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Wed May 23, 2007 4:26 pm
MadHatter says...



Well, for those people that like to talk about stories, this is a place where you can disscuss what you want to happen on "Griffin University" (Such as schedules, friends, and prefrences)
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Wed May 23, 2007 4:32 pm
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Ok. what are those sketchy beast things called. I have taken to just callling then Beasts
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Wed May 23, 2007 4:56 pm
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Call them Kyrille. Just made that up, but it could work. What are they here for?

The noise (I put that in, clever me, not) hurts like it's something getting into the riders' and griffins' minds. How about it's some powerful person who wants to take over the world and wants to enlist the Griffin Riders as his personal army to help him. The noise is him trying to get inside their minds to control them so they will fight for him. He hasn't perfected the technique yet, and all it does is hurt their minds and not fully possess them.

If we call this bloke who's doing this simply "The Controller," I'll do him in the storybook. That is, if no one else wants to.

How do people feel about that idea? The beasts/Kyrille? are coming to scout out the university and find out the lay of the land and all that. Soon they'll be coming back and bring the Controller with them so he can take over the whole university.

Howzat?
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Wed May 23, 2007 9:03 pm
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hmm...the controller sounds cliche to me. Kyrille is cool. i made it so that they came out of the earth. is that good with everyone? the one who's controlling them could have like an evil underground kingdom. duh duh duh. muhahahahaha.
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Thu May 24, 2007 9:43 am
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I like Kyrille.. It sound cool. But the evil beasts scouting out a place for mass invasion has been done before. Maybe they're something that has escaped from under the University somewhere. One of the Faculty was doing secret experiments but it got out of control? How about that?

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Fri May 25, 2007 2:27 am
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oooh. that's cool. an evil faculty member, and maybe he was experiementing on a few griffins too. maybe someone's griffin goes out of control during the battle b/c one of the staff injected him with some random chemical that's making them go crazy...
k, now i'm getting ahead of myself. but whatcha think?
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Fri May 25, 2007 1:23 pm
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It sounds cool. But i've got to think of a way to reintergrate my character into the story because I haven't posted for a while. mmmm.....

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Sat May 26, 2007 9:09 pm
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Actually, what I had intended the creatures to be was sort of a different species of Griffin. Griffinous-lupus (The scientific name.) and they have a sort of riders that aren't like humans, but you know. The controller idea is cool but not an evil member. That's been done before. But I got to go. My dad's yelling at me. See yeah.
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Sat May 26, 2007 9:47 pm
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Ah well, can't contribute anymore. I killed off Robyn. C'est la vie. Someone had to die. Hope y'all have a good time with this.
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Sun May 27, 2007 7:31 pm
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wait. she died? oh! i thought her griffin died! hey, we kinda need to get all the characters together don't we? i mean, they're kinda doing their own things. can they interact a bit more? or is that against the rules?
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Mon May 28, 2007 10:50 am
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NO! She died. :twisted: First time I ever killed off one of my characters. Nasty me.

No, oughtn't to be agin the rules, after all, the whole point is for the characters to have action together and all.
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Tue May 29, 2007 7:43 pm
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Okay, I'm getting all the characters together in my next post so don't worry.
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Wed May 30, 2007 1:34 am
Alice says...



Hi i just joined!!! my characters not a student but a hunter of the wolf griffin things!
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Thu May 31, 2007 12:08 am
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okay let's all find out why the creatures are attacking so yeah...i'm doing my Pre-Algebra homework so bye.
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