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Lillian:

Lillian ran quickly along side Black her long legs streching out as she raced past him the rest of the herd following behind them. Black wasn't the stallion and neither of them were apart of this herd, but they could join any herd with no trouble and do as they wished.

You need to slow down, we're going to be traveling through a tribe's area and if they come hunting for horses I don;t want you warn out! Black warned.

I'll be fine, no one can catch me! She whinned tossing her head and racing off again. Black raced after her snorting as he did.

Your just going to pass up another tribe? Black demanded.

Yes, I haven't changed into my human form in a few years and I don't plan on doing that now. It might hurt! She challenged back. I'm a lot more free now then I am when I'm in human form anyways.

I just had to get stuck with you didn't I. He snorted. She nuzzled him with her nose and whinned at him. He snorted again and tehy raced through the parie.


Marshall:
Marshall stood in front of Adahy and smiled.

"THe herd is huge! And there are two horses in perticular that would be great to have. I've never seen a horse move as gracefully as they do." He said. "It wouldn't be hard to corner the horses and trap them at all."

"Where are they?" Adahy asked.

"Two miles due east. THey are moving quickly and heading this way."
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Adahy:

Adahy nodded. "ROund up some warriors. We need some new horses as it is." He walked to his Tee-pee, where his sister was waiting for him.

"Hello Chepi." Chepi was his nickname for her, meaning fairie. She looked like one. Her and himself had a special power no one else in the tribe had. They could shape-shift into animals. Chepi had another power...it was...weird. She could make balls of light and heal things with them. She could also see into the future.

"Hello Adahy." She walked over to him.

"Any visions?" he asked, concern on his face.


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Pandora

She sat in the green forest and watched the beautiful wolfs crawl to ctach there prey. She could see that one wolf were after a rabbit. The rabbit danced gracefully across the grass but suddenly the giant black wolf attacked the innocent creature.Pandora ran up to the wolf and stroked it soft fur.

"Goodboy"She said as she looked into keedy's grey diamond eyes.

She had callled the wolf that ever since she was young, Pandora had grew up with him. She spent most of her days watching the beautiful animal.

"I have to go Keedy" Pandora shouted as she left to see the houses.

Eric

He stood watching the crows fly around him. He loved to watch there beautiful wings and there dark eyes. They reminded much of his father as he used to play with them when he was young. He missed his father since he had moved in with his second wife. His mum had passed away and now Eric Potawotomi Draven lived alone.
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Adahy:

He continued to watch his sisters face.

"Yeah. I'm not sure what it means though. That's why I'm here. I need to speak to you."

He nodded. What the heck was wrong? he wondered, following his sister insided his tee-pee.


Chepi:

Chepi sighed. Thsi was very confusing, but she must tell her brother.

"Well?" he asked, sitting down crosslegged. She followed his action.

"I'm not sure actually. It was about a horse. A female horse." she caught her brothers eye. He nodded for her to continue. "I don't knwo why, but I think she's...I think she's like us."

"What do you mean...like us?"

"Well...she changed from a horse to an indian. She was really beautiful Adahy. I just got this feeling about her..." the were interuppted by Marshall, Adahy friend, who had come in, probably expecting his brother to be alone. Chepi blushed when he smiled at her.

"Sorry, Chepi. Um, Adahy, the men are ready." Adahy nodded.

"What men? Are we to go to war? What's going on?" she asked, standing up. Seh was no longer blushing, but her face was flushed with concern.

Adahy nodded at Marchall.

"I'll tell her."
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Marshall nodded and slipped back out of the tent walking over to his horse and jumping on it's back. He shivered and looked up in the trees behind him. Siren sat up high in the trees watching him.

YOu haven't shifted in a while. Sire purred from teh trees. You never came back and saw me!

I've been kept busy, I haven't had the time. He replied to her rubbing his horses neck.

No, you would rather ride that beast then me! You would rather ride a four legged animal then race with four legs! You are blessed with a gift, yet you don't use it! Siren hissed.

I will come out tonight then, how about that? He growled back.

I will only believe that when I see it. She replied leaving.


Lillian:

Lillian stopped at the watering hole and dipped her muzzle down into it drinkign deeply.

We need to get back to the herd. It is dangerous to travel alone. Black said drinking cautiously.

Stop fretting, we're in more danger of getting caught when we are with them then when we aren't. I am tired of them slowing us down too!

But we're not going anywhere in perticular. He replied nuzzling her neck. She snapped around biting his. She didn't like affection, even when it came from her oldest friend.

I don't care, I'll know when we're supposed to stay somewhere. She replied raising her head and prancing away.

Beauty was waisted on you. Black replied racing after her. I wouldn't mind finding a real horse that wasn't as stupid as you neither. SHe was used to his nagging, the way he talked to her.

