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Burning Rejection



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Thu Apr 05, 2018 6:30 pm
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fatherfig says...



Uh,Oh, My naaaaaammmmmmmmeee.......
"Uh, Link...", He looks up flipping the hair out of his face and looking at her teary eyed.
Link what the hellll..... Now may we meet Zelda Loki helluuu SOOOOO Original!
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig





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Thu Apr 05, 2018 6:35 pm
Danni88 says...



Julia moves closer, purposefully not looking at Izabelle. "Are you OK? Did this girl do something?"
Mmm, teatime. I fancy reviews and chips.

Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. Inside of a dog, it's too dark to read. - Groucho Marx


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Thu Apr 05, 2018 6:39 pm
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Loki looks up sensing bitchines 3 o'clock,"No, she is helping me really.... I'm lost out here I'm from - Alaska."
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig





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Thu Apr 05, 2018 6:40 pm
Danni88 says...



Spoiler! :
omg lol


"Nice to meet you. I'm Julia. Are you a new student?"
Mmm, teatime. I fancy reviews and chips.

Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. Inside of a dog, it's too dark to read. - Groucho Marx


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Thu Apr 05, 2018 6:42 pm
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Spoiler! :
gtg guys brb tomorrow probs
Mmm, teatime. I fancy reviews and chips.

Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. Inside of a dog, it's too dark to read. - Groucho Marx


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Thu Apr 05, 2018 7:08 pm
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God Its Julia. I think as I look at Link, who is still in her car.

"So can I uhh... can I have my car back now? I need to get home."

Then I remember:

And, I am out of money so I can't buy an apartment and, I, I must have lost my car to I thought this one was mine." JEEZUS! WHAT THE FUCK DO I DO???!!!!


"Where are you staying?" I say to him, and then look at Julia, "What are you doing here again? Arent you supposed to be in tutoring?"
“Who we are and who we need to be to survive are very different things.”

~Bellamy Blake





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Fri Apr 06, 2018 9:43 am
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"None of your business," I snap. "Something happened and I had to cancel."
Mmm, teatime. I fancy reviews and chips.

Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. Inside of a dog, it's too dark to read. - Groucho Marx


Queen Danni of Awesomeland x





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Fri Apr 06, 2018 12:18 pm
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I sniff, "Well I was staying in my car but, Oh god...... I'm screwed....", I really do need somewhere to stay....
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig





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Fri Apr 06, 2018 12:36 pm
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I spot an opportunity. "There's a spare room in my flat. You could stay with me tonight, and I could help find you somewhere tomorrow."
Mmm, teatime. I fancy reviews and chips.

Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. Inside of a dog, it's too dark to read. - Groucho Marx


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Fri Apr 06, 2018 12:44 pm
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I look over at the girl unsure, how the hell do I get out of this she seems interested but not in my well being, fuck and how do I get her not to like me while keeping the other girl interested I say the first thing that comes to my mind, "Fuck, my retainer was in the car with my glasses!"
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig





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Fri Apr 06, 2018 12:58 pm
Bellarke says...



"Now can you get the hell outta my car so that I can go home?" I open the back door, and pull out my canvas painting.

Thor looks back with ferocious eyes.
“Who we are and who we need to be to survive are very different things.”

~Bellamy Blake





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Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:07 pm
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Damn, "Okay I guess.", I really didn't want to have to do this but I guess I have to go home with that thi- other girl..... I get out of her car and then see he Thor picture does that creepy fuck have to follow me every where that girl Likes HIM EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWwwwwwww, what the hell is wrong with her! I get caught up in my thoughts shocked staring at the picture.
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig





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Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:10 pm
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"Umm...I need some help taking these canvases back into the art room, could you help me? I'll buy you a coffee." I look at his (Blue or green) eyes.
“Who we are and who we need to be to survive are very different things.”

~Bellamy Blake





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Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:20 pm
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I laugh scornfully. "That's the worst picture I've ever seen."
Inside, I am thinking Why does Isabelle have to be so damn good at art?!
Mmm, teatime. I fancy reviews and chips.

Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. Inside of a dog, it's too dark to read. - Groucho Marx


Queen Danni of Awesomeland x





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Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:22 pm
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"Well, at least I can draw a circle." I say, as I look at the 4 canvases that i have.
“Who we are and who we need to be to survive are very different things.”

~Bellamy Blake








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