The Random Vampire Story [2]

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Fri Apr 11, 2008 12:13 am
TNCowgirl says... · Fri Apr 11, 2008 12:13 am
Colt---

Colt led her to the kitchen and started whiping up some eggs and making some omlets.


*Grrr*
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Fri Apr 11, 2008 12:25 am
Alice says... · Fri Apr 11, 2008 12:25 am
Caiden

She smiled as she watched there was something...hot about a guy cooking. He smirked at her, as if knowing what she was thinking about.
I just lost the game.
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Fri Apr 11, 2008 12:31 am
TNCowgirl says... · Fri Apr 11, 2008 12:31 am
Colt---

Colt smiled towards Caiden. "Something wrong?" He laughed wrapping his arms around her waist pulling her close.
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Fri Apr 11, 2008 1:30 am
Alice says... · Fri Apr 11, 2008 1:30 am
Caiden

She blushed, "no..."

He continued to smirk.

"Stop that," she said, "you're making it worse."
I just lost the game.
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Fri Apr 11, 2008 1:31 am
TNCowgirl says... · Fri Apr 11, 2008 1:31 am
Colt---

"Ah, now tell me, what am I making worse?" He asked pushing the pan off the hot surface.


*grrr*
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Fri Apr 11, 2008 1:52 am
Alice says... · Fri Apr 11, 2008 1:52 am
Caiden

"The urge to kiss you."

"Ah, and how is that bad?"

"I'm hungry."
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Fri Apr 11, 2008 2:05 am
TNCowgirl says... · Fri Apr 11, 2008 2:05 am
Colt---

"For what?" He laughed,

"Eggs." She replied. He kissed her then grabbed the food and took it to the table.
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Fri Apr 11, 2008 2:25 am
Alice says... · Fri Apr 11, 2008 2:25 am
Caiden

"I suppose this works too," she laughed stuffing a fork-ful in her mouth. "Okay you're teaching me how to cook eggs."
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Fri Apr 11, 2008 2:11 pm
TNCowgirl says... · Fri Apr 11, 2008 2:11 pm
Colt---

Colt laughed, "They can't be that good." He said putting some in his mouth. They tasted the same as he always made them.

"They are." She replied with a smile. He just shrugged and cleaned off his plate.
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Fri Apr 11, 2008 2:50 pm
Alice says... · Fri Apr 11, 2008 2:50 pm
Caiden
*Ahhhhhh nothing!!!!!*
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Fri Apr 11, 2008 3:01 pm
TNCowgirl says... · Fri Apr 11, 2008 3:01 pm
***Grrrrrrrr Me either***
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Fri Apr 11, 2008 3:03 pm
Alice says... · Fri Apr 11, 2008 3:03 pm
*cry*
I just lost the game.
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Sat Apr 12, 2008 5:36 pm
TNCowgirl says... · Sat Apr 12, 2008 5:36 pm
*tears*
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Sat Apr 12, 2008 7:25 pm
Alice says... · Sat Apr 12, 2008 7:25 pm
Caiden

Tristian started crying again, I stood up and went to go see what he needed. After he was fed and rocked back to sleep I turned around and smacked right into Colt.
I just lost the game.
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Sun Apr 13, 2008 12:34 am
TNCowgirl says... · Sun Apr 13, 2008 12:34 am
Colt---

"Slow down." Colt laughed hugging CAiden.


*grr*
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