Finding Light

So the first post of this was locked and I dunno how to unlock it, plus it was kind of dead before hand anyway, hahh. You can see it here if you wish. viewtopic.php?f=201&t=89339&p=928067#p928067
Hello there. So I've been here for a while and I decided to start up my very first Storybook (yay)! Now since I haven't done anything like this before you'll have to bare with me (and give advice along the way, hahha).

Now I haven't given a rating yet as I do not mind how vulgar your posts are. Which I hope will make people feel a lot more easier to put whatever they want. However if someone is a little uncomfortable please tell me and I shall put a limit. Now for some rules. Please no God like characters. Talk to other people to find out more of there characters. And there is a limit to how many people in this Storybook (seeing as it's my first ever one ^^'). The limit is five. Sorry!
(In fact the limit may be lower as two other people posted their characters before and I would like to talk to them and see if they are still on board)

Now for the plot!

There are four main planets; Neroi, Usewa, Mehic and Jelof. Neroi is filled with wildlife, fresh air and too many trees. Whereas Usewa is a place filled with factories and urban lifestyle. Mehic takes a futuristic tone with flying cars and laser guns. Then there is Jelof, a place without a sun, all citizens live near the core and are filled with dark days.

For a long time each of these planets lived peacefully beside each other. Until now. According to the people of Jelof they no longer want to live in a world of darkness. So they begged their neighbouring planets to give them some help with recovering light and warmth to their world. And when that didn't happen they started war. Before long each planet was ready to kill one another.

Which is where this story takes place. Your character is from one of these planets believed that what your planets army is doing is right. However just a little part of you wants this to stop. You want to try and help Jelof get light back. However you know if you express your feelings only execution awaits you. That's when you discover five other people just like you (the rest of the characters). You band together ready to take on everything you've been told about the evil of those other planets.

So here is what you need to fill in.

Name:

Nickname/Likes to be called(if any):

Age:

Sex:

Looks:

Outfit:

Power(if any):

Weapon(if any):

Strength:

Weakness:

Home Planet:

Personality:

Fun Facts:

History:

Now each character does(or did) have a father. Now each man from each household was involved within this war somehow. So give some info on what the father thinks.

So I hope this is a good enough starting point for my very first Storybook. Please tell me what could be better and please submit your character.

Oh almost forgot to add my character.

Name: Deloi Hail

Likes to be called: Green

Age: 18

Looks: Somewhat tall with dark green hair that reaches her waist. Along with her dark green is her equally green eyes which gave her the nickname Green.

Outfit: Wears a bronzed colored tank-top, a white shawl is tied around her waist, she also has a bronzed colored knee length skirt that is neatly ripped up her left leg. On her feet she wears leather buckled boots.

Weapon: Uses a set of laser guns which she keeps within her shawl.

Strength: Good with long/short range wepons. So finds it comfortable with using guns.

Weakness: Finds one-on-one combat difficult and uses her fists (or sword if near by) as a last resort.

Home Planet: Mehic

Personitly: Deloi is a girl that enjoys to laugh and is normally one to look on the brighter side of things. She is one to charge head first within a battle which leads to carelessness. She is most likely to start an argument and always thinks her answer is right. However when the chips are down Deloi is most certainly able to find a joke within the darkest times.

Fun Facts: Because she is used to living within Mehic she despises most things involving nature.

History: Growing up she was a child that enjoyed to learn of new things. She grew up with a normal childhood, which she always classed as boring. Because of her green colour combo she was somewhat bullied so didn't have much friends, she tries to make up for it now. When her father first started in the war she begged him not to go. However when he left for the battlefield she left home. A year has passed and she hasn't heard anything of her family.

If anyone has anything they think I should add please tell me. So happy character making

~ G.G (Gamergirl)

Spoiler

HI! Good luck with this SB... and sorry for any grammar mistakes, english is not my native language.

Name: Dinet Siduza

Nickname/Likes to be called: Din

Age: 43

Sex: Male

Looks: Has a short, black beard and is pretty much bald. Very chunky and with tattoos on his arms, because his boss uses them to recognize his workers.

Outfit: Almost always has old and dirty clothes, if not using working outfit.

Power: Nuclear radiation from all the factories grants him supernatural strength, although he doesn't knows that.

Weapon: None. Workers are forbidden to use weapons.

Strength: Close combat, especially using fists. He could knock out anyone with just one punch, and he resists many kinds of pain, due to his husky body.

Weakness: He has a mental weakness to rebel... He follows orders whether bad or not, because of fear. So, fear is his main weakness.

Home Planet: Usewa

Personality: He is calm and serious, with many humbleness and loyalty. He talks too much when getting to know someone, and is a great friend, but somewhat closed when it comes to meeting new people, though. If someone wants to start fight, Dinet tries everything to avoid it and keep peace; however, what really bugs him is injustice: he really feels the pain of others, but is unable to do anything, or that's what he thinks.
He really wants to change the world. To be different, be a voice in the middle of silence. But he can't.

