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*okay....nightfall need sot hurry up. How bout I get eh brittle on and walk her around for a bit then leave.?*


Adahy:

Adahy finally got the brittle on, gently pulling on her. "See...that wasn't so bad now was it?" he grabbed the lead rope, walking her around in circles. Chepi showed up with Marshall. Seh gasped when she seen the bay. He walked her over towards her. Teh bay wouldn't go any nearer than a yard away. He chuckled.

"Beautiful ain't she?" he asked Chepi.

"More." Chepi called. He chuckled. "Yeah I guess she is. Well, I've done all I can for today. Did you fix anything for supper?" He took teh brittle off, and hopped over the posts. He put his arm around his sisters shoulder as they walked away.

"Yeah...about that..." she began. Adahy chuckled and looked at Marshall. His sister needed another man in her life, even if it was just for a friend. Marshall needed a woman in his life, but hey that was his porblem. He chuckled again.

"What?" his sister asked.

"Nothing...just thinking about soemthing."


Chepi:

"Right." they walked into teh tee-pee. There was still meat left over from yesterday, so tehy settled on that. Adahy looked at Marshall. "Would you care to join us, friend?"
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***Ok, until Maki drops out, he is still claimed. I'll do a little timeish jump, ok? It'll get things going. Note to everyone else: Adahy is the one that comes when she screams, please let singer post that. YOu can post stuff going up towards it. But let Adahy be the first to her and also singer will post that post. ***


Lillian:

Lillian tossed her head as she ran around the corral. Weren't they going to even feed her! She snorted when a boy ran over, obviously sneeking and tucked some hay in the corral smiling at her. She snorted and moved towards the hay ignoring the boy. He stroked her head as she ate it. She was so hungry! She pushed at his hand when the hay was gone and he smiled turning and running off again coming back with more hay. She gladly ate it her stomach finnally filling up.

Poor child, don't hurt him. Black said in her mind. I dont' care if a noraml horse wouldn't take that, please don't hurt him.

I won't! She replied squealing in his head. The little boy left though, leaving her alone in the dark. She walked around for a while but got bored. When nighttime came around she finnally decided to change. She started to shift and then a shock of pain hit her full blow. Her scream started out as a horses scream and ended as a humans. She was curled up in a tight ball her whole body spasming from the change whimpering as she shook.

Lillian! Black screamed pounding at his corral with his hooves. He couldn't get to her though.
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Adahy:

Adahy's head snapped up as he heard the scream. He motioned for Marshall to stay with Chepi. Grabbbing his spear, he headed towards the sound. The screaming lead him to the pen where teh bay was kept, but teh bay was gone. In its place, a woman lay, naked and curled in a ball. He jumped over the posts and ran to her, trying to calm her. Eventually the screams turned to moans then silence.

"Are you hurt?" he asked, laying his hand on her shoulder. He took his cape, laying it around her. Bending he picked her up and carried her back to teh tee-pee.


Chepi:

Chepi gasped as Adahy walke din, carryign a woman covered with her brothers cape. There were silent tears on her face. Adahy walked over and lay her on the pallet. Seh immediately curled up tighter, her eyes going wide as she took in her surroundings.

"What are we going to do brother?" she asked her brother. Marshall cleared his throat.

"She's not from the tribe, is she?" Adahy shook his head.

"I've never seen her before..." he trailed off, looking at the woman. She was extrodinarly beautiful. He sighed, she probably didn't understand a word they were sayign,but hey, she might.
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Lillian:

Lillian looked at the people in front of her. It had been so long sense she had been in human form. So lng sense she had seen people like this.

"Where was she?" One of them asked. She listened intently curled up tight as pain still corsed through her body, though it was dull. She didn't know why she had taken so long to shfit to her human form. She had just felt better in the other form.

"The bay's corral." The other, Adahy, replied.

"Where was the bay?" The man asked.

"Gone." Adahy replied eyeing her. She dipped her head so that she was curled in almost a perfect ball.

"Both of you out. I'm going to make sure she is ok and get her in some clothes." The girl said. She heard the two men leave and then the girl's softer feet coming over to her side. "Come on, let's get you in something comfortable." LIllian felt the girl sit her up and she stayed curled in the cape. She was handed some clothes and she pulled them on. She got them on wrong several times and the girl tried to keep from laughing each time before she got them on right.

"T-t-this ok?" She finally aske.d The girl glanced at her surprised and then nodded.

"They don't fit amazingly, but they'll do better then Adahy's cape." The girl smiled. "I'm Chepi."

"Lillian." She replied moving around in the clothes. They felt weird and she really didn't like them.

Get used to it. You were the one that got yourself in this mix. If you had just shifted before now. Black said in her head. She sneered at him in her head. She heard the guy as if they could come back in and Chepi said yes. They walked in and sat back by the fire.

"Did you find the bay?" She asked. THey both looked at her surprised.

"No, there aren't any footprints leading away from teh corral either. We're not really sure what happened." The one named Marshal replied. She nodded and sat down her knees buckled under her as she sat.

I don't like these clothes. She told Black.

It's cause your not used to them. He replied. Please, come out here and ride me or something. My legs are getting cramped from this space.

I don't think I can pull that off. She sighed.

Please try.

