Young Writers Society

Rated R (No vulgar language)



I'm new this is my first story i hope you like it.If there are any errors
in it please PM me.Thank you




This story is about four children who went to a country called Urenasca which was unknown to all others. They didn't tell their parents where they where going. They got to know about this country from the Internet in a site which mysteriously asked for them to look straight into the computer screen which them emitted a strange light and sucked them into the computer and teleported them into another country. The country had no humans. It was inhabited by unknown creatures. They had to defeat a witch who ruled an evil reign in an ice realm. They obtained special powers by a warlock.





Rules

1.No killing other characters.
2.You can either choose the children as your characters or choose the witch or a unknown creature or an evil creature.
3.No God characters.
4.If you start posting there is no going back until the story finishes
5. The following points must be included in your character profile.

Character profile



Name
Race
Power
Weapons
Appearance
Personality




My character profile



Name - Neon
Gender - Female
Race - Human
Power - All elements of Ice/water
Weapons - Bow and Arrow
Appearance - Dyed red color hair, Green eyes
Personality - Friendly, very posh.




Story



"Why did you give us powers?" asked Neon
"Because you are the only one who could kill the witch. You were chosen" said the warlock
"You mean we were chosen by the Internet?" asked one of the children
"the what?" asked the warlock
"we forgot that you aren't in 2007" whispered Neon
"Now go" said the warlock and disappeared
"now what asked Neon from her friends[/b]

Hey clover, I toatally want to get in on this but I need to think for a while on what my characters are gonna be. I would be more desciptive in the intro as to who the children are and how exactly they got sucked into the internet. They shouldn't be so accepting of this new world.

I would be scared out of my mind. Okay, I'll be back to post a character. BTW, I wouldn't make it an evil ice queen. Sounds to Chronicles of Narnia. I'll help you brianstorm if you want but I think you have something here.

~Pol

**oh, this looks good, I wanna join, lol**

Name:Slade
Gender:Male
Race:Human
Power:All Elements of Fire and wind
Weapons:Long sword and throwing knives
Appearance:Before they got feakishly sucked into the computer, Slade was a very good athlete, and was always on the football field, so he was extreamily well built. His hair was short, brown and spiky. His eyes looked gold at a glance, but were actually green and brown(hazel)
Personality:Friendly, outgoing, the leader type, and talkative.



**if theres anything wrong with my character, just pm me, ok? I wont care if there is something wrong**

Name: Terry
Race: Human
Power: Elements of water only
Weapons: bow and arrows, double-bladed staff, katana, and throwing knives
Appearance: Long, waist-length, curly, golden-blonde hair, usually pulled into a loose half-bun; crystal-blue eyes; light tan skin. Terry was once a cheerleader, but quit and joined the swim team. She has an athletic build.
Personality: She's a fun-going person, loves to laugh and joke around, but is serious at times

**me wanna join**




profile

Name - Zack
Gender - Male
Race - Elf
Power - Basic and advanced magic. Weapons seem to submerge into the skin and stay in the body until needed.
Weapons - Long sword, bow(and arrows obviously) Daggers
Appearance - When the children got sucked into this world he was the one who made peace with them and the other creatures(does that answer your question Poltergiest?)
Personality - Friendly, peace full, but when needed very aggressive, a very changing personality

"Well now we get to the witch" replied Slade
they walked outside to find Zack waiting for them patiently.
"So did you get some answers?" he asked
They shook their heads.
"Then what what is about you defeating the ice Queen" asked Zack smiling
"You listened?" asked Neon surprised
Zack pointed at his ears which seemed to glow and nodded.
"Basic magic of enhancing your hearing" Zack said
"well come on then lets go" said Terry
"go where?" asked Neon
"To the witches palace" said Terry
"Why" asked Neon
"To save us" replied Zack

Name- Bella
Race- Human
Power- Just random stuff; Telekinesis and telepathy among other things.
Weapons- two swords, which she wears as earrings because she shrunk them with magic.
Appearance-purple hair that is cut short and rather messy. Amazing, violet eyes. Is tall, and wears blue jeans all the time.
Personality- Very hyperactive, and spunky. Outgoing and couragous, but rather annoying at time.


"Wait, are you thinking that we're just going to waltz right into the witch's palace?" Bella asked, looking at the other humans, and the elf.

"Yeah, pretty much," one of the boys replied.

"That won't work!" Bella exclaimed, goign into one of her crazy rants. "Come on, don't you read?"

"Nope." Bella sighed loudly.

"We need a plan of action; we can't just walk right in and say 'hey, we're here to kill you. Hold still so I can shoot some sort of crazy spell at you and you can die and we can all live happily ever after'." Bella sat back down and waited for someone else to speak.

"And what do you suppose us to do Miss i-know-everything?" asked Zack angrily standing
"We need a plan" repeated Bella
"And you will make it" completed Zack
"People, we don't have to fight here" said Slade
"Slade's right" said Zack sitting down again

"No, I won't make the plan, Zack," Bella said angrilly. "We should all make the plan. That way it'll work around our strengths and weaknesses."

"There's one small problem," Zach noted sarcastically. "We have no idea what the inside of the palace looks like."

"We need someone with a good sense of stealth and flexibility." Terry said.

((Sorry, writer's block...))

"Couldn't we pay off a guard or something?" Bella suggested.

"And where do you suppose we'll get the money for that?" Zach argued.

"I didn't hitnk of that yet. And why do you keep shooting down my ideas?" Bella snapped angrilly.