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The Kill



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Wed Jul 01, 2009 12:22 am
TNCowgirl says...



**will you?**

She kissed him as he carried her back to the bed room and laid her back on it. She kept her arms wrapped around his neck kissing him passionatly.



*grrr*
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Wed Jul 01, 2009 12:33 am
October Girl says...



**Sorry, Yes Ma'am I will be :) my kids are at their grandmas for the day so I have no worries.**

Why did this feel so good to him? She was practically evidence to a crime and he was falling for her. He knew it was wrong but still it felt right. Before he knew it, it was over and done with...
We're meant to be one
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If I am the Sky
Then you are my star... ™





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Wed Jul 01, 2009 12:33 am
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**Sorry, Yes Ma'am I will be :) my kids are at their grandmas for the day so I have no worries.**

Why did this feel so good to him? She was practically evidence to a crime and he was falling for her. He knew it was wrong but still it felt right. Before he knew it, it was over and done with...
We're meant to be one
I know we are...
If I am the Sky
Then you are my star... ™





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Wed Jul 01, 2009 1:00 am
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**Sweet, I"m back. :D**

Caralina woke up the next morning curled up with Sterling's arms wrapped around her. She snuggled closer to him and kissed his chest, the first thing she saw. HE stirred a little and she smiled when his eyes opened.

"Morning." She whispered softly.
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Wed Jul 01, 2009 1:14 am
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Sterling wanted to bash his head with a bowling ball. How could he have been so stupid? He had just slept with a woman who wasn't his woman! How stupid was that?

"Good morning." he grumbled, but tried to keep a smiling face on.
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Wed Jul 01, 2009 1:18 am
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Caralina climbed out of the bed and pulled a big shirt on. "Not a morning person, eh?" SHe smiled. "I'll get some coffee going."

She didn't realize til she was in the kitchen it was the shirt Sterling had worn the day before. It still smelled strongly of him. She smield as she started the coffee and then some eggs and bacon.
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Wed Jul 01, 2009 1:25 am
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Sterling shut the bedroom door and locked it. Then he went into the master bathroom and shut and locked that door too. He called the Chief.

"Hey uh... Cheif?" Sterling sounded strained.

The Chief sighed on the other line. "How bad is it Pierce?"

"Bad enough to have slept with her." Sterling winced as the words came out.

"DAMNIT PIERCE!" The Chief yelled. "I can't handle this right now as a friend I'm rootin for ya as your boss I'm pissed I have to go."

Sterling came out of the bathroom and headed to the kitchen, she hadn't heard a thing... Good. He watched the way her hips swayed and he had to squeeze his eyes shut to forget that he had memorized her entire body last night. She look so... Natural in his shirt... And it had now become his favorite.
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Wed Jul 01, 2009 1:30 am
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Caralina turned around and jumped a little. "YOu decided to come out." She smiled pouring a mug of coffee. "Black?"

"Yup." He smiled taking it from her. She poured herself some and automatically grabbed the milk and poured it in her cup. "YOu still know what you like?"

"It was natural." She shrugged.
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Wed Jul 01, 2009 1:50 am
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He just stared.

"Maybe your getting your memory back." he shrugged.

"Maybe." she smiled

**Sorry :(**
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Wed Jul 01, 2009 2:11 am
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**Time Skip** (((I'm gonna have to do 4ish weeks, let me know if thats not ok THats when mornin sickness normally starts and all. :D )))

A month later they were still at the lake house. Sometimes Sterling would drive back and work on cases, but most of the time the case files were sent to him and he was good at solving them with what little he had.

Caralina woke up before Sterling for the past two days throwing up. She'd managed to keep him from knowing, hoping not to worry him.

It's just a stomach flu. She avoided any way of giving Sterling whatever she had. This morning wasn't any different. She woke up the normal time and made it to the bathroom, and she lost her dinner in the toilet. She moaned as she sat back against the wall taking a deep breath. She then flew forward and threw up again.

"You ok?" She jumped when she heard Sterling's groggy voice.
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Wed Jul 01, 2009 2:53 am
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Sterling was worried about her.

"C'mon we're going to the doctor." he said. "No one should be throwing up THAT much." He took her by the forearm and took her to the trailblazer.

"No." she moaned. "It's just a stomach flu. No doctors... Please?" she asked.

"No." He growled. "Your going." He actually picked her up and put her in the seat, he reached for the seat belt and in the process his hand slid over her stomach, it was slightly swollen. He pressed his hand tenderly against it. His face paled.

Within 10 minutes they were at the doctors...
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Wed Jul 01, 2009 2:58 am
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Caralina wrapped her arms around herself as they sat in the waiting room. "Please, can we just go home? I'll sleep it off."

"No, you can't sleep it off." He replied.

"How do you know, it's just the stomach flu or something." She replied pulling the coat she'd snagged otu of the car around her.

"Lina, your pregnate." He replied looking her in the eyes. She just started at him. Pregnate, she couldnt' be. She touched her stomach and frowned, she wasn't just gaining weight, was she?

"B-but...." She looked up at him.

"We didn't use protection, it just happened so fast I guess it slipped our minds." He replied with a shrug.

"Caralina." THe nurse called. She got up and started walking.

"Aren't you coming?" She asked looking at Sterling. He got up and put his hand on her back following her in to the room.

"Hello." THe doctor smiled walking in. "What seems to be the problem."

"I think she's pregnate." Sterling said after she didn't talk for a few minutes. "She thought she just had the flu or something."
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Wed Jul 01, 2009 3:04 am
October Girl says...



**Is the baby his or the killers? I'm now REALLY CONFUSED**
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Wed Jul 01, 2009 3:05 am
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**I don't know, we haven't decided. :P **
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Wed Jul 01, 2009 3:12 am
October Girl says...



**OK What do YOU think it should be? to me it really doesnt matter**
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