strengths: She's trained in all combat and is a master swordsmaiden, and is good with other weapons, though she tends to stick to blades. She's quick on her feet and is very agile and stealthy. She has a sharp mind and is good at making last-minute decisions and maneuvers as well as long-term plans. She's also very loyal and it's near impossible to force her into betraying her people.

Weaknesses: She has a tendancy to pick and choose what orders she follows, assuming that her rank as general gives her the rights to do so. Unfortunately, this has gotten her into heaps worth of trouble in the past. She's a very sore loser when it comes to petty challenges, and will get worked up if she doesn't kick butt. She's hypoglocemic (Yes, that exists in Aquariazzi, too), meaning that she has to eat every couple of hours or she will start to feel sick and dizzy. If she goes out hungry, chances are her physical abilities will be slightly handicapped by fatigue.

History: Elinia grew up with her mother, Starina, her grandmother, Nilliah and her younger brother, Korin. She never knew her father, nor did she know her grandfather. She does, however, know who they are, and she hasn't told a soul.
Every since she was a little girl, Elinia had taken an interest in fighting. The same goes for Korin, and the two trained together from when Nia was 7 and Korin was only 5. (though he didn't get serious until he was 7) Starina and Nilliah always gave their little girl time to be a child, never forcing her to practice if she would rather go play. It wasn't until she turned 13 that her training got really intense. It was also when her little brother disapeared, Nia claiming he was taken by a Kirishana.
She started working under a certain General Forlo when she was 18. Both her mother and her grandmother claim that she was ridiculously loyal to the man, and so she was. A few weeks after she turned 20, Forlo was abducted by the Cloaks and held captive. Elinia, being as fiery and determined as she is, got a small group of warriors together. The man was saved hours before his execution.
With a bit of urging from Forlo, Nia was appointed general to work alongside her once-was superior. The two have quite a past, which they choose to keep a secret.

Up For Love: Heh, sort of.

Other:
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One of her most closely guarded secrets is that her grandfather is currently Emperor over one of the three Dark Provinces. (Emperor Corrin of Drazz). Her father is a major general in one of their armies. Nobody outside of her closely-knit family knows this. Her grandfather left her grandmother the second her father was conceived, and her father left her mother the second Elinia was conceived. (How he found Corrin is still unknown.)
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Fri Oct 22, 2010 1:24 pm
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Name: Auren

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Rank/Roll: Orphan *P*

Appearance: A very messy and dirty individual from his long life on the streets. He has curly brown hair that reaches his shoulders and dark brown eyes. He always wears a tattered brown shirt (as it's all he has) and brown shorts with no shoes. He is very skinny due to malnutrition and also very small for his age.

Personality: Even with the fact that he has been on the streets alone for most of his life, he is surprisingly a raging optimist. He always tries to find the good in people and situations which can annoy anybody he is around. At the same time, he is very hard not to like and has a gift of bringing people together. That is not to say that he is always like this, he is human, and when he feels betrayed, it is hard to gain his trust back.

Strengths: VERY charasmatic. He is also very good at urban survival due (well survival in general) from living off of scraps. He is also surprisingly fast and nimble, able to run for long distances without tiring. I guess that's how he hasn't been caught for a long time.

Weaknesses: Not strong at all. He cannot fight. He can also be far too trusting and will not be able to spot an enemy because he will initially think they are his friend until they prove otherwise.

History: Auren's parents died when he was still very young, and he ran away before the cops could find him. Auren has no clue what got them, only that they are dead. Ever since, he has learned to live off the streets. As he got older, he found that he had some skills that others did not possess and he used those skills to keep on living. Auren has since been a part of several small orphan groups, but some betrayed him, using him for his 'skills' as he calls them and he left and others got caught or killed. Auren is not sure if his parents had the same skills as he had and wants to find out if he has other living relatives that can take him off the streets.

Up For Love: Sure!

Other: He can slow down time for very short intervals. Due to his age, skill level and state of malnutrition, he can only use it for seconds at a time and feels very drained for 24 hours afterwards during which he needs to recharge. His control over time can improve while he gets older or if he is well fed.

