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Sat Jan 08, 2011 5:40 pm
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This is a remake of a SB I started a while back. It didn't make it as far as I had hoped it would, but I think it will this time. I am running this alongside Flux, so if you have any questions, contact her or me.

<><><>Children of Hades<><><>

It’s endless. The sand to the right, the sea to the left, the dark sky, they are endless. There is no horizon separating them, only fog blurring the furthest regions. Where am I? she thought, groaning inwardly as she pushed herself up to her hands and knees. Every muscle ached as she strained to stand. She looked around her, taking in the almost maddeningly monotonous view.

“You weren’t supposed to die yet.”

She flung around, her long red hair whipping her face. For a moment, she was too stunned to breathe. Before her stood a man, tall, tanned, and generally beautiful with slippery black hair that hung at his jaw. He looked old and young, tired and energetic as he started to pace around her. “Who are you?” she asked. The man said nothing, and continued to circle his prey.

“I can take you back, to the land of the living,” he said with a cool tone. He stopped in front of her, and she noticed the scars that ran across his arms and face. “I can even make you immortal.”

She stared him in the eye, or at least where his eyes were supposed to be. In their place were two black voids, lit by small, blue flames. “You’re trying to tell me I’m dead, right?”

“Am I not succeeding?” He smirked at his joke, and grew serious once more. “Do you have a better explanation as to this place, as to me? Let’s see what you remember.” He touched a finger to her forehead, and the world started spinning.

She stood on an overpass, the wind pressing on her back and making her teeter. Siren’s blared, an officer’s amplified voice echoed around, but she didn’t hear. She had made up her mind. Her eyes fell down to the concrete below, the sanctuary. It would be so quick. A different siren, a fire truck’s siren found it’s way to her ears. They’d better not try to take me down, she thought. I’ll do it myself.

She spread her arms wide and started counting. Ten… Nine…

“Izzy!” Seven… Six… “Isabelle, don’t!” Four… Three… Two… “I love you, baby!”

Isabelle stopped, and turned her head. A young man cam up to her on the road. “You can start over,” he said with a smile. His wonderful, calm way, the one that had made him her best friend. He held out his hands to her. She reached out to take them.

And a final gale made her slip.

Everything swirled back, and she was with the man again. He raised his eyes to hers. “Something happened to change fate. You weren’t supposed to fall.” Her breathing was hard, her mind was swimming. Nothing made sense. This wasn’t the afterlife she had been promised. There were no fluffy clouds. There were no pits of flames waiting to consume her. There weren’t even any souls screaming from the tortures of Tartarus. But she did believe she was dead, now that she had watched herself die.

Isabelle swallowed and took a breath. “You can take me back?” The man nodded, then said, “You’ll have to work for me.” Her eyebrows furrowed as she went back into denial. “Just tell me who you are!” she screamed.

“Will you accept my proposal?” She groaned when he said this. Her head went from side to side as she played a mental war with herself. Finally she thrust out her hand a muttered a “Sure”. The man took her hand and smiled.

“I am Hades.”



<><><>What are Children of Hades?<><><>

You died before your time had come and wanted your life back. Hades gave it to you in exchange for your servitude, and now he has a job for you.

A Child of Hades escorts the dead to the afterlife. He comes to you on your deathbed as a ghost that only you can see, hear, or feel. You take his hand, and you leave this world.

If you’re asking why, it’s simple. There are six billion people in the world, with someone dying every second; Death simply can’t keep up with the demand on his own. So a few thousand years ago, he decided to get some helpers.

People like you were perfect.

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You are immortal. You can’t die from any injury, age, disease, anything. If you grow sick, you stay weak until you are better. If you get hurt, you wait until your body heals itself. Healing is slightly accelerated, but not like a bullet will squirt out of your brain and you’ll be fine. It’s sped up to the point where a broken rib will heal in a month or two, and a bullet will gradually be dissolved into your blood stream in about two weeks. You are not immune to poison in the slightest, but the above clarified healing rates apply.








