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Sat Apr 27, 2013 8:30 am
winterbites says...



Just saying, MrWinters, but that picture ^ looks really cute. :3
I've got you under a spell and I don't think I'll be letting you out~ If Only She Knew Voodoo Like I Do, Get Scared.
  





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Sat Apr 27, 2013 10:03 am
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ToBeMe says...



Just while we're on 'that' topic THAT IS AWESOME!!!!! :3 ... and I wan't one!

Anyhow, on another note, this is going pretty good at the moment. Good job everyone. :)
EVERY DAY MIGHT NOT BE GOOD...
BUT THERE IS SOMETHING GOOD IN EVERY DAY.


Don't be sorry your darkness is gone. I'll carry it for you.
Always. I'll keep it with mine.


Gotta catch em all!
  





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Sat Apr 27, 2013 12:44 pm
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MrWinters says...



Thanks. I don't know why anyone wouldn't want one of those cute little guys. :3
Also slightly on topic, I am horrible at naming things, so any suggestions on a name for the new crawler would be much appreciated.

And I have to agree, things are getting really good!
  





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Sat Apr 27, 2013 12:51 pm
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therealme says...



@MrWinters mmmm i dunno, something cute. like squeak! or scrappy, or something along those lines :)
"It is our Light, not our darkness, that most frightens us."
  





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Sat Apr 27, 2013 12:56 pm
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MrWinters says...



I can't decide between doing something cute and random like I did with Cabbage (R.I.P), or just having a simple name that doesn't fit at all, like Steve.
  





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Sat Apr 27, 2013 1:24 pm
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therealme says...



Cabbage wasn't random! he was green... like a cabbage ;) at least that's what i thought. Steve is funny, something like that would also be good.
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Sat Apr 27, 2013 1:37 pm
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MrWinters says...



Honestly, I made him green so that he could fit the name better. Cabbages are just the first thing that come to mind when I try to think of something random.
Anywho, I'm sure I'll be able to decide on something eventually.
  





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Sat Apr 27, 2013 1:41 pm
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therealme says...



the first thing that popped into your mind was cabbage?
Jeez, i don't even want to know what's going on in that head of yours hahaha :D
"It is our Light, not our darkness, that most frightens us."
  





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Sat Apr 27, 2013 1:55 pm
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barefootrunner says...



How about celery? Or rhubarb? Perhaps some... *checks fridge* pumpkin or butternut would be in order? On a different line, how about cootie, mite or beastie? Cabbage was the best, though :D
"Not everything that counts can be counted, and not everything that can be counted counts" - Einstein
  





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Sat Apr 27, 2013 1:59 pm
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therealme says...



this may be a stupid idea but why not call this new crawler Cabbage II (as in Cabbage the second)? it would be kind of funny and random since the new crawler isn't even green.
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Sat Apr 27, 2013 3:35 pm
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MrWinters says...



Okay, so I know I'm gonna name him in my next post, but I'm still not sure what it's gonna be. I've narrowed it down to Loki (because he's going to be a big trickster), Cabbage II, or some other random noun.
  





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Sat Apr 27, 2013 5:06 pm
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therealme says...



OMG I AM 100% IN LOVE WITH MELON! HE IS SO CUTE OMG AND HE IS SO PERFECT! I LOVE THE PRANK HE PULLED ON MR. WINTERS HAHAHA SO GREAT :D (sorry for using caps, i'm just trying to express how FREAKING CUTE he is). Melon is a guy, right? (even though Melon is a robot and could never be a girl or a guy, wow i can be stupid)
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Sat Apr 27, 2013 5:46 pm
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MrWinters says...



You're right, he is technically gender neutral, but he still gets referred to like a guy.
  





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Sun Apr 28, 2013 1:16 am
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ninjacookies says...



Okay, That was pretty awesome :)
  





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Sun Apr 28, 2013 3:11 pm
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therealme says...



Hey peoples, is it okay if we sometimes repeat a scene or event, but in a different character's point of view? just wondering :)
If it isn't strongly encouraged, perhaps we could make a rule or something that only three people in a row can write about the same scene/event.
Otherwise, if everyone writes the same scene/event each time we have a new scene/event, then we'll never finish this storybook! What do you guys think about it?

by the way this storybook is simply fabulous! everyone is working so well with each other.
"It is our Light, not our darkness, that most frightens us."
  








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