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Mon Jun 10, 2013 1:36 pm
StellaThomas says...



Hey guys! I know we're mainly using WFPs for brainstorming but not everyone is able to use them properly and also it's fun to have somewhere to summarise and stuff :)

The storybook is here: The Little Fairy [Full]

Anyway so as far as story plot goes right from the very beginning we have this:

-we're going to start on a... summer's? autumn's? day when Jerald is out hunting in the castle grounds and wanders a little too close to the Veil, is injured and falls through a so-called chink
-Robyn spots this, for one reason or another, and rushes to save him. She risks her own life to bring him back to the human side as the fairy dust filled air is killing him
-There, she stays by his side briefly and sings to him but leaves as she hears people approaching up the drive
-The approaching traffic is the convoy from the South, with Princess Leila and Prince Farid
-Jerald wakes up to see the face of Princess Leila and assumes she is the owner of the beautiful singing voice.

Then Robyn will go to the Profwitch (for whom we need a better name) and general... stuff will happen.

If you guys want to check in here and add what your current plans for your characters are, I would very much appreciate it!

-Stella x
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Mon Jun 10, 2013 2:22 pm
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Checking in!
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Mon Jun 10, 2013 2:40 pm
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*creeps in*

Could we think of Profwitch's name and appearance, pretty please?
(though I am sort of fond of Mr Profwitch)
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 5:32 am
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 12:17 pm
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Stella, I Hopefully will have Cedars profile to you by tonight or tomorrow.
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 1:46 pm
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StellaThomas says...



Amazing :) Sage's profile looks great, Aria!

I am wondering if maybe we should change the names in the sidebar, everyone's name is going to be like a paragraph long. That said, I kind of like it that way :P what do you guys think?
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 2:12 pm
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xD I merely followed someone's example withe the paragraph long name :p
I like it that way, though. So what if they're long, not like there's so many characters to create some kind of infinite list longer than the page itself. And it's actually pretty cool, makes us think of what their full names and titles even are :3
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 2:51 pm
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I know, I did it by mistake, then I just left it! :P Ah well, we'll leave it for now. If it gets annoying we can change it, but for now let's keep it
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 3:03 pm
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I personally think it's charming :3

Cedar has a reasonably short title considering he's only a guard but hey- he still has his. XD
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 3:26 pm
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Ah, but you can always have it be "First officer of Personal Royal Guard of Princess Sage blablabla of the Land of Fey" xD

I think I'm kidding.
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 3:34 pm
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So Aria- did you decide to make Cedar Sages personal bodyguard? Thanks for asking me first. XD but I love it. totes makes things easier for me :3
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 4:17 pm
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Shadowlight wrote:So Aria- did you decide to make Cedar Sages personal bodyguard? Thanks for asking me first. XD but I love it. totes makes things easier for me :3


...I only figured that'd be the only way he'd ever be able to get close enough to her chambers. And we sort of need him there, no? :3
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 7:55 pm
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Profile will be up when I get the chance (Aka, once I finish it).
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Wed Jun 12, 2013 12:16 am
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Oh that sounds delightful Aria- yesssss
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Wed Jun 12, 2013 7:15 am
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Mah profile is up! ^-^

Also, don't judge me. He's so cute and he looks like his sister, kinda, so. ;D
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