<><><>Plot<><><>

Whether you’ve been doing it for centuries or died last night, you are a Child of Hades. Immortal, and ‘escorting’ about fifteen people a day. There are eleven thousand others like you, people who are buried six feet down and dancing on their graves. Only having to take fifteen people to Hades a day, you have quite a bit of free time to live a ‘normal’ life.

Thing is, the mortals have figured out that we, or Death, is living here on earth. They’ve also discovered that they can bottle Death, capturing it and putting it under lock and key. That means imprisonment, neglect, and abuse for us. Five thousand Children are on active duty. There used to be twenty thousand, and the number is decreasing at an increasing rate.

With the feds hot on your tail and a balancing act of duty and your social life, do you think you can keep it up?



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-All YWS rules (no netspeak, etc.)

-Use the spellcheck. It’s just one little click and saves you a lecture. I hate it when yuor psot ensd up lik tihs because you refused to click the spell check.

-Post. At least once every four days.

-No ‘adult romance’. As in, waking up in the same bed as your boyfriend/girlfriend is seriously pushing it. I don’t care about kissing.

-No horrible curse words, and use them sparingly. Simple as that.

-This is supposed to be creepy. It revolves around death, for Pete’s sake! But that doesn’t mean go crazy. Keep it rated PG-16, please.


>> Break three rules, or don’t post for ten days without warning me you’ll be gone, and your character will be killed.


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Sat Jan 08, 2011 10:53 pm
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When do we start?
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Sun Jan 16, 2011 6:23 pm
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**Starting!**

**I apologize in advance for this cheap post; I had a swim meet yesterday that lasted for six hours. I only swam for maybe six minutes, but it was exhausting, and so I’m too pooped to think creatively.**


Charlie

“What, dare I ask, do you think you’re doing?”

The incompetent new waiter poked his head up from under the kitchen sink. “I’m… The plumber said he wouldn’t be able to make it for another four hours, so I thought I’d fix it myself.” He flashed a cheesy grin. “Great idea?”

Charlie stared at him for a moment, and clicked her tongue. “Joey, Joey, Joey,” she started with a sigh. “You know how you applied as a waiter?” Joey nodded. “You know how I so generously gave you said job?” Joey rolled his eyes and nodded again, playing along to avoid a tantrum. “Do you know what a waiter’s supposed to do?

Serve the freaking customers!

A fork clattered and a baby started to cry at the volume of her voice. Charlie didn’t seem to notice, and took in another breath. This would last until he broke. “Kyle can fix a sink,” she bellowed. “The cook can fix a sink. I am not paying you if you don’t do your job!”

She hooked her foot around the leg of a prep table. If she went at an employee again, she’d lose her café. That could not happen. Opening her mouth to continue, Joey broke in, saying, “Count to ten, Charles.”

Ten seconds is a lot of time to think of non-abusive – and certainly not employee harassing – ways to bring such an obnoxious boy down from his perch.

After several minutes of verbal warfare, because of which everyone but the generals evacuated the premises early on, the familiar chime of the door opening brought the two back to Earth. Charlie peeked her head out the kitchen door and smiled warmly. “With you in a second, sir,” she said sweetly, and ducked her head back in to give Joey one last “don’t make me say it” glare.
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Mon Jan 17, 2011 5:54 pm
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Caty Lane

The old used book shop was shoved into a dingy building stuck between a bakery and a travel agency. It was crowded, stuffed full of books and shelves, and dimly lit. Caty loved the dusty old place.

She sat on the lone counter in the shop, leaning back against a wall, her feet propped up on the ancient cash register with a book in her hands. The cover was faded and the pages were yellowing, but it had been one of her favorite books when she had been alive. Not that she wasn't alive now, but this sort of life under the everwatching eye of Hades was no life in her eyes.

