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Thor the Younger



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Tue Nov 13, 2018 6:45 pm
FireSpyGirl says...



((Let me know if My characters become to tragic or overbearing. Shiane's eye color also changes depending on her mood.))

Shiane shook her head and the cloud lifted. Her eyes went back to their shocking electric blue.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Tue Nov 13, 2018 6:56 pm
fatherfig says...



Loki looks to Alia and Elia.
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig





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Fri Nov 16, 2018 2:21 pm
Bellarke says...



"Loki, why is thor shoving a carrot up his nose?" Elia covers her mouth.


"Thor, stop! That is gross!" Alia cries.
“Who we are and who we need to be to survive are very different things.”

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Fri Nov 16, 2018 2:33 pm
fatherfig says...



Loki gags looking away.

(Ewwww nasty baby stuff!!! this is the only reason i don't like kids Lol ))
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig





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Fri Nov 16, 2018 2:35 pm
Bellarke says...



Elia laughs, and walks over by Thor, and grabs the carrot from him, and sticks it my his face. "Dont stick this in your nose."


Alia giggles behind her hand...


((XD I like kids from 2-5 Thats it!))
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Fri Nov 16, 2018 2:41 pm
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Shiane laughed.

"That's not a healthy idea, Thor." She said, taking off her leather gauntlets.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Fri Nov 16, 2018 2:56 pm
Bellarke says...



"Eww! Thor! You got boogies on it!" Alai points to the carrot, and the boogers on it.
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Fri Nov 16, 2018 7:01 pm
fatherfig says...



Loki leaves the room totally done.

(He is like 15 in this)
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Fri Nov 16, 2018 7:43 pm
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Shiane watched him go and then turned back to the two little ones.
"What do you like to do Thor?"
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Tue Dec 04, 2018 7:05 pm
Bellarke says...



"I want foood!" Alia yells.

"Calm down." Elia says.
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Mon Dec 10, 2018 3:05 pm
Bellarke says...



@269609? Did you forget about this?
“Who we are and who we need to be to survive are very different things.”

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Mon Dec 10, 2018 3:15 pm
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Thor grins, "Fight and make Loki go EWWWWW! GWooossss!" Thor starts giggling and throws away the carrot.
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Mon Dec 10, 2018 3:17 pm
Bellarke says...



"FOOD FIGHT?!" Alia yells.

"NO!"

Then a carrot goes flying towards loki.
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Mon Dec 10, 2018 3:27 pm
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Shiane flung out her hand and the carrot changed it's course and moved towards her. She put her palm down and it laid on the floor.

"That isn't the best idea, Thor." She said gently.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Mon Dec 10, 2018 3:32 pm
Bellarke says...



"But it was funny!" Alia yells.

"Alia!" Elia yells, "Do not do that again."

"Okay, Old woman."
“Who we are and who we need to be to survive are very different things.”

~Bellamy Blake








Stories don't end because you stopped paying attention.
— SJ Whitby