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Mon Aug 06, 2007 8:21 pm
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Daklana was digging her shoes into the dirt. She was trying to be interested in her shoes, while everyone was talking about what to do, so she wouldn't look at Zire.

"Ok." She said, standing up. They looked at her. "Let's just go to the archives so we can get somewhere. Because sitting here talking isn't getting us anywhere."

"Yes, but we must have a plan." Alexania said.

"Well I don't need one." Daklana said. "Anything I run into I can handle."

"You don't know what's out there. There are new things that ae stronger than you."

"Hah. Stronger than me? I-"

"Look! You think you're so great? Then leave! Go on by yourself. We don't need you." Tera snapped. They looked around and she was gone. Then Tera cried out. Daklana had bitten her. When she let up Tera fell to the floor. Daklana stood there and wiped her face with her hand.

"What? I can't leave on an empty stomach." She said and then left.
"After it happened I thought that I'd just try to live as normally as possible and bury it, but things like that don't stay buried. I didn't think it would, but it taints your whole life."

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Mon Aug 06, 2007 8:33 pm
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I made a move to chase after Daklana but Kate placed a hand on my shoulder.

"We're better off without her," Alexynia stated. I nodded and gently shook Kate away so that I could pull Tera to her feet.

"You fools. You think these creatures wont realise what you're doing? They're going to try and stop you and she was one of the best fighters in the group." Zire help his hands up in exasperation and shook his head back and forth.

"We don't need someone who's likely to betray us," Tera protested.

"She'll be back. Come on. Let's go find those archives," Arias declared confidently.
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Tue Aug 07, 2007 12:31 am
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"You go on, I know where it is so i will find you. Now i will go and get Daklana. And for your information i know she wont betray us." Zire said and ran the way Daklana had went.
"We should stop fighting with Daklana" said Arias
"Why?" asked Tera
"Because i, Arias and his brother know that Zire loves her and wont go anywhere without her. So losing her will be like losing him." Ariana said
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Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:19 am
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Daklana stopped running after a little less than an hour and leaned against a tree. She really wasn't paying attention to where she was going. All of the sudden she started crying. She didn't cry barely ever but she was right now. She didn't want to leave them. Especially Zire. She heard a twig snap and immediately stopped. She wiped her face and looked around. She didn't see anyone.

"Hey." Said a voice and she spun around and was face to face with Zire.
"After it happened I thought that I'd just try to live as normally as possible and bury it, but things like that don't stay buried. I didn't think it would, but it taints your whole life."

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Tue Aug 07, 2007 1:21 pm
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**If someone wants to make this a love scene please do. The only reason i wont is that i don't know much about writing romantic fiction. Someone else please do.**





"You didn't go?" asked Daklana
"Leaving you? no i cant leave you" said Zire
Daklana smiled.
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Tue Aug 07, 2007 5:25 pm
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*Heh. I'll try. Not the best*

"Zire..." Daklana said quietly.
"Yeah?"
"I...it's just that...what Arias and Ariana said...do you really think..."
"That we love each other?"
"Yeah...that..." She turned her face away. He touched her cheek and she looked back at him.
"All I know is that I love you." He said and put his lips to hers. When they seperated she wrapped her arms around him.
"I love you too." She said in his ear.
"After it happened I thought that I'd just try to live as normally as possible and bury it, but things like that don't stay buried. I didn't think it would, but it taints your whole life."

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Wed Aug 08, 2007 1:45 am
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"Come one Daklana lets go, don't worry they just got carried away."" said Zire
Daklana hesitated for a moment then asked "would they let me come after i...."
"don't worry trust me they wont." Zire reassured
They walked close to each other the way they had come holding each others hands.
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Thu Aug 09, 2007 2:54 am
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Ariana and Arias sat on a fallen tree as best they could, still testing their tangeability. "This is weird," Ariana admitted silently.

"Yes, but this much I know, we can't be killed again."

Ariana rested her head on his shoulder and inhaled his scent, "good," she moaned, "I don't want to lose you again."

"I never want to lose you," Arias replied. He cupped her cheak and pulled her into a kiss, forgetting that the others were staring at them, still trying to grasp that they were dead.
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Thu Aug 09, 2007 2:30 pm
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"So where is this archive" asked Daklana
"Its in the amazon" replied Zire
"Where in the amazon?" asked Daklana again
"Well its nowhere yet everywhere" replied Zire
"What does that mean" asked Daklana
"It means that it could be anywhere at anytime in any shape" replied Zire
"Huh, it can change shapes?. Is it so small?" asked Daklana
"No its underground. But the entrance teleports itself from place to place and changes its shape" explained Zire
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Thu Aug 09, 2007 8:40 pm
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*Sorry i havne't known what to put*

Tera frowned, she still didn't fill comfortable around the female vampire. She had tried to kill her. She didn't seem to remember but the memory burned in Tera's mind. She watched Zire leave and she looked around. They had to keep moving, so she followed the others.
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Tue Aug 14, 2007 4:05 am
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Alexynia walked along quietly, trying to think everything through. She wasn't too worried about being attacked, they were pretty powerful as a group. She heard footsteps behind them, and turned around.

"I hear someone!" she called to the rest of them, trying to stay quiet. THey all turned around, grabbing any weapon they had on them, as the trees rusteled around them.

"Who---who's there?" Tera called hesitantly. There wasn't an answer, and everyone tensed slightly.

Zire and Daklana stepped out of the trees hand in hand.
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Tue Aug 14, 2007 4:32 am
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Ariana and Arias didn't greet Daklana and Zire the way the others did, they simply smiled all-knowingly and turned their backs to them. Smiling triumphantly to themselves.
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Tue Aug 14, 2007 3:30 pm
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**I don't know what to write. Head/Desk**


"Come on then lets get going" said Zire
The others followed Arias and Ariana.
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Sat Aug 18, 2007 7:03 pm
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"It's nice of you to return," I hesitated and then reached out a hand to shake each of theirs. Zire shrugged and Daklana said nothing so the others offered a few rather neutral greetings and we began to walk aimlessly in a roughly northern direction.

"These archives. What language will they be written in?" I wondered.

"Oh. I hadn't thought of that," Kate mused. "Suppose they're in some archaic language. Then what do we do?"

"That's of no consequence. Some of us have studied languages," Daklana sniffed and then blushed and actually mumbled an apology! Zire smiled approvingly and her face took on an even deeper shade of crimson.
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Sun Aug 19, 2007 1:13 am
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"Are you compleatly sure about where you're going?" Ariana asked Arias hesitantly.

Arias laughed and wrapped an arm around her waist, "sure enough."

Ariana's eyes widened with shock, "Arias-"

He squeezed her against him, "don't worry, we'll get there."

Ariana relaxed and rested her head on his shoulder as they walked ahead, uncaring to the eyes following them.
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