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Sat Oct 23, 2010 6:24 pm
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Name: Forlo

Age: 27

Gender: Male

Rank/Roll: General

Appearance:

Personality: Forlo kind of has a twisted personality. He enjoys inflicting suffering on people for which he holds only hatred, such as the Cloaks, that is what makes him such a good warrior. Don't get him wrong though, he is kind and gentle to those he loves and cares about. You just need to know what side of him you are on. Sarcasm is a main part of Forlo's vocabulary, it often makes him come across as rude, which he isn't, though he is known to be quite tempermental. He can have wicked mood swings in two seconds, watch out when that happens. He is also very emotionally strong, he can withstand any type gruel.

Strengths: Forlo is the holder of great strength, both emotional and physical. Because of that, he is a very impressive warrior. He is a very skilled swordsman and a master of archery. Forlo is not afraid to speak his mind and does so quite well in front of large crowds of people. He is extremely good at charming people, and can get them to virtually anything he wishes.

Weaknesses: Unfortunately, Forlo is a very weak swimmer and always will be do to a trauma when he was younger. Even though it was several years ago, wide open water still makes him uneasy. He has an odd soft spot for children and unruly teens.

History: Forlo comes from a long line of fishermen and when he was 7 years old his father brought him fishing for the first time. Since his older brother, Deakon, had already been going for years, he was extremely excited. While on the water Forlo tripped and fell out of the boat, knowing that he wasn't a very good swimmer, his older brother dove in to save him. He managed to push Forlo upwards enough that their father pulled him back into the boat, Deakon however got caught in an old fishing net and was held under the water, drowning. For many years after, Forlo would not get back in a boat, he was traumatized. Instead he stayed home with his Mother and sisters watching his younger brothers going off one by one to fish. This is where his combat history begins.
He was 10 years old when a training camp was set up near his village. Young Forlo would spend hours watching the Warriors-to-be locked in training battles. One day, a master trainer noticed him crouching in the bushes, mesmerized by the fighting. He invited Forlo to join in the younger trainees. When he noticed the natural skill this youngster possesed, he invited him to come back the next day, and the next, and so on. At the age of 16 Forlo enrolled in the army, being the first son in decades to break the family's trend of fishermen.
Seven years ago, at the age of 20, as a warrior, Forlo saved an Aquarian princess from the Cloaks and led a very small force of Aquarians off to defeat quite a large number of those same Cloaks. That gave him his rise to fame and his General title. A little over 5 years ago he was captured himself by the Cloaks. It was the warrior Elinia that came to his rescue. With Forlo pulling a few strings and her impressive background Elinia earned herself a General title alongside him.

Up For Love: Not exactly.

Other: He has the power to see futuristic moments in his dreams, also dreams of Earth.
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Sat Oct 23, 2010 10:20 pm
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Name: Razu

Age: 4

Gender: Female

Rank/Roll: Ferret

Appearance: Warm mocha brown fur covers most of her face and body. Her ears are brown. Her tummy is covered in fluffy white fur, which also surrounds her little brown nose. She has a single white ring that surrounds near the tip of her tail.
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Personality: Razu is an independent little ferret, and gets attached to people easily. Anyone who tries to hurt those people, she attacks, and she's not merciful about it either. When she's angry, she's a vicious little ferret. [Vicious in the sense that she WILL bite off you nose if you give her the chance, but mostly just bites you until you scream and run away. Or throw her against a tree.] For the most part, she likes anyone who will give her food or stop to pet her. She tends to follow people who appear to be doing something of interest.

Strengths: Speed, sharp teeth, strong legs, easily liked, cute as hell

Weaknesses: Size, lack of opposable thumbs, weapons [obviously]

History: She was born into a litter of eight, left when she was two months old, lived on her own with the ephemeral company of various people. She's taken a shine to a girl named Elinia, and has lived with her [though she doesn't know it] for two years. She sometimes gives her food.

Up For Love: Sure, but it would be weird...unless you make another ferret. Then it'd be cute.

Other: N/A. May add more.
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Sun Oct 24, 2010 12:19 am
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**Editing still in progress.

Name: Rilian

Age: 26

Gender: Male

Rank/Roll: Warrior

Appearance: http://saimain.deviantart.com/art/Just-admit-it-you-like-me-142439695?q=boost%3Apopular+blonde+man&qo=54

Rilian has shaggy blonde hair and pretty delicate features on the whole. He's about average height and wiry. He's got green eyes and a lazy grin on his face most of the time. When he walks, Rilian doesn't take steps, but does this gliding, slithering, graceful thing. He's really good at looking good, and knows it.

