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Mon Apr 12, 2010 5:38 pm
curiousvampire says...



My very fist storybook ever!

During the summer your working at the most popular hotel on Hawaii called ' The Sunny Shores Beach Resort'. The only reason your actually there is to enter and win the title of 'Big Kahuna' and fifty million dollars at the surfing contest at the end of the summer. On the first day everyone meets up gaining rivals and friends- mostly friends.You'll be sharing a co-ed cabin not to far from the hotel and meet Mr. Walwyn, the hotel manager who's just hoping for you to mess up and fire you, so watch out. In between breaks and after work there is only drama and surfing to worry about, hook ups and break ups and guess what weekends off!

Rules
:arrow: No sex, but love is definitely allowed
:arrow: No god modding
:arrow: No killing other characters
:arrow:Allowed no more than two characters

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Name:
Gender:
Age:(16-19)
Where your from:(country, state, ect)
Appearance/picture: (when your working you wear the hotel uniform: white knit shirt and cargo pants for the guys and red skirts for the girls)
Appearance/picture of surf board:
Personality:
History:
job:
Up for love:
Other:

Jobs
:arrow:Bellhop
:arrow: waiter/waitress
:arrow: swim/surf instructors
:arrow: daycare worker
:arrow: tour guide (if your a tour guide you have to be Hawaiian native)
:arrow: maids/room service
Last edited by curiousvampire on Fri Apr 16, 2010 11:14 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Mon Apr 12, 2010 5:45 pm
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Name: Samantha Williams
Gender: female
Age:(16-19) 17
Where your from:(country, state, ect) Southern Georgia
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Appearance/picture of surf board:
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Personality: She’s really nice, although when it comes to surfing, nobody messes with her
History: she picked up surfing when her dad took her out when she was 9, he died 2 years late, and now she surfs to remember him.
job: swim instructor
Up for love: yes
Other: she had a scar from a bad surf accident on her right hip
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Mon Apr 12, 2010 6:30 pm
Day says...



Definitely going to post a profile for a guy later... So yea.
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Mon Apr 12, 2010 6:48 pm
curiousvampire says...



Name: Korie Takei
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Where your from: California
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Personality: very neutral and laid back most of the time, but when he's surfing he's as serious as can be.
History: An immigrant from North Korea his family has lived in California from since he was five and he first discovered surfing when he was ten and knew he was bi from since he was fifteen . He disagrees and argues with his parents about him surfing all day and his sexual orientation.
Job: surf instructor
Up for love: Yep
Other: Wants to be a professional surfer.
"I became insane,with long intervals of horrible insanity."

"Their ideology is that human nature is fundamentally evil.In other words, humans are evil from the day they are born."

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Mon Apr 12, 2010 7:21 pm
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Name: Justin Swift
Gender: Male
Age:(16-19)17
Where your from: Hawaii
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Appearance/picture of surf board:
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Personality: He is always carefree and almost all the time has a smile on his face.

History: Has been surfing in Hawaii since he was 10. He loves the island and surfing.

job: Tour Guide

Up for love: yes, but only with girls

Other: Wears a crescent moon necklace. Mostly surfs only for fun although he will compete in competitions occasionally.
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Fri Apr 16, 2010 11:03 pm
curiousvampire says...



Come on, we need more people, at least six to seven to move to the actually start the storybook, please join! Everything won't be about surfing or working manly teen angst. So check it out.
"I became insane,with long intervals of horrible insanity."

"Their ideology is that human nature is fundamentally evil.In other words, humans are evil from the day they are born."

"Human is beatiful. Perfect is boring."
  





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Sat Apr 17, 2010 12:00 am
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Name: Natalia Petrov (Nat)
Gender:Female
Age:18
Where your from: Russia
Appearance/picture:
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Appearance/picture of surf board:
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Personality: Nat is a clever girl with big dreams, but a heart to match. Nat is okay wheter she wins or looses, she is just glad she tries. She always has a nice thing to say about a person, and doesn't judge.
History: She grew up living a poor life in northern russia. But when she turned 15 her parents took her on a trip to southern Russia, where she learned to surfboard. Her parents sold there old house and bought a new one there. In her free time all she did was surf. She is just begining to learn english. She knows enough to get along, but not enough to give a lecture. She lived a poor life, but doesn't mind at all.
job:maid
Up for love: Sure
Other: Speaks Russian when she is mad.
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Sat Apr 17, 2010 1:14 am
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I'll join...It seems cool...