Kevin walked in from the back room and gave Caty a strange look somewhere between intrigue and disgust. She swung her feet away from the register and hopped off the counter.

"Sorry 'bout that boss," she said, a sly grin creeping onto her face. "I'll get to work."

He walked over to her and wrapped his arms around her shoulders, pulling her close to him. Caty tensed, shifting to high alert mode.

"I don't want this to change anything between us," he said. "I want to accept what-- who you are."

Caty pushed him back from her and grabbed a stack of books from the counter. "Look, Kev," she said. "I get it. I'm a child of Hades and you're freaked out about it." She slipped books into random places on the shelves as she talked. "If it changes something, it changes something. But ya know, I still like ya." She winked at him and laughed. "Don't think so much about it."

He opened his mouth to say something else, but the bell on the door chimed as someone walked in. Caty handed the stack of books to Kevin and walked towards the door. "Can I help you?" she called.
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Tue Jan 18, 2011 5:45 pm
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~Mary Lotatski~

Hades, these people are all idiots.I think, flitting through my history book. They have no idea how hard life was back then. How smelly it was...how death crept around at every corner. How much life 'sucked' as they say these days. How-

"Honey I'm home!" I hear Matt's voice echo through the small apartment, the door slamming behind him.

I roll my eyes, allowing a small smile to escape from my lips," Is that from another 50's sitcom?"

He rolls into the room wearing another cotten T-shirt, showing off his muscles that he thought were so 'attractive'. He plops down beside me at our kitchen table, small and wooden.

"I don't know. Sure sounds cool though right?"

"Your never gonna get over the 50's are you?"

He gives me a wicked grin," No." Turning his attention to my book he sighs," More history?"

"What else? Immigration this time."

I watch as his face falls. " Oh. Brings memories doesn't it? Bad memories."

"Yeah. They have so much of it wrong..."

He loops his arm around my shoulder. " Hey. I know what'll make you feel better. There's a used book store down the street. Why don't we take you there and get ya' a book."

"Really?" I smile up at him. He knew I loved books, all books. Matt could be such a good guy, a brother even. One that couldn't die.

" 'Corse. Come on." He helps me from my chair and we walk over to his old Voltwaggen.

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"Can I help you?"

We enter the dimly lit shop and are quickly greeted by a smiling red head. Matt's eyes get shiny and I sigh. He was attracted to all members of the female species. Even back in the 20's, when we met, he hit on girls. Sometimes I wonder why I was any different.

" Um...not really. We're just browsing. Do you have any good suggestions?"

She gives me a bright smile and I begin to study her. After years of being a child of Hades I ususally could tell when somone was near death. She was so far off. At least as far as I could tell.

"I'm Mary and this is my brother Matt," I say, realizing it's rude not to say or names.
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Thu Jan 20, 2011 2:31 pm
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I ran down the street cursing under my breath. 'For the love of Hades why today?!' I shouted inside my head running as fast as I could in combat boots. I rounded the corner and broke into a smile when I saw the local movie theatre but then it faded when I remembered I still had 2 flights of stairs to run up. I groaned then I hit the aluminum side door of the theatre with my hands outstretched and nearly ran into Colette one of my closest friends in the theatre troupe. "Woah J.D. watch it!" She shouted in a heavily marked french accent. "Salut Colette." I panted out bent over double then I pulled myself up and kissed both her cheeks. "Salut J.D." She said doing the same to my cheeks. "I'm so sorry that I'm late." I said catching my breath. She chuckled and led me over to a pair of brand new elevators. I just stared as she hit the up button. "When did these get put in?" I asked as the elevator came down. "Last week." Colette replied simply as the elevator dinged and the door opened. I walked inside with her close behind and I hit the third floor button. As it whirred and let us up I glanced around at the mirror covered walls and the gold bar around the circumfrence of the elevator. I sighed and leaned against the wall closing my eyes. "So what do you think?" She asked. I opened my eyes as it reached our destination. "It's a lot faster than walking." I said after thinking for a moment. She let out a shriek of laughter as the doors opened and everyone turned towards us. I chuckled and walked out with Colette behind me still giggling. "Your late." Doug chastened. "Sorry." Was all I could get out before he said "Never mind we are going to be holding auditions for Kate in Taming of the Shrew." I sat down in a straight backed wood chair as the stage was brightened I settled back waiting for the first person to take the stage. " Doug if you don't mind I would like to go first I have somewhere to be." I said before he announced the first person. He glared at me his dark green eyes going a few shades darker. "Alright you may go first Jane." He said smirking as I flushed. I hated my name so much and he enjoyed annoying me. I walked up onto the stage and stood in the little spot that the lights couldn't reach. "WELL!" Doug shouted the way he did every time I had an audition. I smirked and said calmly "Well indeed." I strode forward and began "Fie, fie..." I loved Kate loved her defiance and anger and the way she was wooed and made to love Pithus (No idea what his name is sorry) I finished and looked at everyone and they all smiled and applauded.
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Could someone bring in my characters...or just a character, doesn't matter. Please.
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Robert Sanson

