Burning Rejection

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Danni88
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Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:24 pm
Danni88 says... · Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:24 pm
I glare at her. "Freak."
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Bellarke
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Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:26 pm
Bellarke says... · Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:26 pm
I just grin right back, Average Julia. NO talent.
"Hoe."
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fatherfig
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Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:29 pm
fatherfig says... · Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:29 pm
Um sure,"I think it looks great, and um, sure!", I say nervously looking away and then looking her in the eyes and waiting for a response.
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Danni88
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Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:29 pm
Danni88 says... · Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:29 pm
"Slug." I snap back.
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Bellarke
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Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:32 pm
Bellarke says... · Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:32 pm
"Could you carry the bigger one for me?" I hand him the picture of Thor, holding it out to him. "That's grand, Julia. I didnt offer to let him stay with me . You did. I was tryna get 'em outta my car."
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Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:35 pm
Danni88 says... · Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:35 pm
"At least I was trying to help him. You just wanted to get rid of him."
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Bellarke
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Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:39 pm
Bellarke says... · Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:39 pm
"BECAUSE HE BROKE INTO MY CAR! NOW GET OUTTA MY WAY, OR I'LL RUN YOU OVER!" I nearly yell.
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Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:41 pm
Danni88 says... · Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:41 pm
I pull out my mobile. "Threatening me now, are ya? Do that once more and I'm calling the cops."
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Bellarke
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Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:43 pm
Bellarke says... · Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:43 pm
"OHH. Been there, done that, J." I grin evily, I hate that evil, selfish bitch!
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fatherfig
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Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:44 pm
fatherfig says... · Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:44 pm
"Yeah, sure." If I shredded the thing she would probably go through with drawls,"So is it like an art project?", I say holding it, I look at the other girl, "That was kindoff mean I didn't know it was that different In alaska we have, well it is silly really, these things called manners.", He looks back at her,"Um, Well I wouldn't say she was that mean at least she didn't call me a slug!"
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Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:46 pm
Danni88 says... · Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:46 pm
"I've known this girl for a long time, and trust me, she defines the word slug. You don't want to fall in with that lot."
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Bellarke
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Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:50 pm
Bellarke says... · Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:50 pm
"It is for Art. I am going to submit it for another art contest. I have won 10 already." I smiles, at him. "Thanks for the help by the way. I am Isabelle."

Then, I look at Julia. "me??" I laugh. "You, lets see. Lets remember the ball team, shall we."
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Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:51 pm
Danni88 says... · Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:51 pm
Shoot "That... er..."
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Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:52 pm
Bellarke says... · Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:52 pm
"Now. Let. Me. Through." I push past her, leading the way to the Art hall.
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Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:54 pm
Danni88 says... · Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:54 pm
I shoot daggers after her.

((I thought you said her name was Isabelle))
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