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The Silver Bullet Club: Ophiuchus DT



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Thu Jun 26, 2014 6:32 am
AlmondEyes says...



The Empathetic outsider still has a hand in.
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Thu Jun 26, 2014 1:09 pm
wordsandwishes says...



I'm going to be busy working this summer, so I won't be able to post very frequently if at all, but if I am able to find the time, then Em's still in.
  





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Thu Jun 26, 2014 4:17 pm
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Lys is still in.
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Sun Jun 29, 2014 3:56 am
EloquentDragon says...



Dan, I really like the plot suggestion there.

Unfortunately, I leave to head south tomorrow and won't be back until the end of July. I'll be here the week of the 14th... so anyway, sorry I didn't see this sooner, I could have got a post in.

IN THE MEANTIME (while I'm gone)
Sure, you can get Eli arrested. Although maybe the club should suspect him first before the police take him in. I also know that Eli would be one who would run from the police, as opposed to just going quietly. But I won't be around to handle the chase so... BUT don't let that stop you. Have him get arrested or whatever, and I can backtrack a bit when I get back.

As for Israel becoming a feux-ally... EXCELLENT idea. I haven't really defined his character that much, sorry about that. Treat him like an older, wiser, and much more sarcastic version of Eli, I suppose. He can sort of act like a NPC... anyone can use him in their post, I won't get offended. (He's the antagonist, afterall. *ahem.*)

With all that being said, good luck you all, have fun, and do something dramatic. I'll see you in two weeks.
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Sun Jun 29, 2014 4:43 am
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So who's posting next, then?
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Sun Jun 29, 2014 5:36 am
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Is everyone at the manor or no?
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Sun Jun 29, 2014 5:47 am
AdventurerDaniel says...



Everyone with the exception of Akiza.
So much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow
glazed with rain
water
beside the white
chickens.
Red Wheel Barrow by- William Carlos Williams
  





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Sun Jun 29, 2014 5:53 am
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Here's a question. Why would they suspect Eli of murdering Amanda in the first place?
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Sun Jun 29, 2014 6:05 am
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I was actually about to point that out, they would have no reason to have Eli arrested beyond him having no alibi.
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Sun Jun 29, 2014 6:07 am
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Then they would have to arrest the other members of the club that had no alibi....>.>
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Sun Jun 29, 2014 1:03 pm
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But what if Eli had some sort of weird absences during the time she was missing? After all, he found Amanda... which is kinda the ideal excuse for someone *not* to have killed them. That's cause for suspicion.
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Sun Jun 29, 2014 3:31 pm
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Seems plausible. While Eli's on the run, I'll use that as a chance for him to meet Akiza.
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Thu Jul 03, 2014 3:04 am
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So who's going to post?
"What is dead my never die, but rises again, larger and stronger..."

*Ride like Lightening, crash like Thunder*


"Ask me no questions, and I'll tell you no lies..."
  








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