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Sat Jan 05, 2008 5:33 am
RoryLegend says...



*so i have only actaully started 2 storybooks and they kinda lasted but ended up dieing because people stopped posting =[ so don' tlet this one die please!*

PLOT: On January 1st 2121 everyone in the world wakes up in someone else's body. No one is quite sure why but there are undreground rumors of an experimental drug being tested by government scientists that became an airborne virus and infected everyone. Obviously all hell breaks loose and chaos is everywhere. Although a group of people ban together to fix everything, put everyone back in their respective body, and get to the bottom of what happened.
*note this is set in the future so make it futuristic!!!! <sp>

You can use my character profile as an example if you want.. but you are probably so smart you can make a profile all by yourself!

Profile:
original body:
name: Reese Gerund
appearance: long dark red hair, blue eyes, slender build, pale complextion.
age: 20
occupation: journalist

New body:
name: MJ Young
appearance: blonde hair, green eyes, very skinny, tan
age: 23
occupation: model
name: MJ
Last edited by RoryLegend on Sun Jan 06, 2008 3:55 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Sat Jan 05, 2008 4:09 pm
Rydia says...



Hmmm, this could be pretty interesting. Okay, I'm in.

Original body:

Name= Alexia
Gender= Female or sort of... you'll see what I mean ;)
Nickname= Alex
Age= 24
Appearance= Long, light brown hair and hazel eyes.

New body:

Name= Unknown
Gender= Male
Age= About 18
Appearance= Spiky black hair with a green streak down the middle. Deep blue eyes. Left ear pierced three times. A stud in the first hole and a chain between the top and second hole. Feel free to fall in love with him and give my girl an awkward situation ;)

Personality= Kind, gentle, romantic, always falling in love.

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Sat Jan 05, 2008 4:15 pm
TNCowgirl says...



Original body:

Name= Kenldal
Gender= Female (Total tomboy)
Age= 17
Appearance= Long, black hair and blue eyes. Tan complextion

New body:

Name= Trinity
Gender= Female
Age= 18
Appearance= Long blond hair, sharp blue eyes, pale complextion,

Personality= Preppy, daddy's girl, rich,


I'm up for her falling in love, but it will be Kendal's personality
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Sun Jan 06, 2008 3:58 am
RoryLegend says...



e should wait for a couple more people to join before we start.
All you need is 20 seconds of insane courage, and I promise you something great will come of it.

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Sun Jan 06, 2008 4:48 am
Loose says...



eee! I'll join! =D

Old body:
Name: Saxon Wills
Gender: Male
Age: 73
Appearance: Grey hair past his ears, green-grey eyes, white, wrinkled skin, scar above his left eyebrow.
Occupation: Retired, but once worked in the navy.
Extra information: Diagnosed with aggressive prostate cancer a week before the switch and refused treatment. Doctors said he had no more than two weeks to live. His wife is no longer alive, hence the refusal.
Personality: Wise, caring, mature.

New body:
Name: Samantha (last name unknown)
Gender: female
Age: 22
Appearance: Olive skin, large brown eyes, thick black hair.
Occupation: Unknown.
Personality: Mysterious.
  





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Sun Jan 06, 2008 6:09 am
RoryLegend says...



Haha that's really funny!
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Sun Jan 06, 2008 6:40 am
Loose says...



... what is?
  





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Sun Jan 06, 2008 7:17 am
Bella says...



QUESTION: If the person has a mental illness, like alzheimers (sp) or such, do they still have it when they switch bodies?

Old Body~
Name: Bella
Age: 102
Appearance: Old, and rather wrinkly XD She has no use of her legs, and is in a rest-home. Her hair is short, grey, and curly. Her eyes are dark brown.
Occupation: none
Facts: Husband died when she was 87, and she misses him horribly. At the same time, she would've loved to have moved on, if she wasn't so...elderly.


New Body~
Name: Isabella (ironic coincidence)
Age: 16
Appearance: Long, orange hair (think Paramore). Vibrant green eyes. Is tall, pretty skinny, and fairly athletic.
Occupatoin: Works at the bookstore after school
Facts: Has a boyfriend, (Kitty's character perhaps?), and is very happy with life. Has big plans for her future.


Personality: Very booksmart, but has little common sense. Is horribly klutzy, but somehow manages to be good at sports. Is very wild, and likes to confuse people. Is optimistic, stubborn, and rebellious.
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

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Sun Jan 06, 2008 7:30 am
RoryLegend says...



I thought the old guy turning into a young girl was funny. Um I dont think they would still have the disease because the diseases are in the brain or body and if you no longer have the brain or body you could no longer have the disease.
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Sun Jan 06, 2008 7:44 am
Bella says...



Okay, in that case hte older form of Bella has Alzheimers, and is slowly forgetting everything about her life...
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Sun Jan 06, 2008 3:49 pm
Rydia says...



Yay, I get two girls =) I don't think past relationships between the new bodys would be known Bella but feel free to have your character fall in love with mine. And Kendal's personality is fine TN. I think my character is going to be a bit too embarressed to admit she's a girl at first. When do we start?
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Sun Jan 06, 2008 6:47 pm
TNCowgirl says...



**What if the person that they switched bodies died and then your original body died, wouldn't you stay in the same body. **
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Mon Jan 07, 2008 4:14 am
RoryLegend says...



i think so.. because if your original body died you wouldn't have a body to go back to.. unless when the switch back was made your body was no longer dead but the other person's was.
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Mon Jan 07, 2008 4:16 am
Loose says...



Makes it all the more interesting for me, doesn't it :D

I have the whole story line planned in my head.

**waits until the story book actually starts**
  





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Mon Jan 07, 2008 4:33 am
RoryLegend says...



we can start whenever..
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