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Fri Jan 11, 2019 4:45 pm
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Cleo looked at her goat. It's golden brown eyes blinked at her. "I'll name you Hershey." She looked at Hope. "That way they go together. Do you mind?"
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

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Fri Jan 11, 2019 4:47 pm
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"Not at all! I think it's cute!" She smiled at Hershey and then at Cleo.
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Fri Jan 11, 2019 4:48 pm
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Cleo bit into her chocolate bar. "Let's do this" She said.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Fri Jan 11, 2019 4:56 pm
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"Yeah! Chocolate, put the chocolate in my mouth!"
Chocolate took the chocolate and threw it into Hope's mouth (Idk XD).
"Leds do dis!" She said while eating.
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Tue Jan 15, 2019 3:09 pm
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Starlon pushed open the door and they walked through. People stopped whatever they were doing to stare. Excited whispers ran through the crowd. Cleo ducked her head and kept walking.

"That must be the sorceress of eternal pain!" One person cried out. "And her friend, the girl who never loses faith!" Another cried out.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Tue Jan 15, 2019 3:22 pm
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"Eternal pain? S'that me?"
She looked at Cleo, then remembered something.
"No, wait- You're the sorceress of eternal pain! 'Cause I'm your friend... You're the sorceress, not me... and... my name is Hope. But why 'Eternal Pain'?"
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Tue Jan 15, 2019 3:37 pm
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"I'll explain later." Cleo replied, a little startled at what she had been called. She knew why, but how did these people know? They stopped at a huge gate covered with gold and intricately carved dragons of all sorts covered it. The two fire dragons guarded the gate. They bowed to Starlon and his companions and opened the gate.
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Tue Jan 15, 2019 3:43 pm
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"WoooOOOOOoooow!!!"
It was beautiful inside. A palace filled with magnificent decorations and flowers, lights and even a fountain, covered in silver and pouring gold.
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Tue Jan 15, 2019 3:45 pm
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Clio's mouth dropped open. She instantly closed it however, for sitting under a blossoming cherry tree, was an immense golden dragon. Starlon approached him and bowed. Clio followed his lead. This must be the dragon king!
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Tue Jan 15, 2019 3:49 pm
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"Why are you bowing at a statue? Is it a God or something? Should I do the same?"
She was confused, but still chewing a bit of her chocolate, Chocolate in her arms.
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Tue Jan 15, 2019 3:54 pm
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The golden dragon moved. It sounded like stone cracking. "Rise up, Clio." The voice was rusty, like it had not been used in a long time. He turned his head to Hope. "I am the dragon king, turned into a statue for these last five years. Your coming as freed me. I know all that has happened and all that is going on. I could still see and hear." He stretched his wings. "That feels AMAZING!"
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Tue Jan 15, 2019 3:59 pm
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"Wow... You're cool!" Hope said, looking at the dragon.
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Tue Jan 15, 2019 4:01 pm
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Clio nodded in agreement, still stunned. "Starlon will show you to your room. I'm sorry, but I must move around. I will send for you when I come back." He flew up into the air.
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"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Fri Jan 18, 2019 4:31 pm
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((Fantascifi66))
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

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Fri Jan 18, 2019 4:33 pm
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((Yeah hi thanks))
"Awesome! I wonder what our rooms look like!" She said, looking around excitedly for little details so she could really see the place. She followed Starlon.
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