Personality: Rilian will either be your character's best friend, or a thorn in their side. He's arrogant and flirtatious at the best of times, but a true friend and loyal companion to have on your side. When he devotes himself to something, Rilian sticks to it through thick and thin. He is desperately loyal to his country and would do anything to save it. However, this doesn't entitle that Rilian can't be snarky and sarcastic on the way.

Strengths: He's excellent at ranged weaponry. Rilian is light on his feet and knows how to pick his battles. He won't attempt to fight something when he can't win, choosing instead to wait until he has the advantage.

Weaknesses: Rilian is a pessimist. When thing are going rough, he can use his pessimism to fuel his drive for a while, but soon it gets too heavy for Rilian to handle. When this happens, Rilian looses much of his passion and heart that makes him great at what he does. Rilian also doesn't have the strength to be good at any sort of sword craft or hand-to-hand combat.

History: Rilian came from a family full of women. He was the second oldest child. He had an older sister and five younger sisters. And while Rilian was very close to all of his younger siblings, he and his older sister, Marielle, had a very special bond. They grew up in a realtively happy, healthy household (or as happy and healthy as a house could be with seven children runnning around). Rilian's father was a reasonably wealthy merchant, and it was always assumed that Rilian would just inheret the family business. Rilian was perfectly happy to do so; he never had any higher aspirations. But Rilian was essentially very naive. The age gap that separated he and Marielle was pretty significant. Marielle fell in love one winter and was married by the spring. Rilian was forced into the position of 'eldest child'. It was very hard for him to cope with Marielle's absence, although they still saw each other often. About a year after Marielle's wedding, Rilian enlisted in the army. Although Rilian's new life took some time getting used to, it kept him busy enough to keep him from thinking of his family at home. And, much to Rilian's surprise, he found out that Rilian made a good warrior. Rilian'sa seasoned soldier by now, but he doesn't think of the army as something he'll stay in. At some point, Rilian would like to take over his father's business and become a merchant like he had always planned. But Rilian won't leave his country in the midst of battle, and the darn place doesn't seem to want to straighten itself out. Rilian isn't about to leave any time soon.

Up for love: Yes

Other: Rilian is a great cat-lover.
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Sun Oct 24, 2010 3:35 am
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Name:- Ty

Age:- 25

Gender:- Male

Rank/Roll:- One of the three shifters/ Earthling

Appearance:
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Personality:
Ty is very serious and organized. He usually isn't joking and playing around like the others and went chaos breaks out he is the serious one who tries and stops it. Ty enjoys his position and wouldn't trade it for anything in the world. When things are wrong Ty is honest and doesn't try and make it seem as like they are ok. His mental strength is bigger than his physical strengh but he still does well with weapons. His favorite weapon to use is the dagger.

Strengths:
Puzzles and Riddles. Ty is very smart especially when it comes to solving world problems, riddles, and puzzles. He has a photographic memory which makes it easier to memorize things.

Weaknesses:
Not being in control, or not being able to do anything when someone is in need of help.

History:
When Ty was 14 years old he got into a horrible accident which erased all the memory from his fourteen years of life. He was at the beach surfing when his head made contact with a huge rock, making him go unconcious. When Ty woke up he was on an area of the beach that was desserted and didn't have a single person in sight. Ty couldn't remember anything and he didn't know where his family was. The only thing he had was a picture of his mother, father, and sister. Ty lived in an orphanage for 3 years until he ran away in search of a new, better life. He then lived alone on the streets, with not one friend to talk to. The only thing that seemed to comfort Ty was going to library reading and learning. Even though Ty didn't have a teacher he soaked up knowledge like a sponge and became a smart young man.

Up For Love:
Definately

Other: N/A
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Sun Oct 24, 2010 6:36 pm
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Awesome SB, Ish! Let me know if I have to change any of this!

