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Masked Resistance vs Aradian Tyranny DT



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Wed Jan 23, 2013 9:27 pm
crossroads says...



. . . Three Metal sorcerers in the Castle (not counting anyone but the royal family) should be able to fight it without much trouble.

Also, LH, where did the guard's body come from now? They took it to the Tunnels, it should be in Anair's Lab now.
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Wed Jan 23, 2013 9:28 pm
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Jake alone could make tootpicks with it :P
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Wed Jan 23, 2013 9:30 pm
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There. And Anair is a natural in controlling little metal pieces and mechanisms. So, hey, go for it, Resistance, do let it attack the Castle.. We'd love a new pet.
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Wed Jan 23, 2013 9:34 pm
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Actually. There are only so many metalsmiths within the city. Jake knows all, if not most of them. He'd track the creators down and execute them. Since they're also part of the Resistance, he'd torch the rest of the lot to the ground.

So yes, do have the dragon attack the Castle.
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Wed Jan 23, 2013 9:39 pm
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Btw, you know, Anair isn't unable to do anything without Riana showing up.. She can fight (though mostly from behind the scenes) and will always stand on the side of the Crown, so don't make a defenseless child of her when including her in your chapters..

Oh. And can anyone please clarify one thing for me.. What exactly makes it a tyranny? Except for how the king treated young Morgan, that is.
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Wed Jan 23, 2013 9:41 pm
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Think of the Greek tyrant Pysystrarchius, as spoken of in Plato's Republic. Jake is much like that.

I believe you have your answer.
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Wed Jan 23, 2013 9:48 pm
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Indeed I do. Plato answers the question.


Also. I think I'd be on the Crown's side even if this wasn't an SB xD
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Wed Jan 23, 2013 9:51 pm
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xD Bitch please, I AM the Crown. Forever and always.
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Wed Jan 23, 2013 9:55 pm
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Don't you bitch please your big sister :mrgreen:
Just the Crown? I thought you aim higher than that :p
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Wed Jan 23, 2013 9:56 pm
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Watch your language around here. Don't forget, people get notified in the DT and I will not tolerate the over-use of bad language. Am I clear or do I have to spell it out?
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Wed Jan 23, 2013 9:58 pm
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We just moved from here, exactly for that reason ^^
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Wed Jan 23, 2013 9:59 pm
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Bitch I bitch please anyone. Bitch.

Whoops, sorry RF :P

Oh yes. Good point.

The EMPIRE, then. A crown so beautiful, so jeweled and powerful, countries will quail at the sight. ;3
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Wed Jan 23, 2013 10:18 pm
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Please, if it wasn't for Littery putting the Jester Rebellion on hold, I would have Blair uproot even the deepest roots of the kingdoms. And then send Volodymir Ibrithil and his son packing by turning the world into a world war.
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Wed Jan 23, 2013 10:22 pm
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We've been through this. You had not one chance :P the Rebels were outmatched and outclassed.

For some strange reason that reminds me of aother SB…
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