Name: Leigh (Pronounced Lee) Anderson

Gender:Female

Age:(16-19): 18

Where your from:(country, state, ect): California

Appearance/picture: (when your working you wear the hotel uniform: white knit shirt and cargo pants for the guys and red skirts for the girls): Image

Appearance/picture of surf board: Image

Personality: Leigh is very outgoing. She's a very loud person and she's proud of it. Leigh is a fun, happy person. She loves to be in the sun and she loves to laugh and have fun.

History: Leigh was born and raised in California. She has all brothers, four of them, and they all love surfing. All her brothers are older than her so she's very competitive. She came to Hawaii to have fun, surf, meet new people, and win.

job: surf instructor

Up for love:Sure

Other:None
Last edited by fictionfanatic on Sun Apr 18, 2010 6:38 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Sat Apr 17, 2010 1:56 am
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Hahahaha. You got this idea from that show 16, now didn't you?
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Sat Apr 17, 2010 3:31 am
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Dreamy115 wrote:Hahahaha. You got this idea from that show 16, now didn't you?

Did you mean the surfing one? Because 16 is at the mall I believe and then the other one created by the same people is at the beach.
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Sat Apr 17, 2010 5:09 pm
curiousvampire says...



DayDreams wrote:
Dreamy115 wrote:Hahahaha. You got this idea from that show 16, now didn't you?

Did you mean the surfing one? Because 16 is at the mall I believe and then the other one created by the same people is at the beach.



"Well, actually I did get the idea from the surfing one, but also 16 and the Total drama series to be be exact.

Okay it looks like things are picking up so I'll make another character.

Name: Darren Sanchez
Age:19
gender: male
From: Columbia
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Personalty: out going and fun to hang with; friendly.
History: When he was only six his father ran away with another woman and his mother decided to move to Florida after the fiasco for a better life. There his mother remarried a doctor; a man which he doesn't really get along with. After the marriage he was usually home by himself more often so when twelve he learned how to surf on his own. This is his second time working at the resort and entering the contest. The last time he came in third place this year he's here to win and dominate the competition.
Job:Waiter:
up for love:yea'
other:other than surfing he's a really good cook.
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Sun Apr 18, 2010 12:01 am
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Name: Katrina Dockstader

Gender: Female

Age:17

Where your from: Germany (but speaks fluent english, since she lived in Florida for a while)

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Personality: Katrina is perfectly nice, if you don't bug her. She is kind and can joke, but she can also be very proud and competitive. She is good with kids, and always has been. She is very protective as well.

History: Katrina was born as the oldest, in a family of eight kids. She took surfing up after her family moved to Florida two years before she went to Hawaii to go to the surf competition. She has been surfing and taking care of kids ever since.

job: Day Care

Up for love: Yes
Sorrow lasts through this night
I'll take this piece of you,
and hold for all eternity
For just one second I felt whole... as you flew right through me.


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Sun Apr 18, 2010 1:21 pm
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Will we be starting shortly?
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Sun Apr 18, 2010 2:15 pm
ToritheMonster says...



DayDreams wrote:
Dreamy115 wrote:Hahahaha. You got this idea from that show 16, now didn't you?

Did you mean the surfing one? Because 16 is at the mall I believe and then the other one created by the same people is at the beach.


Oh yeah. That one. In my mind, they're the same.
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Sun Apr 18, 2010 2:17 pm
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Name: Tatiana "Tie" Leopard
Gender: female
Age:17
Where your from: Spain
Appearance/picture:
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Appearance/picture of surf board: furthest to the left:
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Personality:Tatiana is all about taking risks and having fun. She'd take wasabi over grilled cheese any time, and would rather go sky diving than watch TV. She loves to have fun, but tends to get a little pushy. She might try to make you do something you don't want to do.
History:She gre up in spain, and moved to Hawaii when she was 13. She's had experience surfing all around the world, and loves to be in the water. She lives with her parents and their dog, Chipo. She speaks fluent and hardly accented English and fluent Spanish.
job:Swim instructor
Up for love:sure
Other:She loves staying up really late and then sleeping in, So she's usually late for work.
Last edited by ToritheMonster on Wed Apr 21, 2010 8:28 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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