Chirantha, Xander never stormed out of the cabin :S He was apologizing to Kiara and then I was waiting for Ignorance to say something so I can't really write what happened in the cabin without her input. So if you could please edit that? Because I can't do anything with it.
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I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity. ~Edgar Allen Poe
Micki - Yeah, about that. I was writing Cailan in a different time line, so I'm actually waiting for Mason to respond to Xander as Kiara is not actually capable of talking or thinking at the moment. So, what I wrote in my post is supposed to happen in the future (Several minutes later ) in the Hades cabin. I can edit it if you want.
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask." Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants." - Dragon Age
Sorry, was out shopping. Hmm, I don't really know what to say. I know! Mason will help Kiara up, make sure she's okay, and take her to eat dinner. There, someone can tell them about the dance, and he'll asskkkkk Kiaaarrrraa. ;3
“I can't go back to yesterday because I was a different person then." - Lewis Carroll
Well, Xander's going to ask Lyn, but Ignorance, are you going to kick Xander out still, even after his heart felt apology to his dear sweet sister? :'(
Or are you not? Because I don't know what to do if you just ignore him haha
If there's a 50/50 chance of getting something wrong go for it anyway because there is also a 50/50 chance of getting it right
I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity. ~Edgar Allen Poe
Ignorance, I have to point out a few, tiny little (too many adjectives isn't it) things from your post. Firstly, Cailan did not know about the dance and even if he knew he wouldn't be asking about that from Kiara at that moment. He came there to check on her as he considers Kiara as his sister, because he lost his own sister.
Secondly, Kiara won't laugh at any point of the situation as she's too much weak to do so.
Thirdly, she knows how to dance, just not strong enough to do so. So you can edit your post saying that she can dance but Mason has to help her keep steady as she's weak.
Can you edit those parts if that's okay with you?
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask." Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants." - Dragon Age
Wait a second but the dance hasn't even started yet! I thought we were going to do a normal day, then the tournament, and THEN the dance? Won't that be plenty of time for Kiara to get better?
And Ignorance, the dance isn't for deathball, Sunshine already explained that the dance was for the tournament that happens later on.
Ah, oh yeah. And Xander wouldn't have said that she could go to the dance. She's obviously way too weak to be doing any kind of physical activity, especially in a crowded area.
I'm sorry, but pretty much your whole post is off. Could you edit it? :S
If there's a 50/50 chance of getting something wrong go for it anyway because there is also a 50/50 chance of getting it right
I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity. ~Edgar Allen Poe
Well, either we take that post or we don't because I don't have the patience to edit it right now, I'm in a foul mood. So either we take it or you wait some more.
“I can't go back to yesterday because I was a different person then." - Lewis Carroll
MasterL, Redfang: A prophecy? I dunno...there's some other activities I have planned, and prophecies tend to pick out certain people and leave others behind. I'll be thinking it over, because it is a cool plan, and I'm open to comprimises and ideas. I can't guarantee anything though.
Miki- I'm lookin' foward to comforting Xander. I guess I'll wait until he walks out...?
Ignorance- Calm down a bit girl! I read your post before you deleted it, and the only thing that really needed changing was the date of the dance. Calm down. It's just been a bit since you posted- it's understandable to be a bit off. Remember my 'Lyn-dragging-Kiara-away-from-Xander-and-Mason' post? :X
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) in the Hades cabin. I can edit it if you want. 
He came there to check on her as he considers Kiara as his sister, because he lost his own sister.
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