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The Random Vampire Story [2]

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Colt---

Colt led her to the kitchen and started whiping up some eggs and making some omlets.


*Grrr*
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Caiden

She smiled as she watched there was something...hot about a guy cooking. He smirked at her, as if knowing what she was thinking about.
I just lost the game.




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Colt---

Colt smiled towards Caiden. "Something wrong?" He laughed wrapping his arms around her waist pulling her close.
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Caiden

She blushed, "no..."

He continued to smirk.

"Stop that," she said, "you're making it worse."
I just lost the game.




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Colt---

"Ah, now tell me, what am I making worse?" He asked pushing the pan off the hot surface.


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Caiden

"The urge to kiss you."

"Ah, and how is that bad?"

"I'm hungry."
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Colt---

"For what?" He laughed,

"Eggs." She replied. He kissed her then grabbed the food and took it to the table.
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Caiden

"I suppose this works too," she laughed stuffing a fork-ful in her mouth. "Okay you're teaching me how to cook eggs."
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Colt---

Colt laughed, "They can't be that good." He said putting some in his mouth. They tasted the same as he always made them.

"They are." She replied with a smile. He just shrugged and cleaned off his plate.
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Caiden
*Ahhhhhh nothing!!!!!*
I just lost the game.




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*cry*
I just lost the game.




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*tears*
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Caiden

Tristian started crying again, I stood up and went to go see what he needed. After he was fed and rocked back to sleep I turned around and smacked right into Colt.
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Colt---

"Slow down." Colt laughed hugging CAiden.


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