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Mon Jul 30, 2007 6:27 am
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*Ah!*Screams in frustration* I cant think of a thing! *Curses* i'm sorry! I wish i could post! Someone post how we decide to leave and go and do...whatever it is we're gonna do!*Fends off writers block with a fountain pen*Like my avatar says, "OMG! ONOZ!"*
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Mon Jul 30, 2007 1:35 pm
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*Got nothin.*
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Wed Aug 01, 2007 5:24 am
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***Me neither. This is really REALLY bad***
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Wed Aug 01, 2007 2:52 pm
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(Wait, this is a fantasy world where anything can happen, right? If anything can happen, then what's stopping us from having a visitor from another planet crash land on ours? It would jumpstart the storybook and it'll start us off on our storyline.)
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Wed Aug 01, 2007 4:33 pm
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I haven't added anything in a while and was wondering if I could be the visitor. My characters kinda... Not really dead but I can't think of him doing anything else. Is that okay?

~Pol
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Wed Aug 01, 2007 7:01 pm
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I don't know. Ayumi, is it OK?
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Wed Aug 01, 2007 8:58 pm
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Tyrin (how about not having some character from outerspace come, now we must quest after the library of forgotten knowledge :P)

"Greetings adventurers!" I said as I changed form. I stepped forward and laughed at their shocked expressions, "the library of Aranu is not far! My people knew of it and learned much from its vast knowledge in the early days. Now it is buried under much carnage, but there is a way. My people used to venture there so much that they, along with the people of that kingdom, built a passage from my people's old village to the library. The passage remains, but it is not safe."

I looked around at their faces and then continued.

"This library has such knowledge in it, that if only we could get it out to the world, everyone could be a powerful wizard, no one would die from simple accidents!"

I shut my mouth at that, memories filling my mind. Suddenly I saw someone approaching; it was that guard.

"I'm coming too," he said glaring at me, "but I don't like the sound of this!"
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Wed Aug 01, 2007 9:46 pm
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That was sort of the idea. Lol.

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"Then why are you coming?" I asked, observing the stranger. He was tall with wide, sloping shoulders and dishevelled, brown hair. His eyes were two shiny, black coals as he glared across at the dryad.

"My reasons are my own," The man answered in a cold, hollow voice.

"Care to share them?" Karana prompted but her words were met with silence.

"Are we going then?" Ryouku asked, shuffling nervously.
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The man stayed silent, indicating that he wasn't going to share anything with her. Julia turned to Ryouku and said, "Yes, we are."

Ryouku rustled his wings and said, "Good. Now, let us begin our trip. I will be flying and keeping my eyes open for possible threats so we don't get ambushed. Who'd like to come along?"
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Wed Aug 01, 2007 10:57 pm
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As the group bagan to move Ralo dropped to the back, keeping one hand on his sword. He glared at each of thier back and then his eyes resting on the dryad.

He narrowed his eyes but continued moving. He glanced up at the dragon soaring far above in the air. He couldn't help but smile, a very small smile.

~Pol~


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Nice job. That really did jumpstart the storybook! I'm gonna start a discussion thread so we won't waste posts on here...



"Dragon," Karana began. "Um...what's your name?"

"Ryouku."

"Ah, majestic."

"Why, thank you."

"Why do you seek this...library? And I've never heard of dragon being so interested in the ways of mortals."

"That's actually a good question!"
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Thu Aug 02, 2007 4:34 am
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"HEY!!" called out Warren,"can i ride on your back again? It was actually quite fun, untill i fell off of course."

Ryouku didnt even glance in his direction."Curses." he muttered to himself

**sorry, thats all i got....:.(
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Thu Aug 02, 2007 4:48 am
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Luna shapeshifted into a dragon quickly and landed next to Warren. "You may ride on my back," she offered. He smiled (a rather cute smile, Luna thought to herself) and climbed onto her back. She took off into the sky, flying around in little circles and showing off quite a bit.
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Thu Aug 02, 2007 5:04 am
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Sonya glanced up at Luna circling in the sky, then to the others. She sighed and shrugged.

"Oh well. They would've found out sooner or later." she muttered to herself. She slipped into the shadows and quickly switched forms, becoming a red, fiery bird. She shook herself off and flapped her wings once, lifting into the air. She darted to Luna's side and flew along next to her, watching the other's reactions wearily.

*Thats all i've got. sorry!*
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I hope you don't mind if I join in.

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