[i]I'm sorry that this is how I am asupposed to look and that I seem to be the only horse that looks like this." She replied prancing back towards where they left the herd. She ran towards a fallen log and lept over it gracefully. Oh how she loved to run and jump, to just be free.


****Singer, maybe tehy can see her running and just playing around. Course she'll put up a fight. I don't want them to know she is human for a while. Maybe seperate her and Black. That would cause a camotion between the two. But when he tries to catch her can I write that, please. :P Also, she hasn't shifted in a while which means it'll be hard and painful for her.****
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Adahy:

Adahy rounded up the few warriors left in his tribe. After the last war, there wasn't many left. He sighed.

"Okay, we've spotted some horses not far from here, but we're mainly interested in two. We'll move in an hour.


Migisi:


Migisi sat down in her hut, meditating. A call came to her from outside. Rising, she went to greet her guardian.

Hello, Camarin, I've missed you. she spoke to the eagle as it landed on her up-helf arm.

Hello Chepi. I've missed you too. Camarin thought, as Chepi walked along teh borders of her tribe to the waters. Thoughtfully, she glanced at her guardian.

Camarin, may I ask you a question?

You can always ask me a question dear. Camarin was like a mother to her, but in a spiritual way. Camarin had found her shortly after her father had died and she had discovered her ability to shape-shift, along with her ability to see visions. Sometimes they scared her, but sometimes they confused her.

I had a vision.

What about my dear? They had reached the waters. Her brother had left already to round up new horses. She was hoping the horse in her vision would be the one they were hoping to get. Seh sighed.

It...was about...a horse. In my vision, there was a wild horse, and she shape-shifted into a human. She stopped. Do you think there are others out there like us? She looked out across the waters. The shade from teh old oak tree covered her, its moss hanging down like a shaw. It was a beautiful day.

Camarin looked out over the waters before replying. Only time will tell, my dear child.




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Marshall:

Marshall pushed his horse into a smooth canter as they headed towards where the horses should be. They stopped at the top of the ridge over looking the herd, making sure they wouldn't be seen or smelled.

"The bay and hte black are the ones that I think we should definatlly get. There are several other that are of good stock too." He said motioning towards the horses. The black moved towards the bay and she skitted away as if playing. Running around the herd and jumping everything in site. "I'd say the bay is four, tops."


Lillian:

There are humans around!Black hissed.

I don't care, let htem gawk, we'll get away, we always do. She whinned at him jumping higer then she needed to over a log and then stopping and looking at him. I wouldn't mind racing away from them. Your not getting to old are you. She laughed running circles around him.

Lillian! He hissed. If we have to run you are wearing yourself out!

Oh, but you know better then that, Black, I could run all day and still go! She said tossing her head arigently.

I hope you get caught and can't change, maybe it'll teach you something.

No! I'll just get away and take all their horses with me! She huffed. He shook his head and went back to grazing as if the humans were around. She could smell them, just faintly though.

Marshall:

Marshall wanted to laugh when he saw the bay tossing her head. It was like an arogent rebelious child facing her father. He looked towards Adahy for a command. THey had spread around circling the herd.

"Go for the black, MArshall, I'll get the bay." Adahy said. Marshall nodded and smiled, the Black would be smarter and harder to catch, that was for sure. He waited until Adahy gave the signal and the group moved quickly towards the herd. They were closer then they hoped before the herd reacted and he smiled, this might be easier then he thought. He watched as the bay's head shot up and her nosterals flared eyeing them. The Black rammed into her trying to get her to move, but she seemed to be challenging them. When they got within ten feet she skirted to the side and took off towards the hills the black at her tail. He raced after the black leaping skillfully from his horse onto it's back and held on tight as it started bucking like crazy. Being able to shift into a wild cat helped with teh fact that he was agile.

Lillian:

Lillian stopped when she saw the man on Black's back. She snorted and ran towards black not remembering the other rider that had followed. She felt him land on her back and she shivered, she didn't like this at all! She arched her back up wickedly and twisted around in mid air but he wouldn't get off. She lowered her head and raced towards the trees, he wouldn't stay on long if she could help it. SOmething slipped over her nose though and it was yanked back towards the pasture lands. She had to follow her nose to. She snorted and fought at it harder twisting her body around as much as she could to get rid of him. She ran straight forward and jumped high twisting around as she did. Stupid human just wouldnt get off though. She stopped suddenly and she felt him jerk forward a little. She twisted hard to the left and she felt him slip just a tad more. She was gaining ground on this. She twisted to the other side quickly, but he steadied himself and pulled hard on the noose around her muzzle making her so she couldn't move anywhere but back. She snorted as she tried to gain control. SHe didn't like this. The riders horse walked over and he tied something to her back and then tied the muzzle to it slipping off on his horse.

Lillian! Black screached in her head. She glanced towards him and saw some comtraption on him too. She fought the rope and bucked as much as possible.