When you had a teenage girl to drag to school, the day had to start early, even when it was your day off. Rob didn't mind too much though, he rather liked being up in the morning and having a good sit at the breakfast table with a coffee and the daily paper. Which he'd be doing just as soon as he'd made sure Kim was getting up. He pulled on a pair of jeans and grabbed a clean vest top before making his way to his daughter's room, pulling the top on as he walked. Rob rested his hand on the handle and pushed down but then thought better of it. There'd been a time he could just walk into Kimmie's room but since she'd started wearing bras and... well growing. He didn't want to catch her getting dressed now that she was older.

"Kim! Hey Kim!" Rob listened for a reply and heard a muffled grunt. He could hear the covers rustling as she turned on to her other side. Still in bed then. Well. That changed things. Throwing open the door, Rob strode into the room and pulled the covers back off his daugher. "Up!" He insisted.

"I was getting up," Kim mumbled.

"Uh huh, sure you were." Rob dropped the covers at the bottom of the bed and headed out the room. "Don't forget to make your bed, sweetie!" he called over his shoulder as he made his merry way downstairs. Now. Time for that coffee and a look in the paper.

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"If you got up earlier, maybe you'd have more time to do your hair," Rob teased as he guided Kim out the door. She made a few more complaints about how silly she looked with the back of her hair straightened but a little at the front still wavy. Rob told her she'd be setting a new trend and Kim snapped back:

"Well fine! But you're ruining my life!" Then she grumpily got into the car which suited Rob just fine. He'd already ruined her life four times over this month.

"Seatbelt," Rob warned as he pulled out of the drive and started driving down to the local school.
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Louis:

A girl walked in, her black hair in a mohawk. She really had beautiful features. Tucking the black ribbon in the pages of the book, I rose and gave her a greeting smile.

She looked rather tired and annoyed.

"Tough day?" I asked in my French accent.

"People are idiots." She muttered.

With a chuckle, I asked her "Can I help you with anything? Books, a drink, anything?"

"Can I get some coffee please?" She asked, sitting in the blood red arm chair.

"Of course."

I walked into the back kitchen and got the girl a large green mug and poured some coffee in it. My blonde curls hung loose in my face, falling out of the black ribbon.

With the mug, I walked back out and handed it to her, then set some cream and sugar on the table at her side.

For some reason she looked very - different. Burns peeked out of the long sleeves she wore, her skin was pale. SHe didn't look quite - alive. Could it be? Could I possibly have found someone like myself?

Giving her a quick look over I took in her details. She looked like someone I may have encountered years ago in a different time.

It was when she said "Can I help you?" that I realized I was staring.

Shaking my head, I pukked the ribbon from my hair and retied it up.

