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Sun Jan 06, 2019 4:35 pm
FireSpyGirl says...



Cleo smiled and scooted back some, and offered Hope a hand to help pull her up.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Sun Jan 06, 2019 5:48 pm
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She took it, and climbed onto the sragon.
"Let's go!"
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Mon Jan 07, 2019 2:08 pm
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Starlon made sure they were settled, then he stretched out his enormous wings and jumping in the air, flapped his wings hard and they were soon flying. Cleo let out a yell of excitement.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Mon Jan 07, 2019 2:36 pm
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"I NEED THIS ON EARTH!!! ALSO CANDY!!! IS THERE CANDY IN THIS WORLD?!?!!!" She screamed, actually concerned on this matter.
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Mon Jan 07, 2019 7:21 pm
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"Is that really a concern right now?" Cleo asked. "Besides, I'm sure there is some sort of version of candy."
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Mon Jan 07, 2019 7:59 pm
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"YAY!!! CAN'T WAIT TO TRY IT!!!"
She was shouting really loud, and was amused when should heard that Cleo didn't. Only because of that did she shout this time.
"OH! LOOK! LAND!!!"
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Fri Jan 11, 2019 3:30 pm
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Cleo screamed with joy as Starlon banked steeply and landed inside a high stone wall, but outside of a fortress/castle looking building. There were guards and dragons and shragons and little baby creatures and even a few dogs and cats around. Some were training, others were doing rounds, or eating or sleeping. Cleo suddenly realized that she was famished.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Fri Jan 11, 2019 3:34 pm
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"Sooooooooooo cuuuuuute!!!!!!!!!!!!!" She screamed, nearly falling off Starlon to run to the babies.
"But where are we?" She asked, nearly crushing a little white furry creature.
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Fri Jan 11, 2019 3:36 pm
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Starlon chuckled as the little furry white creature jumped up and licked her. "This is my home, the kingdom of the south. Come, I will take you to our ruler."
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Fri Jan 11, 2019 3:39 pm
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"Ok!" She said, still "Hugging" the creature. She followed Starlon.
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Fri Jan 11, 2019 3:44 pm
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Cleo walked a little behind, stomach hurting. Something bumped against her shoes and she looked down.

"ooooohh" She gasped, picking it up. It was a baby goat. "It's chosen you." Starlon said, "Just as the luck puppy chose Hope."

Cleo picked up the baby goat and it nuzzled her, grunting happily.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Fri Jan 11, 2019 3:48 pm
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"Ooooooooo a lucky puppy? What does it do?"
The puppy licked her.
"Besides being ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE!?!?!"
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Fri Jan 11, 2019 3:51 pm
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"It brings you luck. Nothing life-ending can happen to you as long as you have it and it has chosen you. It's like a luck dragon, except that it can't fly. All of the luck dragons are extinct though." Starlon stopped talking as a giant tear fell onto the ground. Cleo stepped up hugged him, rather awkwardly
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Fri Jan 11, 2019 3:54 pm
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"Ooooooo! I love this soo much!!!! Wait, what was that?" She pointed at the tear.
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Fri Jan 11, 2019 3:58 pm
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*starlon's tear.* Cleo put her answer silently, inserting it into Hope's mind.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart








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