I'm looking for some help

I'm writing a book, and I'd like some help. The basic premise is Zita, my MC, runs away from her life-long adopted home in a fictional queendom called Fable (there's a history there, I'm really big on the world-building, there are no coincidences) and runs into some people on the road. Those people are called slavers (but she doesn't know that at first) and she's saved by a boy named Kivvien, who kills them all and thoroughly freaks her out, but, she knows she won't survive on her own, so she goes with him to a 'kid stop' which is basically a safe place for kids who don't have anywhere else to go. The plot revolves around the slavers being taken down, but there are a few plot twists that keep things interesting, along with some subplots I think are fun.

Hi! I really like your story and if you’d like us to be buddies, I’d be more than happy to do so!

Okie doki, we can chat about that when we're both online okay?