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Tue Jul 31, 2007 2:58 pm
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Zire



"I'm sorry Alyxania, but this is my path. Maybe i will come back if he promises to forgive Daklana" said Zire
"never" said Sackmet
"well then we will come back after he gives you his so called mission. We will be in the tavern in the nearest town." said Zire and disappeared with Daklana.
"lets set out to find them later" said Tera
"Now that those blood suckers have gone you must restore this barrier" said Sackmet
"don't call them blood suckers" said Tera angrily
"I will call them what ever i want" said Sackmet
Tell us about this barrier" said Lilly struggling to stop Alexyania and Tera from jumping at Sackmet
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Tue Jul 31, 2007 3:04 pm
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Arias





"now what Arias" asked Ariana
"now we wait here with the rest of these souls." said Arias
"Zire and Daklana have separated from the others" said A.k5
"they what?" said Ariana astounded
"They separated" repeated A.k5
"We must get out of here" said Ariana
"but how" asked Arias
"i don't know Arias I just don't know" said Ariana and embraced Arias
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Wed Aug 01, 2007 1:06 pm
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Tera glared at Sackmet, he was treading thin ice with her calling them blood suckers. She listened to him, but one more insult just might cause her to tear his heart out. She shook her head and listened.

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Wed Aug 01, 2007 4:05 pm
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**it is okay**



"Now what Zire?" asked Daklana
"Now we wait Daklana. There is a way to revive them without Sackmet's help" said Zire




**sorry its short gatta go**
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Wed Aug 01, 2007 5:15 pm
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*Sorry I haven't posted for a few days. I was grounded. :(*


Daklana layed her head on the table and drumbed her fingers.

"You ok?"
"No...I'm bored. I don't like not doing anything." She said, picking up her head and looking at Zire. He smiled and Daklana smiled back.
"After it happened I thought that I'd just try to live as normally as possible and bury it, but things like that don't stay buried. I didn't think it would, but it taints your whole life."

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Wed Aug 01, 2007 9:58 pm
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When Arias and Ariana broke apart Ariana looked around.

"Where exactly are we?"

"Limbo."

"Limbo? I thought that was just a... whatever."

"Nope, its very real."

"What are we supposed to do?"
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Thu Aug 02, 2007 1:43 am
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Zire




"Lets go to the bomb site now" said Zire
"And why is that?" asked Daklana "We just ran away"
"I think i have a idea to make them come back here alive for some time." replied Zire
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"Ok, as long as I get to do something." Daklana said, standing up.

"Man, you're impatient." Zire said, rolling his eyes. Daklana let out a laugh.

"It laughs?"

"It? I don't know whether or not to take offense." He opened his mouth to say something else, but they reached the bomb site.

"Now what?"
"After it happened I thought that I'd just try to live as normally as possible and bury it, but things like that don't stay buried. I didn't think it would, but it taints your whole life."

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Thu Aug 02, 2007 5:28 pm
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"Well really i have no idea" said Zire
"You have no idea?" repeated Daklana
"Arias told me to come here saying that he had an idea" said Zire
"Oh yeah great" said Daklana, to this Zire smiled
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Thu Aug 02, 2007 5:35 pm
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Arias








Arias, Ariana and A.k 5 were watching Zire and Daklana.
"When should we tell them that they love each other?" asked A.k5
"Now would be a good time" said Ariana
Five minutes later they all came back to the earth as ghosts to the surprise of Zire and Daklana.
"How? what?" spluttered Zire
"No time to explain." said Arias
"Did you know that you two love each other?" asked Ariana smiling
"We what?" shouted Zire and Daklana in Union.
"Yes, you two love each other even though you don't fell it yet" repeated A.k5
Suddenly the others came running there.
"we got your message" said Lilly
"What did Sackmet say?" asked Arias
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Thu Aug 02, 2007 6:12 pm
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Lilly

"He said that... wow! Ariana, Arias!" I shouted, running forward. I held my arms out in an attempt to embrace them and was disappointed when I found that I could not touch them. I took a few steps back in an attempt to maintain the illusion of them being there.

"So you're still dead?" Kate sighed.

"For now," Arias replied.

"So Lilly, you was telling us what Sackmet said..." Arias prompted.

"Oh yeah. Sackmet said that to repair the barrier thing, we have to collect some materials because, 'while the barrier itself is not physical, it will take a physical element to repair it. You are to bring me the orb of Harmen, the tiara of Aurora, the spear of Cadreal and the shoe of Sakria. When you have these items, I will return the lives of your friends and then they will aid you in defeating the demons who escaped'" Tera snickered as I finished my impersonation and nodded approvingly.
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Thu Aug 02, 2007 6:45 pm
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Daklana tried to focus on what Lilly was saying. It was pretty hard to do.

"Er..." She shut her eyes tight then opened them. "That, uh...sounds like a lot of work." Daklana sat on a log. "So when we going?" She asked.
"After it happened I thought that I'd just try to live as normally as possible and bury it, but things like that don't stay buried. I didn't think it would, but it taints your whole life."

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Fri Aug 03, 2007 3:22 am
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"Here's an even better question: where are we going?" Alexynia asked, pacing back and forth while thinking. This was a bad habit, but what else was expected? "Harmen, Aurora, Cadreal, Sakria...those sound like people. There are millions of people in the world...we have to find four...that's nearly impossible!"
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Fri Aug 03, 2007 5:47 am
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**Good thinking guys great ideas**





"Unless these are not normal people but gods or some other kind of power full creature" proposed Ariana
"yes but we need a start" said Lilly
"We could go to the elven archives" proposed Zire
"The what?" asked Lilly, Arias, Ariana and Alexania
"You know those archives that contain information about everything" explained Tera
"Yeah its said to be in the amazon forest now" said A.k5
"Said to be in the amazon forest now" asked Lilly
"Yeah now. It moves every ten years" explained Zire
"Well if it contains information about everything lets go" said Ariana
"hey, its a figure of speech" said Tera
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Sun Aug 05, 2007 3:19 am
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"Lets go never-the-less," Arias said. Ariana smiled and took his hand.

(I seriously can't think of anything, sorry)
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