Young Writers Society

I put british?

...It was suppost to be greek. *changes*

Peli will get frustrated with anyone who wrecks their ship so be prepared to make multiple enemies

And Peli saves the day, by knocking Amynta out of the way just before she crashes the ship into a reef and destroying the ship. I also added a little something, something to Amynta's character.

And while all of the above happens, Eos sits in his cabin and plans to steal Helen for himself because his father, Hades, tells him to. XD

Guys, the SB is moving really slow. Can you start posting more, and more, so that we can get into some action? I'd rather not have the SB die within the first few pages. xD

And I have some ideas for the "trouble" coming. Maybe once we get to shore on Troy, there could be a god that gets in our way. One that doesn't have a kid on the ship. Anyone have any ideas for which god it should be?

I was thinking of having some fun with the Hydra, Amynta's spear will make short work of any of the minor heads. But the one major head she's going to need the help with taking out, I suppose Philp and Phileos can help out, while everyone else tries fending off the minor heads.

This last post of mine is probably the most fun I've had writing in a long time XD

~ Forgive me MM if you feel I have wrongly taken advantage of your character.

That's a toss up, but I gotta say you haven't. Amytha can be a real b**** without any reason. But she's going to need a reason to start hating him, Also I can imagine her saving hide once or twice.

Well you can PM me details and we can talk about it if you want to take the relationship farther in either direction negitavly or romantically XD