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Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:08 pm
TNCowgirl says...



**Sorry I fell asleep and just woke up. OOPs and I don't really get what just happened.
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Wed Jul 08, 2009 5:53 pm
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**I'm sorry hon, I wasn't on much last night because I had to work until 8 PM and then pick up my kids. I have to babysit soon so IDK.**

You want to time skip?
We're meant to be one
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Wed Jul 08, 2009 6:40 pm
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The next morning Dawn woke up curled close to Dante. She snuggled closer and then sat up.

"So much for waiting." She smiled kissing his lips then walking to the bathroom and jumping in the shower. When she walked back into the room Dante was sitting on the bed rubbing his face.

"Stop being so cheerful, it's early." He yawned. "I didn't get any sleep thanks to you." She laughed.

"Thanks to me, my foot." She moved his head up and kissed him. "Get a shower, I'm making breakfast. I'm going to make sure Colt slept ok." She pulled some clean clothes on and then walked down the stairs to find Colt had already made some pancakes.

'Morning." He smiled as he set a plate full on the table. "Hope you didn't mind. I like cooking, keeps me busy."

'No, you didn't have to thoug." She replied looking at the spread as Dante walked down. HE hadn't showered and he was in just a pair of pants, his hair all disshelved. She laughed covering her mouth up. He looked os handsome.
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Wed Jul 08, 2009 8:11 pm
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Dante pulled a grey shirt over his head, it clung to his torso.

"Ugh... so incredibly tired." he groaned.
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Wed Jul 08, 2009 8:16 pm
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"Then go back to sleep." Dawn replied as she sat down and put some pancakes on her plate. Colt did the same.

"No." He yawned sitting next to her and getting some food too.

"Colt, make him sleep please, I dont want to hear him whine all day." She replied. Colt looked over at Dante.

"Dont' you dare even try it or I'll shoot you into the next century." Dante growled.

"Sorry, Dawn." Colt shrugge.d
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Wed Jul 08, 2009 8:21 pm
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**I've gotta go :( I'll post later**
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Wed Jul 08, 2009 8:26 pm
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***Sounds good to me. I don' tknow when I"ll be on next, might not be til tonight, we'll see.***
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Wed Jul 08, 2009 10:32 pm
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**I have nothing :(**
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Wed Jul 08, 2009 10:33 pm
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**I have nothing :(**
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 1:53 am
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***Me either. Time skip?? :P ***
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 1:56 am
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**How far? :? **
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 1:56 am
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**How far? :? **
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 2:01 am
TNCowgirl says...



***Uh........I have no idea. :P Maybe she could end up pregnate and he gets all worried again. :P I'm thinking that she should find a way to bring someone back from the dead and she wants to bring back Holly, but the person they bring back has to be willing to do it. Holly refuses and says she'll send her son though? Just an idea. :P Maybe Dante finds out what she wanted to do and he talks ot Holly, alone. I don't know. ***
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 2:23 am
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**I don't get it. Beside the pregnant part, I get that part**
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 2:25 am
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***She finds a spell that gives her the power to bring one person back to life. Takes alot of energy, but she loves Dante enough taht she wants to give him back Holly so he'll be happy. But Holly refuses to come back, she says she would send Dante's son if he wanted. The person gets a second chance at life pretty much. Dante finds out. From there its up to you. ***
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