The Outlaws

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"No one, really," Caden answered, shifting uncomfortably. "I'm a Council member, Molton's just held high in respect. We're really a self-governing peopole."
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"They want to talk to someone that has some control over the theives so they know who they will be workin with." Alex said.
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Caden glanced around. He didn't want to talk to the werewolves. "Talk to Molton," he said quickly. "Everyone trusts him."
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Just thought i'd tell everyone here that i'd be gone from Monday to Thrusday, though I may be able to get on Thrusday night. My characters at that time become community characters (except please don't kill them like we did Charcol :mrgreen:) until i get back. Please keep the story going while i am gone! :)
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I thought I'd desribe to you what my speed is like.

Liskano walked through the door. Everyone was still like they were frozen in time. There was to creatures were sitting across from Alex, he guessed they were Werewolves. Suddenly every thing speed back up to normal speed and Liskano appeared to everyone. "Friends of yours Alex?"
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"Yup," She replied trying to hide the surprise she felt. "This is Teskeno and Reseno his son. Teskeno is the pack leader." Teskeno nodded his head towareds Liskano.
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River

"I'll be careful Kasko and thank you. I don't know why you and your brother are helping but we appreciate it. If I don't make it, you know what to do and... and tell the others that I'm sorry." Kasko nodded and, with a single dagger in my belt, I dashed away. I was glad to see a shimmer of surprise waver across his face. So Liskano hadn't thought to tell him I was fast. A strange pair those two and I was determined to learn how to run like them, how to move beyond the barriers of time itself.

As I reached the outskirts of the camp I slowed down. Even so, the boundary guards made a huge fuss.
"Where did yeh come from girl?" One demanded.
"I wish to see who is in charge here," I replied. The two guards snorted and smirked.
"No chance. No one sees him."
"I will. I will see him if I have to find him myself and then I'll be sure to get you two punished for not keeping a proper guard."

The first guard snarled at that and lunged for me but I side stepped him. By some luck he hadn't expected my speed and he stumbled then fell to the ground. His partner began to laugh.
"You're a pretty girl. Where are yeh from?" The second guard queried.
"The underground City. I'm a member of the council."
"Oh you are, are you?" The first guard dragged himself to his feet, "Then I'm sure you know something about the poison."
"Perhaps but I am here to talk to your leader so please direct me to him."

The first guard seemed reluctant but I did convince them to take me into the heart of a camp where a large tent was erected. Outside they searched me and the first guard sneered at my dagger.
"You was planning on assassinating him, yes?" He chuckled.
"No. The dagger is for self defense," I replied. He smirked again and placed it in a sheaf in his belt. Bad idea with a thief around. As he turned to lead the way inside, I reached out and hurriedly transfered my weapon back to my own belt and then turned to follow him.

The tent was large and over elaborate for a temporary home but what interested me most was the shadowed figure in the corner. He was sat in a chair, draped with black cloth and I couldn't even make out if he was human. The two guards stopped me from approaching him. The conversation that followed between us was as expected. He laughed at my suggestion that he not attack the city, ordered his guards to make an example of me and then I ducked their lunges, turned their daggers on them and raced from the camp back to Kasko. Time for plan B if I made it out alive.
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An hour passed; no River. "Well, time to be doing this." Without a second thought Kasko was gone.

When he reached the camp he slowly weaved through the still guards. Placing poison into barrels here and there. But what he was really doing was looking for River. Then he spotted her.

She was moving faster than the rest. Kasko grabbed her hand and pulled her into his speed.
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"I see," Liskano said.

"Why do you guys always pop in like that," Caden called from behind Liskano.

"Oh, well, it be good when you want to steal. Makes it very easy, to the owner it be like their items just disappeared." Caden rolled his eyes. "So these be the wolves that will help us, Alex."
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"Yea, but they want to know that y'all aren't gonna turn on em." She said, looking out the window. Nothing seemed to be moving.

"We want to know we can trust you." Reseno said his voice not as deep as his fathers.
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"I won't turn on you, Elvin honor," Liskano said. "If I know I can trust then my brother will give you his Elvin honor. And trust me there's nothing more tristing than an Elvin honor."
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Treseno nodded to this, he was satasfied.

"I'm going back to teh pack." He said, "Resno stay with Alex." Resno nodded as his father walked off.
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River

I felt a hand grasp my own and suddenly I was running faster than I have ever run before. I can't explain it but somehow my feet knew how to keep up and the scenery, rather than racing by, stood still. We passed frozen soldiers, unwavering grass and then trees with their branches held at strange angles, flowers that stood eerily still and finally a town where the figures were like statues. I didn't even have a chance to ask about the poison but I noted the empty vials in his pockets.

In mere minutes Kasko and I reached Molton's Inn and only after entering did he allow me to slow and release my hand.
"Thanks," I smiled, a little out of breath.
"Not again," Caden muttered, spinning round to face us. "Don't tell me you're running as fast as those two!"
"I had a helping hand," I replied, "And I'm sorry but they weren't prepared to negotiate."
"You actually be thinking they would be?" Liskano asked curiously.
"No. She be doing it because she promised her friend," Kasko replied.
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Reseno


Reseno watched the people moving about, and the two run in rather fast. He was surprised, he had never seen anyone go that fast.

"Alex, when are they planning on the attack?" He asked quietly.

"They haven't really set a time, at least not htat i know of." She replied back in her soft tone. She usually tired to use a harsh voice though never succeded.
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Caden couldn't take his eyes off of the younger werewolf, then his eyes widened in horrible realization. I've called these things dogs! quietly, he slipped out of the room. hopefully Alex wouldn't say anything about it.
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