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okay cool. Where should we take this quest. I mean for the trio that is. Should we bring them to Therigan's realm, {his kingdom} where all the villians are, or should they take a detour first?

not sure, I think about it. HMMMMMMMM

I reread the story. I mentioned us heading off towards Tearbed, the river city. Looks like were going there first.

Okay, off we go.

so you guys are take the detour right? I made Rin actually start the hunt for Therigan. hey matt? ummm......i made Therigan go to Tearbed too. is that okay? it might make for a very good confrontation with everybody. i just thought it would be kinda cool.

Yep, it's all good in the hood. I didn't mean to gang up on you black_wings. Sorry. Anyhoo, sorry I haven't posted, my mom's totally been strict with the computer time. Oh and I still don't really want Therigan to be Seriena's boss, if that's okay with you. Are you a procrastinator? Because you still haven't edited those posts yet...

Yes he is, and that stuff happens. don't worry.

okay I'll edit those posts. Sorry. I'm not a procrastinator as anthony called me, I've just been really busy. Finally stuff is slowing down and i can finally type.

Anyways, whats with your place holder post, i don't get it.

She did it so no one else would type until she posted.

gotcha I feel stupid now

Matt, can you read my second chapter please. No one else will.

haha, seriously? Of course I will.

Don't feel stupid...

Matt, I did a quik reedite, is it any better at all.

I'll check later, kind of can't right now.


Alrighty then, if were going to tearbed what are we going to do there? At first I was thinking, just kind of get the whole plot out their, have them lay down a plan, and then get attacked by the ronso's or something and make them leave town.

Alex could get a weapon and yeah thats about it.

Oh and anthony, we never said that they didn't like each other. THey never denied it, and stop trying to make Aro like me. He's an elf and as a weakeness i said he liked humans. It's gonna be obvious.


He's not like me anthony. He can be read like a book. Or at least somewhat...