Get it off! She begged him. He couldn't move any more then she could though. She finally acted wore out, she was tired, but she would get away> She waited for hte humans to let her lose thinking she would follow.

Marshall:

Marshall was suprised that it was easier to catch the black after the bay had been caught her tied the hard saddle on and then the noose to that causing the horse to just walk backwards pinning it's nose almost to it's chest. He watched the bay fight her contrants and then settle down.

"Don't untie her yet, she still has fight in her." He said fixing the Black's muzzle so he could walk forward but only very slowly and with effort. He knew the muzzle wasn't that bad, the horses only hurt themselves when they were on and they would learn fast to keep from it.

He moved the black close to the bay keeping they're muzzles away from each other and the bay reached towards the black. Adahy yanked her muzzle back so they wouldn't try and undo the bounds. The bay didn't like that and she started fighting again shoving her body into Adahy's horse.


**Ok, basically she can't go anywhere, and no I don't think such a contraption exists or would work. :P**
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can somebody bring me in please and read my last post.
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name: Shay

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appearance: Blonde hair, bluish greenish eyes, pale skin, short, thin.

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history: She doesn't remember much.

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eric claims shay!!
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alrightie then, Shay is claimed hehe
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Adahy:

Adahy grunted as he was knocked down by the bay. Quickly hooping back up, he grabbed teh mussle adn pulled the bays head down so he could look into ints eyes. "Calm down." he crooned, reaching to storke the horses neck. It bucked for a moment but slowly calmed down. "There, there. I'm not going to hurt you." he rubbed his hands up and down the bays neck.



Chepi:

Chepi paced along the waters edge, Camarin now perched on her shoulder.

Calm down child! Camarin scolded as Chepi almost tripped in teh rocks. She stopped and looked back over teh water, where teh shade of the big oak was starting to fade, because of the lowering sun.

I want to fly right now, fly and see whats happening, but I don't wan tot leave my tribe she told her guardian.

I know your restless child but you will just have to be patinent.

I don't knwo how. she replied simply, sitting down on a boulder.
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Lillian:

Lillian didn't know why, but the tone of his voice calmed her down at bit. That and Black's commands.

STop fighting, we'll sneak away later. Just quiet that stupid fighting. He hissed at her. She lowered her head a little and the man smiled rubbing her neck.

"Good girl." He cooed. She wanted to bite him hard, but she didn't, she would listen to Black sense she hadn't ealier.

Marshall:

"Let's get them back to the village." Adahy smiled. Marshall nodded and mounted his horse leading the other withhim. He felt like he was sitting ten feet high. He was happy they had caught these horses. The bay looked like she still wanted to fight, but she didn't. When they got back to the village they put the two horses in a tall corral and then the other horses in another. They took the contraptiosn off the horses and the bay started running around tossing her head and kicking at the fence while the Black just watched her snorting every now and then.

"She's a beauty." He smiled climbing to the top of the fence and watching her run. Adahy climbed up next to him and watched her too. She stopped across from them and snorted tossing her head.

"Sure is, let's seperate the two of them, see what happens." Adahy said jumping off the fence and getting some rope. THey got several others and quickly got the black out. They barely got out unscathed by the angry bay. When they finished Marshall smiled.

"Let's hope she doesn't break down that fence." He smiled.

Your very cruel to the poor animal! Selen hissed in his head. You put her in a small caged in space and take away her companion.

They would do worse to you, so get back to teh cave! He growled. She hurumphed and left.


Lillian:

Lillian didn't like this anymore. She couldn't see Black. She whinned for him, called out for him in her mind, but he didn't respond.

BLACK! She screeched for him. He had been taken to far away though, probably across the village. She kicked at the wood and then started running in circles madder then she had ever been. She stopped when she heard the gate open and the man from earlier walked in. He was one of the ones that took Black away. She snorted and pawed the ground tossing her head. What did he think he was trying to come in here and be nice to her after he took away her friend! She ran at him and he jumped to the side. She twisted around and snorted. He wasn't going to get out of this cage alive if she had anything to say about it. Suddenly pain shot through her body like needles and she felt her legs give otu from under her. She didn't nkow what caused these pain attacks, Black said it was because she hadn't changed in so long. She nipped at her side where the pain was and tried to get up, but more pain hit her. Black! She screamed again.

I'm here. He called from outside the fence. There were several men trying to pull him back to wherever he had been. Just relax She obeyed not moving a muscle and curling her head up under her neck. She shivered when she felt the man's hand run over her neck. She wanted to hurt him so bad, but the pain was a bigger problem. Don't hurt him!

Why not? She demanded as the pain subsided.

He's being gentle now, don't give any of them reason to be harsh. He hissed. She slowly got up and shook the dust off. I want you to change to your human form tonight. Black let himself be led away and she moved away from the man keeping her head lowered as she watched him.
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