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the deathly vampire



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Sat Sep 08, 2007 10:52 pm
Bella says...



***Hey, I'm back. Random thing before I post ~ "He had fought the vampire until they were both dead." I thought we were going after the vamp that had killed her dad, but TN put in that it was already dead. So what're we doing now?***


Tristian sighed; he'd talk to his sister when they were alone. Until then, he figured it'd be best to change the subject.

"So...how's life been treating you, Lily?" he asked conversationally. She turned a shade of bright red and began stammering.

**Sorry, all iv'e got right now.***
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

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Sun Sep 09, 2007 5:13 am
sasquash says...



*Well, we could say that the other vamp was just one that died, he didnt really kill the father, it was me, but i made it look like it was him...or something like that, would that work? Sorry, i cant think of anything to write right now.*
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Sun Sep 09, 2007 11:21 am
TNCowgirl says...



**Yea, that works, **
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