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Fri Feb 15, 2013 9:03 am
Alvarin says...



I also had an idea about Miranda finally confronting Yamani, and then letting her go ;)

Changing it to five years might be a good idea, 'cause otherwise Haigha will be 29 and Miranda 30 35 xD I thought Yamani was 17? Don't know where I got that from though ;K
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Fri Feb 15, 2013 8:09 pm
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Vyper, if it involves the Dormouse leaving with them, I'm sure Lordshire will be all for it ;)
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Fri Feb 15, 2013 8:15 pm
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Haha, okay. The Dormouse isn't fond of Lordshire either, so he was planning on leaving. xD

Also, I might've said 17 in one of the later posts. I usually make my characters either 17 or 19, and I couldn't remember which I chose. Since I'm 17, I sort of made Yamani act like me, so it doesn't really matter how old she's supposed to be. xD

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Sat Feb 16, 2013 7:11 pm
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Seeing as how I kind of just dropped off the radar, I was wondering if I could jump back in? My character wasn't really in the loop of the story, which is why I stopped posting in the first place. Yay or nay?
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Sat Feb 16, 2013 7:33 pm
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janika wrote:Seeing as how I kind of just dropped off the radar, I was wondering if I could jump back in? My character wasn't really in the loop of the story, which is why I stopped posting in the first place. Yay or nay?

I think it will be over in a couple of posts (at least I'm writing Miranda's last post now), so I don't know if there's any point, but since were doing a sequel I'd love to see Luna there. But heck, if you want to get back in now you should ;)
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Sat Feb 16, 2013 7:34 pm
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I was gonna make my next post so that all the old characters could come back for a bit before we end.
And when we do end, you'll get to post more in the new one :D
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Sat Feb 16, 2013 7:39 pm
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Hey. Will there really be a sequel to this? One that would allow new characters to appear? :3

Yeah, I'm a stalker. I love this SB though I was never a part of it xD
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Sat Feb 16, 2013 7:47 pm
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Ok then, but I have no idea what's been going on right now... Will someone catch me up? And another thing: Even if I do post, what would it be about?
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Sat Feb 16, 2013 8:13 pm
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AriaAdams wrote:Hey. Will there really be a sequel to this? One that would allow new characters to appear? :3

Yeah, I'm a stalker. I love this SB though I was never a part of it xD
Yes, darling, we're doing a sequel and we want some new characters ;)

janika wrote:Ok then, but I have no idea what's been going on right now... Will someone catch me up? And another thing: Even if I do post, what would it be about?
So, the rebels have taken over the castle and driven Yamani away. Yamani, Haigha and Minerva fled down into a cave. Miranda is waiting outside and Jubiah has been sent inside to drive them out. Lordshire (who've been promised the throne from Miranda) has gone to lie to the people. He's supposed to tell them that the two Queens killed themselves. Haigha heard Jubiah coming, so he's waiting in the cave so that Yamani and Minerva could escape. When Yamani and Minerva gets out, Miranda is there waiting for them and now has the chance to kill Yamani. <-- Do correct me if I'm wrong.

So, Luna could either go down in the cave where Haigha and Jubiah are, 'cause I don't have any plan for how that fight will play out, or to Lordshire. I already have a plan for Miranda, but she could jump in there after Miranda's done.
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Sat Feb 16, 2013 8:14 pm
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AriaAdams wrote:Hey. Will there really be a sequel to this? One that would allow new characters to appear? :3

Yeah, I'm a stalker. I love this SB though I was never a part of it xD


We're working on it Aria xP

janika wrote:Ok then, but I have no idea what's been going on right now... Will someone catch me up? And another thing: Even if I do post, what would it be about?


Nothing much has really gone on. The rebels made a full scale attack on the Hearts castle, but Lordshire got Yamani and Haigha to leave before they were involved in the fighting. In the meantime, after they ditched Lordshire, Minerva was chasing after Yamani whil Miranda and Jubiah with with the rebels fighting. Lordshire took this opportunity to get the Hearts troops to see that their leader was heartless (no pun intended) and get them onto his side. After a bit of talking/fighting/falling into oil, Lordshire, Jubiah, and Miranda have Minerva, Yamani, and Haigha on the run. While Jubiah and Miranda are chasing the other three, Lordshire is headed back to Wonderland.

And that where my next post will come in. Lordshire going to tell the whole city to meet outside the gates of the Hearts Castle for a bid announcement involving the future of Wonderland. So you can post about that.
Then, after that, I'll make a post about the actual announcement, which will probably lead into Wonderland 2, and you can post about that. :D
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D'aw Alv beat me to it >.<
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Sat Feb 16, 2013 9:09 pm
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Ok, so I have an idea for my post. Since they're already in the cave, how about they all wander deeper into the cave and find Luna there? Like her own place to make poisons and other potions? Does that sound good? Also, Alvarin has brought the fact that it's an old toture chamber. There could be a secret door or something they never noticed that hides off a part of the cave and an entrance they never knew about, and neither Did Luna. How does that sound?
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Sat Feb 16, 2013 9:35 pm
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Wonderland 2 will be an actual new SB, right? :) ..Though I'll have to check that with Eran, but I think it sound cooler to start with a clean slate (kind of) ^^
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Sat Feb 16, 2013 9:45 pm
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I hope so, but I still want a way to remember all of the stuff that happened here.
You know, just in case it comes up ;)
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Sat Feb 16, 2013 9:51 pm
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VeerenVKS wrote:I hope so, but I still want a way to remember all of the stuff that happened here.
You know, just in case it comes up ;)

I was actually going to ask you to help write a summary, since you seem to be good at that xD Then we can put that in the first post.
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