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Mon Feb 18, 2013 11:06 pm
Sassafras says...



Let's try this again. :)
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Mon Feb 18, 2013 11:13 pm
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Yes, please :)
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Mon Feb 18, 2013 11:20 pm
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Oh. *poof*
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Mon Feb 18, 2013 11:24 pm
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Reise, will you send a mass PM to everyone with the DT link? Or I can, if you want. :-)
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Mon Feb 18, 2013 11:28 pm
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I was going to link it in my next post. It's going up soon.
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Mon Feb 18, 2013 11:29 pm
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Okay. Can't wait to get started!
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Mon Feb 18, 2013 11:48 pm
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Huzza for clean slates!
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Tue Feb 19, 2013 12:04 am
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Angel wants answers, and she's also not happy.
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Tue Feb 19, 2013 12:09 am
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Clearly.
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Tue Feb 19, 2013 12:23 am
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Checking in with the new DT.
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Tue Feb 19, 2013 12:28 am
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Just assume that the Informer ignores anyone that tries to interrupt her when you all post your POVs. And the rest of her speech is in the spoiler below.



Spoiler! :
"The Fundamentals, the original four, were the protectors of this world and their own. There are two worlds that exist, the mortal world and the immortal world. The Fundamentals exist to keep the two worlds at bay, making sure they never cross. They kept the peace by fighting off evil that threatened to hurt the inhabitants of the immortal world and expose their secret to the mortal realm. The Fundamentals were doing a good job of keeping things under control until an evil with great power showed up.

He went by the name of Karzai.

Karzai wanted to take over both the immortal and mortal world, wanted to merge the two and become king of it all. He came close once or twice actually, succeeding in leaking a few demons through a forged portal between worlds, but the Fundamentals pulled through and cut down any serious trouble before it could happen. The trouble Karzai was causing seemed to have a simple problem, to just kill Karzai, they could have many times and very easily, but it wasn't that simple.

If Karzai was to die the power resting inside of him would rupture and expand, demolishing both the mortal and immortal world with it's force. They had to find a way to stop him without killing him. They had to put him to sleep. The Fundamentals set out a plan.

On their next encounter with Karzai they trapped him and tied him down with chains forged from the strongest leaves of the Earth Continent, and then, when he was restrained, they poured all of their power, energy, and life into a sleeping spell that they hoped to bind the beast forever. The spell worked, but not without a cost. All four Fundamentals died, but with a smile on their corpses.

Usually every Fundamental would be collected at birth, as was the way before Karzai's arrival, and trained to be warriors and protectors once their time came, but after the death of the Four, Fundamentals stopped being born, the race died out. Or so we thought. With Karzai asleep, his "influence" - his dark aura - vanished from the land. The great Four's death resulted in a wash of pure spirit that cleansed the Immortal Realm of all evil, and also created a new Fundamental class. No one knows where Karzai came from, or if his orientation was even of typical birth. Some rumor that he's not man at all, in any sense of the word, but more spirit than being.

The only reason you are all gathered here today is because Karzai is awakening and both worlds are in terrible danger. We need your help, Fundamentals."


Don't try to fit the whole speech in a single post. :)

Ignorance, if there's anything I left out will you be kind enough to fill the blanks? Also any points that need clarification.
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Tue Feb 19, 2013 12:29 am
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It amuses me how you talk in one character's chapter about your other character like "that chick with no manners", LH :mrgreen:

Oh, and Reise, you misspelled Marilena's name. Don't know if that was intentional, as in he doesn't know how to pronounce it or something, but I thought of letting you know ;)
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Tue Feb 19, 2013 12:36 am
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Dibs in the next post please!!
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Tue Feb 19, 2013 12:41 am
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I will go after Janika, if that's okay. I have a part already and just need to put all in - will be up tomorrow.
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Tue Feb 19, 2013 12:43 am
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She forgot Dark Fundamentals.
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