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Fri Jan 11, 2013 8:16 pm
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Alvarin says...



Thanks, both of you ;)
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Mon Jan 14, 2013 1:46 pm
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Alvarin says...



I just realized that Quick learned English in one day.. Hrm, lets just pretend that it's possible xD
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Mon Jan 14, 2013 9:13 pm
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methrirr123 says...



I've decided to make Rovaalian's swords special in some way. I haven't decided how, though, without overpowering him.

From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king.
  





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Wed Jan 16, 2013 10:34 pm
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methrirr123 says...



Tell the truth, guys: Am I totally god modding with glitch? He's supposed to have this epic downfall, and his power now will build up to that. But, what do you guys think. I've been unchalenged for the whole time that Glitch was in existence. Is he too powerfull?

From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king.
  





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Thu Jan 17, 2013 12:29 am
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AlmondEyes says...



Most definitely
"What is dead my never die, but rises again, larger and stronger..."

*Ride like Lightening, crash like Thunder*


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Thu Jan 17, 2013 12:34 am
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megsug says...



I think for right now it's fine since he's new and the conflict is being introduced, however, he needs to have some weaknesses coming up very soon.
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Thu Jan 17, 2013 1:46 am
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Dawnpath1 says...



Need. A Rovalaan. Post.
  





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Thu Jan 17, 2013 3:44 am
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methrirr123 says...



Right. Soulsucker malfunction, coming right up. Plus, Rovaalian is posted. He should be weak enough now to be dealt with, though strong enough to present a chalenge. His character, I expect, will undergo severe changes from cocky to cowardice, before eventually one of you lucky writters ends him. But he will open a portal, and the Orc army may be enough to take Genor if the Atrians and Nekoites aren't quick enough. (If you could see me now, I'm makin my guilty face.)

From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king.
  





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Thu Jan 17, 2013 4:52 pm
Dawnpath1 says...



I think you may have overlooked my last post, as I skim over yours. I'll make do.
  





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Thu Jan 17, 2013 7:33 pm
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methrirr123 says...



Sorry. Just wanted to get to Genor. I'll make some edits

From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king.
  





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Fri Jan 25, 2013 12:51 am
Alvarin says...



I'm here to complain again, feels like it's all I ever do here.. Sorry xD

Dawnpath 1, did you read megsug's whole post? It's a bit weird that your character suddenly comes in and starts talking to Korhel while Balik is also supposed to be talking to him.
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Fri Jan 25, 2013 12:59 am
methrirr123 says...



Alright, I've had a few conversations, and have a big battle in genor planned for much later on in the storybook, after Genor is abandoned and Atra plans an attack. Either that, or Glitch plans an attack. It will happen. And Glitch will try to infiltrate the castle of Atra. The only question is this: Who wants the pleasure of catching him and cutting off Glitch's Gauntlet-Hand?
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From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king.
  





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Fri Jan 25, 2013 1:03 am
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megsug says...



Me! Er... Balik
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Fri Jan 25, 2013 1:04 am
methrirr123 says...



anybody else wanna place their name in the hat? (not really gonna choose between you guys, just gonna let you argue amongst yourselves.)

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Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
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Fri Jan 25, 2013 1:40 am
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Alvarin says...



Hunter would be honored to, but he can't really handle a sword, so I vote for Balik xD
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