"You just - never mind"
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Sat Jan 22, 2011 1:50 am
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Charlie

Charlie shifted uncomfortably in the chair. It must have been an antique; the fluff was gone from the stuffing, leaving only springs poking her behind. It was painfully annoying. As she sipped her coffee – it always was good to keep an eye on the competition, though in this case, his coffee was better – she watched the man as he slid open his place in a book, a ribbon bookmark floating to the counter. Weirdo, she thought politely. The back of her mind brought up a few more words, but that was the one that seemed most fitting. Yes, tying his hair back with a ribbon – she hadn’t seen that her whole life, first and second – gaping at her like a stalker, “weirdo” was fitting.

She moved to a seat that seemed less “used” and continued to watch him from the corner of her eye. The moment he glanced up at her again, a thought came to her mind. Charlie smirked. It would be fun, she thought, seeing as there were only a few people on the other side of the room. They were well out of earshot.

As soon as he took one more glance, she said with a questioning look, “Are you a cop?”

He looked up with a raised eyebrow. “No, why?” It was a hesitant reply. He wasn’t falling for it.

“You’re watching me like they tend to,” she took another casual sip of coffee. “But you’re not… That’s good.”

Her entire body watched him for a worried look, a nervous motion, any sign of fret. The man only chuckled and bent his head back down to his book. Charlie nearly choked on her coffee. Maybe she was more tired than she thought she was. Was it a poor joke? Was she losing the touch? That might be. Idiot employees and being raised on the humor from a hundred years ago could take a toll on one’s funny bone.

She put down the coffee in frustration and stormed over to him. “Are you boring or am I?” The man just looked at her, brow raised and smiling. Kyle’s threat of buying her anger management CDs flashed through her mind, so Charlie took a breath before continuing. “Sorry. Good coffee.”

“Thank you,” he said, still killing her with that sweet smile. “And I don’t know that either of us is boring. I’ve just had a lot worse that serving a fugitive.”

Charlie smirked and rubbed her eyes. “What are you, twenty?” He said he was nineteen and her smirk grew. “ Not even twenty! And already you’re bragging about everything you’ve been through?”





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Mon Jan 24, 2011 2:29 pm
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Jane Doe
I smiled and curtsied the best I could. I ran off the stage and nearly into Doug. "What's the hurry Jane? Where's the fire?" He asked smirking. My eyes narrowed into a glare. "Out of my way Douglas I have an appointment to keep." I snapped but he refused to move still smirking out of smugness. "What do you have a hot date? Yeah right who would date a freak like you." He said answering his own question. I smirked and replied icily "You don't you remember?" He flushed dark purple and I walked past him and to the elevators. " Au Revoir J.D. I'll call you with the results." Colette called. "Merci Colette au revoir." I replied walking to the elevators and hitting the 1st floor button. As soon as the elevator door opened I was running again determined to get dressed in nicer clothes and then get to my grandma's house on time. I ran up the stairs to my apartment and closed the door behind me sighing then I was running to my bedroom. I got changed into a black short sleeved dress shirt and black jeans. I put on black unscuffed combat boots and brushed my black hair back into a bun with a purple silk ribbon and I put on black lipstick. I ran back down the stairs and outside. I made it to my grandma's apartment just 3 minutes before 10:00. I knocked on the door and it was opened by a 40 year old looking woman with black hair streaked with silver hanging down her back her electric blue eyes clear and innocent like a child's. "J.D!" Grandma shouted hugging me. I hugged her back tightly. "Hey Grams." I replied squeezing her tightly. She let me go and smiled the only time her age was really evident because her eyes nearly disappeared in a mass of smile lines. I stepped insdie and closed the door behind me. We sat down on a dirty white sofa stained by many soda spills and the like. "So anything new?' She asked. "I tried out for the part of Kate in the Taming of the Shrew." I replied. "That is wonderful news I just know you'll ge tthe part." She said positively.
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