"What are you doing here?" Marshal finally asked. He got glares from Adahy and Chepi but they both glanced at her as if wanting an answer too.

"I saw you catch the horses, and came to get Black back." She replied. "He got away a week back when soemone let him out and I haven't been able to catch him sense. Someone really startled him."
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*you haven't posted on marshall in awhile...*

Adahy:

Adahy eyed her suspiciouly. He didn't like the fact that teh horse all of a sudden disappeared. His ears perked up when her heard her explain why she was here. Marshall looked at him adn he shook his head. They had had their eyes on those two particular horse for almost a fortnight. There was no way he got out a week ago.

"Did you say he got out a week ago?" Adahy asked, perplexed.

"Ye...yes." the girl stammered.

"Immpossible. We've been watching that horse adn teh bay he was with for almost two weeks. There's no way." Teh girl looked helplessly between MArshall and Adahy. Chepi had backed up and was staring in space. Seh reached for Adahy.

"Ad..Adahy..." Adahy turned to look at her and rushed to her.

"What...what is it sister? What did you see?" Chepi pointed at the girl. Adahy looked at her, his expreession blank.


Calm, my child, calm. Sipi soothed in his head. There is many a thing to be done. Teh girl was sent ot you, be wise. Seh will become useful in time. The great Spirit Warrior is watching over her. the voice faded away. He stared at the girl.

"What is your name?"

"Lillian." Adahy frowned, then smiled.
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I claimed Marshall?

Ok then might as well quit because nobody replys to my post and i claimed Marshall and you've just said if maki drops out he wont be claimed.
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**Sorry :'(, I haven't really known what to post for him. :S. You dont' have to drop out Ma...Echelon.**

Lillian:

Lillian shifted her feet uneasily at the stares of both men. You didn't tell me they had been watching us that long! She hissed at Black.

I didn't know. Black replied. Sure got yourself in a mess this go round. What are you going to do?

I want to know more about them. When morning comes the bay will be back. I'll be gone. She said to him.

ANd if you come back, what will you say?

I'll face that when it comes. She replied.

"So, um, how do you think the bay got out?" She asked timidly.

"She couldn't have jumped the fence or else she would've done it before." Marshall replied. He was eyeing her weird.

"Well I didn't let her out!" She growled jumping up and crossing her arms. "Thank you for your hospitatliy. I'll let y'all be." She turned and stormed towards the door. Adahy stood in her way though.

"We didn't blame you. Please don't go." He said in a kind voice. She frowned and watched him warily. "WE have an extra cot, I'm sure you would be more comfortable here."

"I'll stay the night, but don't be surprised if I'm gone in the morning." She replied not getting close to him.
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*Umm.. well were is Marshall, she she'll be near by*
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***He's in the tepee with Adahy and the others. Meet him in the morning. Singer is going to post first in the morning. SOrry :S***
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ok then
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I'm confused....where am i?
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*In the tepee with the others. :P , but you can still do what I said in my message, it would be better I think. :P *
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Adahy:

Adahy was awoken by a sound, almost like someone was moving. Sighing, he looked around to see, the girl Lillian get up adn walk nervously out the Tee-pee. He silently groaned and got up, careful not to let her hear him. He silently followed her outside, his bare feet moving across teh soft ground silently. Lillian had stopped not far outside o the camp when she did something he didn't believe. One moment he was lookgin at teh beautiful women he had rescued, the next, teh bay they had caught teh day before stood in front of him. He took in a sharp breath. She couldn't be...a spirit warrior could she? He took a step forward, reaching for her. "Lillian?" ha called gently. Seh turned her head slightly tehn moved back away from him. He looked up into her dark eyes questionaly.

"Lillian?" he lifted his hand and laid it on her neck. She stepped back nervously before he felt teh quivering. Lillian, teh human, stood before him now, his hadn rested on her shoulder. He drew it away slowly.

"Guess you knwo my secret now." He smiled.

"YOur not alone." he whispere, his own form comign to life. He sunk down on all for of his paws before she could understand. She gasped as he transormed himself into his true form. He raised himself back on his feet, his human form taking over.

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*okay..i'm, just going to make a guy for my girl.*

Name: Deniel

Age: 25

Appearance: him This is what he looks liek before he cuts his hair...This is him now...him
change form: this is his change form

Personality: he's a loner, doesn't know who his family is, but he knows hes full-blooded indian. He remembers a girl, but not that much. He traveling in his form, which is a eagle. He doesn't know hwo he has teh ability to do it, but he can.

History: explained in his personailty.

other: is claimed by Chepi.
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Lillian looked at him surprised wrapping her arms tight around her.

"I-I didn't know there were others like me." She said softly.

"My sister can too." He smiled. "Where's your guardian?"

"The big black. I just call his Black." She said biting her lower lip.

"That's why the two of you seemed to have human traits." He nodded. She shrugged and then wrapped her arms tighter about her not being able to grasp it all.

You didn't tell me there were others.

I didn't know. Black replied. It's amazing.

"You can stay, you can trust us." Adahy said.

"I'll think about it. But if you don't mind." She shifted to her horse form and then ran at the corral jumping the fence and settling in it. He walked to the corral where Black was and let Black in with her. She shifted to her human form jumping on Black's back. "Thanks. I'm not the best with people, that's why I rather be in horse form."
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