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The Escapees (Special Features Disc)



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Thu Jun 23, 2011 2:16 am
Loller65 says...



Yeah...waaaay to much OOC going on in the regular thread, so we are gonna have to have a Discussion Thread before it gets outta hand, okay?

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Thu Jun 23, 2011 5:56 am
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Thu Jun 23, 2011 5:47 pm
Justagirl says...



What about this for the plot!?!?

I was kinda thinking that if they escaped the GC wouldn't really go after them. So what if they find a, like, blocked off underground section that's kinda abandoned and filled with people who they just let go there and that have gone crazy. And so, also in this place (that's really secret) there's the biggest secrets and projects and stuff.... And so, they find it and kinda live down there with the GC people wanting to get them so that they don't find out about the projects. Like that idea?
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Thu Jun 23, 2011 6:01 pm
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It's a pretty solid idea but if it's blocked off how do they get there?
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Thu Jun 23, 2011 6:24 pm
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I don't know. But, you're character is the one with the power + they're in the air vents which go anywhere.... Speaking of which, when will the white coats be sending poison-by-air through the vents? That's what they should do if they want to get rid of the naughty children that escaped.
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Thu Jun 23, 2011 7:06 pm
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True but from the way the plot is going much of the facility is underground. Unless there's a secondary ventilitation system sending poison through the vents would poison EVERYONE in the facility.
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Thu Jun 23, 2011 11:56 pm
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Aaah. True. Well, maybe they'd block up all the vents?
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Sun Jun 26, 2011 1:01 am
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On vacation. If next hotel doesn't have WiFi like current one, posts will be limited to being sent from my phone, which can be annoying, so I might not post much for the next week. On the other hand, I might be able to post plenty. Regardless, I'll let you guys know tomorrow.
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Mon Jun 27, 2011 2:38 am
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Current hotel has WiFi. slow as molasses though, so posts may be infrequent, but I can post. So nobody take over Leroy!
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Tue Jun 28, 2011 9:48 pm
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hahah kay :) Hope you're enjoying your vacation.
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