Fun Facts: Smelling fresh air is like an ecstasy to him, due to the great quantity of gases in Usewa.

History: Usewa is a very dirty and corrupt planet where there is work for everyone. This means Dinet had to work since he was a child, because the Government of Usewa kills anyone who doesn't labors, just to avoid population growth. When his father went to war, this didn't affect him much, because his people where very used to see deaths constantly. His father died. His mom died too, due to excessive work. And his brother, the only family he got, was invited by a friend to move to Mehic. So Dinet now works alone, with just a few friends and a dull life.

Name: Zaria Lux
Nickname: Zee
Age: 22
Gender: Female
Appearance: Zee is on the taller side, with an athletic build. She has pale blue skin and dark blue lips. Her eyes are iridescent indigo, and her hair is pitch black, and is usually tied up in some sort of knot. She has an angular face, and toned muscles.
Outfit: Zee wears a black sleeveless tunic with silver trim, and knee-length skin-tight black shorts. She has a silver belt and sash, which wraps around her waist and over both shoulders. She wears black elbow-length gloves, and knee-high boots with silver laces.
Power: Zee sees things before they happen (although it's a few seconds before at best).
Weapon: Zee carries a laser gun, just in case, but she prefers fighting with her plasma sword or her crescent knives.
Strengths: Zee is very good at close-range combat. She's also a fast runner.
Weaknesses: Zee isn't as good with a laser gun as she'd like to be.
Home planet: Mehic
Personality: Zee is generally a straight arrow. She's intelligent and sure of herself, and is comfortable in a leading role. She's very motivated and stubborn, and won't give up easily. She's competitive, and likes to stage little athletic contests with friends. Zee is loyal to her friends, but she can be cold and careless with people she doesn't like. She tends to be optimistic, and can usually find good qualities in everyone.
Fun Fact: Zee is a very good lev-car driver.
History: Zee grew up in a military family. From a very early age, she enjoyed athletics and sparring. She trained as a warrior, and became very good at her craft. Her father is a high-ranking officer in Mehic's army. He has been in combat in earlier wars, but not the one between the planets. He mostly deals with strategy and battle tactics, so although he's in no danger, Zee doesn't get to see him often. He taught her a lot of what she knows about fighting and about the war.

We've got two awesome characters so far! Let's keep 'em coming!

Hey! I applied for this before on the old YWS, but things have changed and my character bio has gone. I'll run another though!

Name: Alexander Lymn

Nickname/Likes to be called(if any): Xander

Age: 17

Sex: Male

Outfit:http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110830005349/camphalfbloodroleplay/images/thumb/f/fe/Anime_Emo_Boy-27-.png/361px-Anime_Emo_Boy-27-.png

(You're going to have to copy and paste that for the moment until I sort the link out!)

Power(if any): Xander's relation to his mental illnesses has rewarded him with the ability to manipulate emotions, whatever Xander feels, the people around him too feel.

Weapon(if any): No weapon, just the above!

Strength: Brilliant at rational choices and knows exactly what to do in a crisis.

Weakness: Prefers to work alone and can get a bit aggressive and power-mad when his schizophrenia kicks in. He is also a xenophobe and fears new things.

Home Planet: Neroi

Personality: Xander has a long fuse and doesn't tend to get annoyed by small things. However, his schizophrenia often takes control of him and forces in into situations that he normally would not like.

Fun Facts: Xander's knowledge of fungal plants and bacterium is outstanding and he can create cures for most ailments and illnesses.

History: Xander was born whilst his father was away at war. His father despised the war and did not see the issue with giving Jelof help. In fact, he was part of the Lighting The Darkness organisation on Neroi until conscription forced him to fight. Xander grew up only knowing his mother's views, which were similar to his fathers, but with less interest. Xander's mother often committed adultery and brought many different men back into the home while his father fought on enemy territory. Xander grew up a peaceful life, he always expected someone different to be in his house when his mother returned from a night out and assumed this was normal. He was home schooled and had little association with the outside world, which, according to many therapists is what caused his schizophrenia to develop. Without a friend, Xander had to make his own. Soon this friend became more powerful, as Xander trusted it more and the alter-ego became more and more likely.

Xander always dreamed of the outside world, where the trees grew and the flowers blossomed, but his mother, he told him it was dangerous, far too dangerous. This trust in his mother's words slowly caused Xander to fear anything new and strange. He began to fear the men his mother brought home, but he was too weak to do anything. It was not until one night, when his mother came home early that he took action. His alter-ego took control and killed them both, his mother and the man she was with. Attacking them constantly, from what the post-mortem stated was, "More than a few hours".

Xander was not found in the home, and had escaped into the outside world. He lived in the forests of Nerio until his fourteenth birthday when he returned to society and caught a ship to Usewa. He did not know where he was going, he just wanted to escape. The destination was a surprise for him though, no trees? No flowers? This place was strange, but he soon implemented himself into their society and now lives in a squat with seven other teenage children.