Name: Kirila

Age: 21

Gender: Female

Rank/Roll: Warrior 2 *P*

Appearance: She has long, dark brown hair that is almost always pulled into a single braid down her back. Her eyes are a deeper version of her hair color, making the pupils almost disappear in them. She has a harsh face, almost always pulled into a scowl, and this makes her look older, despite being the youngest warrior. When she smiles, though, she can look quite pretty, but she rarely smiles, and if she does she's usually teasing someone. She wears armor from her old home, specially made by the warrior who trained her. It's mostly a chain mail-type of set-up, and offers slight protection while being lightweight. She'd prefer her old armor, which was full-body and heavier, but on such a long journey it wasn't practical. As a weapon, she prefers things such as swords and spears, things that are close-range and easy for her to control. She has a scar halfway around her neck on the right side, and she usually tries to cover it with something, be it a shirt collar or a strip of fabric tied around it.

Personality: She's a harsh, old soul. She frowns on the idea of small pleasures, such as fun and love. She believes that people are all out for themselves, and so any act of kindness without some sort of obvious ulterior motive confuses her. She puts out a facade of 'I don't like anyone, so just leave me alone and I won't stick a sword through you', but somewhere deep down she starts to care... enough to save your butt if you get yourself nearly killed, that is. Raised mainly by men, she's more of a guy in personality than a girl, as in a sharp sword will be more beautiful to her than a field of flowers or a butterfly. If you try to touch anywhere near her neck, expect immediate repercussions. She's extremely protective of it, and has a tendency to start panicking if her neck is threatened or compromised. Also, she has a tendency to talk to herself, but usually only when she thinks no-one is around to hear her. ask her about it and she'll get immediately angry and explode on you, so just don't ask.

Strengths: She has many years of experience with close range weapons, and can use them like an extension of her own body. Her hard-as-nails attitude can scare off some enemies before they even attack, but only small ones. She's not one to get distracted easily, and sometimes seems to have insight on an enemy she's never battled before...

Weaknesses: Somewhat of a self-created outcast, she has a hard time with teamwork and taking orders. Her neck is her weakest point, and she'll sometimes get worse wounds trying to prevent a minor one near her scar. The talking to herself thing, too, can get her into tricky situations, either making enough noise to attract things to attack her or getting in the way during a battle. Her long hair, too, is a problem, getting caught in the most inconvenient times.

History: She was found outside a sort of all-male warrior compound at toddler age, asleep and wrapped in a blanket. She had nothing on her but her baby clothes and the blanket, both of which have been lost with time. The head warrior made the call to accept her into the compound and raise her as they would any other child warrior. The other warriors were unsure at first, but as the girl grew and showed her willingness to learn, they accepted her as one of their own, and she became a respected member of the compound. When she was 18, there was an attack on the compound by an unknown enemy, and she was taken prisoner temporarily, along with several other of her warrior brothers. She had to watch as they were beheaded in front of her, and she was to be next. By some stroke of luck, a group of warriors from her compound came to her rescue just in time, just as the axe had broken her skin. The scar from her near-beheading is still there, along with the fear, and she spent a year just in rehabilitation from the shock of the encounter. But then she was back to training harder than ever, promising that she'd never let herself be threatened like that again. The master warrior of the compound, seeing her progress, sent her on a journey, a sort of 'go find yourself' deal, and she set off with only her sword, chain mail, and the clothes on her back. She met up with and joined the army of Aquariazzi, hoping that this was what her master sent her to do.

Up For Love: Yes, but the unlucky boy who goes for her will have a lot of chasing to do...

Other: She has a voice in her head that's not her own. It's sarcastic and has a tendency to know more than it lets on. It gives her advice, most of the time mere moments before it's needed, such as 'turn around' when a monster is pouncing on her or 'you're lost' right before she realizes she can't see the rest of the group. Her 'talking to herself'? She's really just talking to the voice, or arguing with it, or just plain telling it to shut up. It says things she's sometimes afraid to admit, and tells her of her repressed emotions. This can be considered a power, but it gives her no other help but mere insights, most of the time too late to be of much use.
Hmmm...this snake is called a "Water Moccasin" so in THEORY I should be able to strap them to my feet and cross this river like Jesus?

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Mon Oct 25, 2010 10:40 pm
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*Can i join as a healer Ish?*
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Mon Oct 25, 2010 11:40 pm
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Definately! (I thought I PM'd you! :O)
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

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Tue Oct 26, 2010 3:27 am
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Nope~! And okayy, I'll take the female if that's okayy (:
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Thu Oct 28, 2010 2:03 pm
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Alright guys, I want to start this on Saturday! Anybody who's profiles aren't up, (though I think most of you have them up already) please get them up there!
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

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