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I posted for Alden, he's not happy that Valin's trying to turn the humans into elves, but he's going flying soon.

Hunter, the planned Seraph/Alden chat will need to happen later, possibly in transit.

I don't think the negotiations should happen, or at least go as well as Valin thinks, but maybe Sab's all ready got that angle covered.

Valin said south because thats where I thought the Elven camp would be. Maybe we had a mis communication. Oh well.


Heh. "Turning them into elves" That was not my point, the idea was so that they would learn how to fight against it once the Elves penetrated the lines, lol. But you covered it well, Grif.

Here's an idea for what happens next.

There are Priesthood lackeys and elven warriors in the cemetary--they are looking for something. We don't know what, yet. I don't see why we're waiting around, or why we're attempting to contact the elves.

Jack and I were discussing a way to get us out of the camp and into the cemetary in a hurry.

What if one of the party is going around telling everyone they will be spending another night in the camp? When they get to Henry, who's still very hotheaded about the whole thing, He runs off. Of course the guards won't stop him.

What if, when Alden runs off to scout, he find the elves have already broken camp, in essence ruining Valin's plan. It would show Valis is not infallible, but would also show Harris that he has the capacity to plan, even if it didn't turn out as well as he hoped.

The party would, naturally, want to get Henry back--so they track him to the graveyard.

Comment.

I likey. Carmenia is going to LAY ON the drama. Okay, I'm kidding.

But I do like it.

I like eet.

Lets do it. i'm honestly tired of the camping we've been doing. Also we haven't had a good fight in a while...

Sounds good to me!

I edited my post from earlier today. Grif, if anything doesn't work, just let me know.

I'll post it if you want. I love the idea.

'Kay, I posted. Carmenia traumatized. If Henry does love her, he's gonna hafta work his butt off trying to convince her.

Anyhoo, is Ursa still alive? Snoink hasn't posted since Jan twelfth...

I like what Grif called it in the chat -- Henry turning to the "dark side". He still likes Carmenia, but he's so tormented by hate and revenge that he has no way of realising or caring for it.

He's slipping into a painful circle, of death and more death. I like the idea of my character "falling". It's exciting.

Yes....search your feelings...you know it to be true...

That's cool...

I like the idea. I'm thinking that Urakii (my character) could be in Sedgeley when Henry gets there.

Ok guys, here's what's up with Seraph;

He ready to go, and the second he gets to his horse, he's off for the edge of camp. If no one else is there, he will go on ahead.

I'll be back at 10pm my time (that's Pacific Time, GMT-8) to make that post--that gives you all plenty of time to post what you want your characters to do.

I also had Sirloaz find Henry--if there's a problem with that, I give Grif permission to go ahead and delete that post.

Correction--I'll post whenever.