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Breezes and Cranes



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Sun Nov 27, 2005 5:50 pm
ConvolutedEmpty says...



The cranes had lights in them. They spun from their hanging place on the lantern, guided by the slightest of breezes, to twirl brightly and haunt the darkness with their gentle light.

It looked like they were flying.

They’d been here forever and he’d scarcely ever notice them now. He’d glance at them, once in while, acknowledging their soft and warning presence. He saw how they caught the wind and made it visible even to him, who couldn’t really see them anyways.

But then he’d dismiss them again, but only because they’d been there forever.

He had other things to worry about. Like the wad of bills lying at his feet.

He had, in total, three hundred and eighty-nine dollars, fifty cents. The bills looked obscenely bright under the warm light of his porch, pressed down by his seeking, desperate fingers on to the mouldy gray-green of the floor beneath him.

His figure was barely recognizable where it crouched, his entire body curled into itself, a position of universal self preservation. Darkened clothing whispering over tanned, but goosebumped skin.

It was as much the exhiliration, the anxiety, as the cold.

It was late summer…. Nothing was warm anymore.

Not the ocean, not the sun, not the smiles of the girls who’d roll over sand, naked, with him, once or twice, before disappearing into the past to make way for a new conquest.

All he had now, though, were his bills. Four fifties, ten twenties, three tens, one five, two toonies. A quarter and twenty five cents worth in pennies. Numbers that meant little to nothing in word, a much to everything when in hand.

All else he may have had left were stamps, an old, chewed up pen, dry and unusable, a roll of weed, which he wasn’t likely to touch – ever again – and a couple of red dice.


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Words are spilling out like endless rain into a paper cup, they slither while they pass. They slip away across the universe... Pools of sorrow, waves of joy are drifting thorough my open mind possessing and caressing me..
  





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Tue Nov 29, 2005 4:46 am
zelithon says...



Dice.
The only sure way to lose or gain. Dave had lost alot lately. Too much.
Adults are just obsolete children, and to hell with them!
-Dr.Suess

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Fri Dec 02, 2005 10:12 pm
Nymph says...



He paused to consider his options.

Go back - no it was too late for that now.

Stay put - not if he wanted to survive.

The only thing for it was to go forward into the unknown. Maybe this was the best option. At least the unknown is somewhere to hide from the world, but there was no getting away from himself.

( :roll: It's an atempt anyway..)
  








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