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Colt shook his head. "Nope, I don't like visiting them any more then I have to. They are always talking about the buisness, weather I have a girlfriend, if I'm being smart so they don't have any unexpected grandkids, you know the normal." He smiled.

"They really bgu you about kids?" She akse.

"About not having them. The think a family is a distraction that isn't allowed until after I run the buiness for a year." He shrugged. "I say bull, but I have school to finish and a kid would be hard to take care of while doing school."
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Journey

"So you don't want kids?" Journey asked, forking through the nasty spagetti that stared her in the face.

"I didn't say that. I just want to kind of be a kid myself before I have kids." He said looking at Journey.

"Well, I guess thats a good answer. So are you enjoying college or just trying to get it over with?" She asked.
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Colt smiled and shrugged. "I want to have fun, but to get through it all." he replied with a smile.

"You want to do both?" She asked.

"Yup, I want to get this all over with, but I also want to have fun on the way." He repleid wth a grin. "How about you?"
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*lol I'm bored and now I have time on my hands so I think I'm gonna do the dorm thing right now. *

Journey

"I want to have fun, but at the same timeI just want to get through it all so I can start my life and live a little." I smiled then looked down. "Well, I have to go, I turned my paper work and hey told me to come back in thirty minutes. And, it's been thirty minutes. So, I guess I'll talk to you later."

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**it can be the end of the day if you want and theyn they can see each other in the dorm lol this should be good**
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Colt nodded. "Alright." He watched her go then he walked towards his other classes.


*End of Day*

Colt rubbed his eyes. HE was ready to drop dead. He opened the dorm door and made a bee line to his bed. He tossed his bag down and laid on the bed. He looked over and saw bedding on the bed across from him and hte shower was going.

"Great!" He groaned. "Just great."
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Journey

Journey felt so refreshed, she knew she had a roomie but was happy and hopping the person wasn't such a partyer or a slut, but a nice, talkitive, friendly person. She heard the dorm room door open. She quickly looked in the mirror, her hair fell in layers and her eyes glowed like cats. She wrapped the towel around herself and hooked it with a hair clip. She looked down and noticed she'd cut her leg when she was shaving.

"Damn." she said. She opened the bathroom door and only saw the persons back.

"Hi." She said.
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Colt spun around and just stared. Jorney's face turned beet red and she ran back into the bathroom, probably getting dressed.

This is going to be interesting. He thought walking to his bed and sitting down running a hand through his hair. When she came back out she looked around. "So, this your new dorm?"

"Y-ya." She stuttered. "What are you doing in here?"

"This is my dorm too." He replied smiling half heartidly.
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Journey

Journey was motified! Of course not aboout Colt being her roomie but the whole fact that she was hmm, I dunno NAKED!!!

"Well this is uh, different." Journey said sounding normal and pulling a Yellow shirt over her bra. But when she meant different she ment, very very weird. "Well, at least I know your not a slut."

"Well, I did tell you that it was kind of lonely. So be prepared to be bored." Journey could hear his voice was pretty strained, she wondered why.

"You're not boring." She said as she jumped to pull her jeans up. Old habit, she thought bitterly.
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Colton:

"So you say." He chuckled sitting on his bed hearing her jumping in the bathroom. Jeans He thought. She finally came out clad in a yellow shirt and jeans.

"Your definatly the last person I thought I'd see." She smiled as she sat down.

"I noticed." He teased. She blush againa nd he smiled, it was a cute blush. You can't think that! He scorned himself.

"Sorry about that." She muttered.

"No harm done, nothing was showing so I think your pretty safe." He smiled.
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Journey

Journey laughed and looked around, the walls were so bare. She wasn't thinking of painting or anything but she thought a poster or pictures or something.

"I see your not the decoritve type." she found herself smiling again. What was up with her?

"Do you mean putting up pictures, painting and all that kind of stuff? No, not really. I could probably do it, if I wanted to but I'm busy most of the time."

"And you don't want pictures of your family in your place." she joked, she looked out the window, pretty high up. She looked down to see a huge tree. "Great view." Journey put her fingertips ontop of the sill.
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Colton:

Colton walked over to where she was standing and looked out. "Ya, I guess." He replied. "It looks even cooler in the winter when it snows." he smiled.

"Snows?" SHe asked.

"When it does." He shrugged. "It did last year." He walked back over to his desk and rearranged some things then sat on it looking at her.

"This is a big room, compaired to the others."

"Thank my dad." He shrugged.
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Journey

"Give your dad my thanks." She turned to look at him. "So, do you-" She was cut off by her cell phone. "Sorry, hold on." She searched for her cell phone in her duffle bag. "Hello?" She asked, Journey didn't know the phone number. She was getting worried when no one was answering her back, until she heard someones voice on the other line. She quickly looked at Colt then looked away.

"I'll be right there." Then she hung up, she grabbed her coat and looked at Colt. "Don't wait up for me, I probably won't be home tonight." she said. "I guess I'll see you tomorrow." she smiled.
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Colton nodded. "Alright, see you in the morning." He got up and walked to the bathroom and locked the door climbing in the shower for a quick shower. When he was done he wrapped a towel around his waist and walked back to the room getting his clothes on. He climbed in bed and then closed his eyes falling asleep.


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Journey

Journey walked up to the abandon church, no longer at the college. She felt bad for having to lie to Colt, especially when he was the only peron she felt she could trust. Journey finally heard voices, the voices of FORMER friends. She was thrown up against the wall, and punched, just once though, she made a groan of pain. Her bottom lip had been split and was now bleeding.

"So, you bring us what we want?" the males voice asked.

"I don't have your money. I can get it to you on Thursday." Journey said truthfully.

"I want it now!" the harsh whisper made her flinch. "Plus, I wouldn''t want to hurt any of your friends just to make sure."

"No! No, I swear I'll give you the money on Thursday." Everyone knew Journey kept her word.

"Yes, yes, don't get that pretty face of yours in an ugly expression." the male laughed. "Here, want a snow angel?" he asked, handing her the drug.

"No. I'm a former user, I already told you that." Journey had done drugs, now she would have to pay for them.
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Journey's eyes didn't open, she was back in her bed and sprawled out, in her Joe Boxer short shorts and a small tank top, she rolled over and yelped in surprise when she fell out of her bed.
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Colton jumped hwen he heard a yelp and he looked around. He spotted Jorney climbing off the floor and he smield. "THat's a nice thing to wake up to. Didn't break anything did you?" He smiled. She yawned and got up shaking her head.

"SHut up, I'm still tired." She moaned climbing in her bed again.

"It's nine in the morning." He laughed. "I'm hitting the shower." He got upa nd went back into the bathroom jumping in the shower. He got dressed in there, his shirt still in the room. After he dried off he walked back into the room looking for his shirt.
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