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Sat Jul 20, 2013 9:58 pm
veeren says...



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Sat Jul 20, 2013 10:09 pm
StoneHeart says...



Well, at least we know he still exists.
For I who am poor have only my dreams
I spread my dreams under your feet . . .

. . . tread softly for you tread on my dreams.


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Sun Jul 21, 2013 2:19 am
KatKage says...



BlackNether12 wrote:And yours, KatKage, was SERIOUSLY INSPIRING! Unheard of good! Nice work on it! >> However . . . I suggest you try to tame it down a bit. You can put in a lot of the details you have here, later on. In your posts. Try it?


Thank you XD *Is personally extremely content with how she described the appearance >u>* (Although how I wrote the history was . . . a little lacking <u>''')

And: Sorry!!! <u>'''' *can't not be detailed <u>''' (especially with history <u>'')* I'll try to keep the next one a little more vague ''X3 (In my third profile, I made the History already so it's quite detailed, but I put the big detailed part in a spoiler so as not to spoil the surprise :3 *Tis still there for you to approve though XD*)

So, I got a lot more hours at work than I thought I did (More money to afford college=good, less free time to even sleep=bad ;n;) so the other two aren't done yet, and I worked all today, and I'm gonna work all tomorrow (*sais ;n;*)
However! I have a small window of free time tomorrow at noon/at night (I get home at 9 ;n;) I'll try to get atleast the majority of them done <u>'' (*One of them won't take too long at all, but it wouldn't make any sense if I posted it before the third one I'm working on <u>*)

Oh! One more thing!
Spoiler! :
; I'm sorry for not having any pictures for my character/characters yet, But! I kinda have a plan to draw them out myself :3 *Twould be good practice, plus I'd be more satisfied than if I tried to search for a picture :3* No Promises!, since I don't have too much free time at the moment/have other projects I'd like to work on, but I think I could atleast get some line-art by the time I finish posting for all three of my characters X3 Again, No promises!! <u>'' *Just wanted to explain why she didn't have any pictures (yet) '':3* It would be ok, yeah? :3 (*Still sucks, but thinks it could turn out well X3*)


Oh! and again another thing: You didn't happen to get the banner/name on the SB page from the song 'Land of Confusion' by Genesis, did you? :3 *Was just listening to it the other day and realized the name was the same as on the SB :3* (Tis ok if you didn't: *Is just curious XD*)
I am a Leaf on the Wind,
Watch me Soar
~
Kyrie Eleison down the road that I must travel,
Kyrie Eleison through darkness of the night
  





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Sun Jul 21, 2013 2:59 am
StoneHeart says...



Sounds good -I totally understand the detail thing. It's cool.

Rm, slow is slow . . . can't be helped.

And no, I didn't actually >> O.o Never heard of the song.

<>:D<>
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I spread my dreams under your feet . . .

. . . tread softly for you tread on my dreams.


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Sun Jul 21, 2013 3:07 am
KatKage says...



Ah XD Well, here it is if you want to give it a listen XD tis a pretty good song :3
I am a Leaf on the Wind,
Watch me Soar
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Kyrie Eleison down the road that I must travel,
Kyrie Eleison through darkness of the night
  





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Sun Jul 21, 2013 3:11 am
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StoneHeart says...



O.o *examines.
For I who am poor have only my dreams
I spread my dreams under your feet . . .

. . . tread softly for you tread on my dreams.


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Sun Jul 21, 2013 4:40 am
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Jony says...



So, I'm going to be gone starting tomorrow for five days. I won't have internet access, so I won't be able to catch up with everything as they happen. I will post today and then won't be able to post till I get back.

If someone would be kind enough to keep Enn active in the storybook through your posts, that would be awesome and I would appreciate it a lot.
β€œIn a Wonderland they lie, Dreaming as the days go by, Dreaming as the summers die:
Ever drifting down the stream- Lingering in the golden gleam- Life, what is it but a dream?”
― Lewis Carroll, Through the Looking Glass


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Sun Jul 21, 2013 4:50 am
StoneHeart says...



I could see about it.
For I who am poor have only my dreams
I spread my dreams under your feet . . .

. . . tread softly for you tread on my dreams.


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Sun Jul 21, 2013 10:38 am
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Mind if I join? I've read the entire SB, so don't say I can't!
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Sun Jul 21, 2013 3:06 pm
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Haha, it'd be GREAT if you could join! :D We could use a few more people.

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For I who am poor have only my dreams
I spread my dreams under your feet . . .

. . . tread softly for you tread on my dreams.


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Sun Jul 21, 2013 3:28 pm
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Okay, @KatKage for that Summary.


My character, the Inarvi, has been recruited by a Senetran General to find people with outstanding abilities to help fight the Dern fleet. He's just leaving the General's headquarters to start looking around. He's got a few weeks before results are really needed.

My other character is just wandering around in eastern Kyrome.

Maleficent's two characters, and jon's character, all have met up somewhere in Kyrome (a city).

Jordin's one character is looking for umaima's character (who ran away from her father -a general), who's guarded by his other character.

I don't know what AQ's character's are doing.

I don't know what Camulaeus (the dead's) character is.

Carina has yet to post (so I don't know where her character is).

KatKage is still working on her profiles.

kayfortnight's one character (Dern) is in Senetra, marching for the border with the rest of the army. Her other character is in the capital (getting a hint of what Ether's up to).


And . . . uhm, that's about it. Ether's job is going to be given away a bit, Derns are gonna come for him, and probably one of ya'lls character's is gonna help him out and he's going to meet the others in different circumstances than he'd assumed.

:D


Spamming @VeerenVKS @VeerenVKS @VeerenVKS @VeerenVKS @VeerenVKS . . . you asked for it.

@Aquestioning has grounded excuses, but I do still need his post.

I'm PM'ing @Camulaeus to see if he's still alive (if he doesn't reply after a few days then his character's up for dibs.

. . . those who have not posted yet . . . post.

:D
For I who am poor have only my dreams
I spread my dreams under your feet . . .

. . . tread softly for you tread on my dreams.


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Sun Jul 21, 2013 3:32 pm
veeren says...



You know I only get one notification for that right.
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Sun Jul 21, 2013 3:40 pm
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-_- Meh, what a pity.

@maleficent My character, Ether, is going to be looking around for anybody special (moving very fast), but doesn't really know where to start. He could go to Kyrome, run into a group of Derns (more than he can handle), they'll chase him, and he'll run into ya'll . . . and you could help him out, seeing as the three of you are pretty good at fighting >>, thus forging a bit of a primary step toward a first step 0)

Thoughts?
For I who am poor have only my dreams
I spread my dreams under your feet . . .

. . . tread softly for you tread on my dreams.


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Tue Jul 23, 2013 6:49 pm
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barefootrunner says...



Anyone who posts in this SB within 24 hours of this message, gets a high-quality review on any work they choose and a gift from me :)

I love the idea for Confusion, so I really want it to move on! Let's make this THE SB to be in!
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Tue Jul 23, 2013 7:34 pm
maleficent says...



@BlackNether12

Yeah, that sounds good :D
You can be the new addition to our little party of awesome. :twisted:
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