Young Writers Society

Hi!

This is for anyone with questions, ideas, suggestions, and pretty much anything else that has to do with my SB.

I've posted my profile Violet

Is it okay? Or do I need to change anything?

Jake seems awesome! That is the only way to say it. So that is all I'm going to describe him.

haha good

I have a tendency to create crap characters...

I love this idea. I just want to know some Ideas for flaws?? Physical and emotional. Also why is there only 5 characters . .. . . Shouldn't there me more like 8. Just wondering
Thanks

I don't know, epically failing under pressure? Like, passing out or going into hysterics when forced into leadership roles? Or just when the attention is on her? I think that doesn't contradict your character. If you don't want to take the suggestion that's fine, though. Whatever works for you.

I like the fact that there are only five characters. SB's always work better with less characters. Remember, less is more...

Yeah, well this is my first one making, and I'd figure simple is better. Otherwise it gets confusing and there are too many people trying to post at once. And if you're gone for say the weekend, then you have to read pages and pages to get to present time, or your character gets left out. Plus, I'm hoping to memorize everyone so I don't have to keep going back to the profiles when speaking for someone.

Sorry for the lateness of the post. I was trying to make it awesome when my computer shut down and then I had to start again-and I couldn't be bothered cause it was school...but it's up now!

Woop, go Apple

OK, I'm going to start it.

Okiee

One question though, how do I actually write my characters posts? I mean, I can't say that I go up to the people and say 'hi, you're on a TV show and I'm the scriptwriter!' Plus, how does my character know what's actually happening? Like, how does he watch them? Does he talk to them?

Sorry if I'm being a pain...

There are a bunch of hidden cameras and camera crew everywhere, but the contestants are oblivious.

Also, do something like

Is reviewing tapes. "Hmm.... They are all getting along well. Not good. Why don't I stir things up a bit?" I pulled a walkie talkie off of my belt. "Sherman, find a bees nest and plant it near their camp. Over."

Or something like that. I know that's a bad example, but work with me, please.

haha okay

I think I know what to write now. Will Jake ever speak to the contestants though?

Maybe in the end. Or maybe before. That's up to Jake. And by his description, I have absolutely know idea what he would do. On he does--which means you do. Hopefully.