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Sun Dec 19, 2010 7:59 pm
Mizzle says...



This might just be dead. If not, PM me when it starts, Hope. :)
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Thu Jan 27, 2011 4:29 pm
BondGirl007 says...



Woo restarting! I think if we can get one more profile we'll start.
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Thu Jan 27, 2011 6:23 pm
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Name: Coram
Gender: Male
Age: one year. In rat years he is 9.
Appearance: Front half is Black. Back half is white. Large and strong. His right ear is Missing [ only evidence of his gang]
Class: Upper Class
Personality: Snooty is the best word to decribe him. He wants the best of everything. Since he was born in the upper class he thinks he own everything. But when it comes to his friends he is loyal to the ends of the earth.
Back Story: He was born upper class but eventually became a leader of a particurally vicious gang. His father and mother are unaware of his violent gang. He has a love interest that completely ignores him.
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Fri Jan 28, 2011 11:53 pm
jessig833 says...



Name:Lilly

Gender:Female

Age:1 year and six months(so around 16)

Appearance-Black with white on her paws chest, and the tip of her tail.

Class: Upper class

Personality-Lilly is a confident head strong girl she hates to see the lower class treated badly she helps them and give them thing they need she likes to walk around in the moonlight but her farther doesn't like it because he think the gangs will get her.

backstory- She was the only one in her litter and She watched as her mother was killed when they didn't get home before dark .So her farher is very protective of her
  





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Sat Jan 29, 2011 2:06 am
BondGirl007 says...



Story- Profile looks good, but check the age, if he was actually 9 he wouldn't be in a gang. (Guessing typo of 19?)
Jess- If you could check your age and compare to the other ones that would be awesome. Also just a heads up I might have you change to male possibly. :)

And both of you- PIX PLS

I think we'll start on the first, K? K.
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Mon Jan 31, 2011 9:20 pm
Skorpionne says...



Join? Upper class female, and lower class male?
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Fri Feb 04, 2011 5:11 am
BondGirl007 says...



Sounds good, after you post we'll start!
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Fri Feb 04, 2011 7:33 pm
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Name:
Reheak

Age:
13 in Rat years

Gender:
Male
Class:
lower
Appearance:
a skinny rat (couldn't find a pic) My computer won't allow certian sites, and it won't allow these websites Bond. Sorry.
Personality:
quiet and calculating

Short back story:
Reheak used to be the sonof a important Rat. Then his parent's died from the plauge, leaving him sick and abandoned. Mysterious rats tried to take him away, but he runs away and assumed a diffrent idenity. Lives in one room made out of some bricks that fell may years ago from a burning building.
Other:
He dropped the name Reheak.
he is now called: Eary
Last edited by LadySpark on Sat Feb 05, 2011 1:21 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:58 am
BondGirl007 says...



Sorry Point, no females excepted anymore if you want to change to male awesome! Also there's a link in my post two above your and the first one, please make sure you read them.
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Sat Feb 05, 2011 1:50 pm
MilkNCookies says...



We shout start soon.
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Sat Feb 05, 2011 2:36 pm
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Name: Seth or “Stitches”
Age:
Gender: male
Class: lower
Appearance: mostly black with swatches of white and ginger
Personality: fun-loving but can turn deadly serious
Back story: Seth doesn’t remember much of his early life. An old rat took him in and taught him the art of healing-
hence the nickname.
  





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Wed Feb 09, 2011 1:32 am
Kelcia says...



Are you still accepting? If not, it's okay, if so, here's the profile!

Name: Just

Age: About 20 in rat years.

Gender: Male

Class: Lower

Appearance: Long brown fur, almost orange. Bright black eyes and short whiskers. A rather large rat. Missing about an inch of his tail where a cat bit it off.
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Personality: Just is forever sardonic, but somehow manages to pull it off in a relatively polite manner. Just is an easygoing rat. He’s good in a scrap, though, and is as loyal as anything to the select few he trusts. Swashbuckling is a good way to put it.

Short back story: Born lower class, bread lower class. Doesn’t care about the higher classes, and doesn’t care to advance his status.

Other: He’s been in love with a mouse from down the lane since they were pups. However, as mice and rats don’t really mix.... he just makes a joke of it with his friends. However, he is crazy over her. Her name is Tessie. (She should be a non-entity in the SB)
Last edited by Kelcia on Tue Feb 22, 2011 4:27 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Wed Feb 09, 2011 9:40 pm
Skorpionne says...



Profiles: (In Construction)

1)
Name: Uno
Age: 19 (Rat years)
Gender: Male
Class: Lower
Appearance: White, with black and ginger patches, numerous scars. Very heavily built. (Sorry, the link wouldn't work.)
Personality: A very rough-and-tough kind of rat, thinking isn't really Uno's strong point. True to his name, he battles his life alone, trusting nobody but himself, which has both positive and negative effects.
Short back story: Uno was a runt, but grew to be bigger than all his other siblings, and ran away to the sewers.
Other: None.

2)
Name: Vivienne
Age: 13 (Rat years)
Gender: Female
Class: Upper
Appearance: Dark brown, with a blueish stripe down her belly and deep black eyes.
Personality: Vivienne is extremely vain, and doesn't hie it. Vanity is, in fact her one main trait. She can't understand anyone who doesn't envy and admire her, but her two redeeming feautures are her mothering instinct, and her apt sense of humour.
Short back story:
Other: None.
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Thu Feb 10, 2011 5:27 am
Kelcia says...



(Okay, I'll start things off, if no-one objects.)

Just

The barroom was a noisy, underground affair, filled with the riffraff that was the lowliest rats in New York. Needless to say, Just loved the place. It was the only place he knew of that was both controlled by the leading rat pack in the area, and also offered a good time. Most bars controlled by the gangs were places rats went when they needed to deal or be dealt with.

Not this particular branch though.

“Bit it clean off,” said Just easily, taking a drink of the liquor. The interested young pup of a rat stared.

“Really?” he squeaked.

“Don’t exaggerate, Just,” Said an exasperated rat, sitting nearby. “The cat just got the last part, and you recovered fast enough. Don’t you listen to him, Pip.”

“Really, Jessamine,” said Just, shooting her a wink. “Let’s not dampen the storytelling spirit, eh?”

“It’s been ages since it happened. You can stop griping about it.”

“Dear lady, you wound me.”

“Worse than that tail of yours?” A new voice interjected.

“What can be worse than the stinging insults of a ringing intellect such as Jessie?” Jessamine cried in outrage as Just swung to face the speaker.

(Anybody can hop in.)
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Fri Feb 11, 2011 10:49 pm
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Stitches:

"Worse than that tail of yours?" I inquired.

The fellow they called Just swung to face me. "What's a civilized rat like you doing here?"

"Oh, I like to be around when things happen." I winked and added, "Call me Stitches. I come highly recommended, if you're ever in need of a healer."

Just scratched his head. His friend Jessie piped up, "I've seen you around." Before I could reply, a brawl started at a nearby table. The two combatants were obviously drunk, and hurled insults at each other.

A hulking rat came forward to separate them. While the barmaids cleaned up their mess, I turned to Just. "Told you I like to see things happening."
  








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