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Fri May 14, 2010 1:29 am
eldEr says...



Okay...so not quite what I had in mind happened. That and it all happened while I was showering and eating! xD
But close enough. :lol:

I'm guessing that the seed of doubt has taken root in Taeryn now??
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Fri May 14, 2010 9:49 pm
kidashka says...



I do not understand. Tarrion got stabbed. By someone who doesn't like Talen. Whose side is this person on?!

I was going to go with the knife thing being an hallucination when it was first mentioned, but I didn't have enough time to post then and there have been about five posts since then...

Also, please could you refrain from making Taelyn let Tar and Sel have contact with each other? Her aim is to get info by upsetting them at each others pain; why would she let them see each other at no benefit to herself?! She might be softening up but she's still out for herself...

I would really appreciate it if you two would post a tiiiny bit less? Otherwise I don't actually get much of a say in what my character does and I get a bit stressed. Like now.


Could this all be some kind of telepathic dream between the two? I don't feel my character acted naturally so I'm not sure where to go plot-wise.

Sorry for the huge post but I'm quite bewildered. And you don't have to listen to everything I say, just wanted to get it off my chest.
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Sat May 15, 2010 1:16 am
eldEr says...



Heheh...sorry about that.
xD
I'll attempt to make sense of things and fix it up...after I'm fully awake. I only got and hour and a half of sleep last night...soooo yeah
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Sat May 15, 2010 2:45 pm
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LDR and I are just going to delete a bunch of posts and edit our old ones for you.
;)
Hope this helps you out and thanks for letting us know!
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Sat May 15, 2010 3:04 pm
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Sorry... it just didn't make any sense to me... Thanks! :D
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Sat May 15, 2010 3:14 pm
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No prob! Glad to have cleared things up ;)
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Sat May 15, 2010 11:09 pm
sunstarfrozenlife says...



Haha! Arlene! :D Lol niiice.

What plot are you thinking of for this, Kidashka? does Aris convince her to be good or something?
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Sat May 15, 2010 11:14 pm
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Er..... I just thought that Tae would want Aris close so she could keep an eye on her.

I think that Aris would see her uncertainty with Talen and such and help increase it. So not single-handedly turning her good, but combined with Talen, Sel and Tar, yes defo. :D

Wasn't sure what to do about Kale though >.<
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Sat May 15, 2010 11:24 pm
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Oh, ok. :D I'm at a stop on what to do now, though. haha

Maybe with Kale just lock him up. Unless Taeryn has some other use for him.
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Sun May 16, 2010 12:16 pm
Ladyofthedeathroses says...



*curses her computer vehemently* I can't delete my posts. Just ignore all of them after Tars dream thing until I said to ignore that post and then we should be good. *is still cursing her computer*
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Sun May 16, 2010 12:31 pm
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Don't worry; I figured you'd just edited the last few so that made enough sense :D
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Sun May 16, 2010 12:48 pm
Ladyofthedeathroses says...



Well just so you know Selene is going to be lying through her teeth so much don't be surprised if her teeth rot and drop out of her head.
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Sun May 16, 2010 1:18 pm
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Bahaha they're gonna have such a fun stubborn stand-off. :lol:
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Sun May 16, 2010 1:25 pm
Ladyofthedeathroses says...



Boo yah!
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Sun May 16, 2010 1:49 pm
eldEr says...



Haha!
Okay, so I added to the part where Tar got stabbed.
Somebody stabbed him from above and placed something (carpet, furniture) over the hole.
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