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well, she certainly is evil, and a little psychic so...
But her powers come from a shard of the black crystal, which comes important later in the story. But the nakia don't know that.
You don't have to change anything+)

Okay, no one move on quite yet. At the moment, Jane and Delilah are enveloped in a violet light, and Jane has returned to her regular self. So don't try to explain what happened yet, after everyone gets a chance to write. Have fun, and we will be moving on soon!

so we can still respond, but dont finish the battle scene quite yet?

Yeah, no one has posted for the last twenty four hours! It's driving me crazy!

lol i was just doublechecking so I'll post now lol

In my own defense i dont have computer access so i cant do paragraphs when i post! Thats why i havent done anything! And hey secrets! I just put 2 and 2 together and figured out who you are! Jeez im dumb sometimes

I have no defense except; work, life and the universe decided to fall apart around my ears.

I'll get Caleb up and running by tonight.

Question though Fading-

was the boy with the kindly brown eyes Caleb, or someone else? I just don't want to skip over anything if it was.

thanks!

Yeah, it was Caleb. I almost said 'the boy with the kind, puppy eyes' but I thought that would be a tad bit cheesy.

Hee hee... The boy with puppy eyes...

Hey Bee, did i depict Cassandora okay? I tried to make her angry at Caleb, but also realizing that now was not the time to kill him for touching her=)

Yeah! You did great! I was confused for a sec cuz everyone usually describes her as the girl with a burn, but the fact that dee doesnt see her that way will make her adore the priestess!

really? wow way to go bee. lol

Shut up. Im a very intelligent person, like, ninety percent of the time... Minus eighty percent...

Lol its okay. i love you either way.

Who fancies visiting Isabelle in the infermary after the fight? I have a feeling most of the characters are going to have to 'get patched up' at some point, especially the knights, but I thought it'd be nice if we had a little 'peaceful' sceen before everything kicks off again while we're all recouparating. If no-one like the idea then let's abandon it now.