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Mon May 03, 2010 1:46 pm
sunstarfrozenlife says...



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This is the discussion thread for the SB, Lament of Innocence. ;)
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Tue May 04, 2010 10:03 pm
kidashka says...



Erm... I just wanted to ask, is there anyone else on Talen's side?

Also, I'm coming to get the good guys soon BAHAHAHHA. :smt077
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Tue May 11, 2010 5:57 pm
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BWHAHAHAHA! I found it!!

Anywho... *coughs*

That isn't so good considering Tar and Sel are pretty much dieing of wounds -.-

Should make things very interesting :D
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Tue May 11, 2010 9:59 pm
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Sorry, I have issues. Ignore me. I'm not even in this SB...

Jeff is coming... :twisted: You know what I mean Isha...

He's not really though... Jeff is too cool for you.
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Tue May 11, 2010 10:13 pm
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:lol:
Skins...
He's best stay away from Tarrion with that grenade...he may make an attempt and wringing Jeff's neck. ;)
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Tue May 11, 2010 10:15 pm
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Isha, Isha, Isha. Have you forgotten about Jeff's powers to cook a bagle without a toaster?

He will own you and Tarrion.
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Tue May 11, 2010 10:18 pm
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o.O
You failed to mention that one. xD
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Tue May 11, 2010 10:22 pm
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Is that jealousy I smell... :roll: Oh no, it's Jeff's awesome bagels. Without a toaster.

Oooooooo! I owned you (again).

I'm going to stop posting here now, I'm clogging up the DT of a SB that I'm not even in. :smt001
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Wed May 12, 2010 6:15 am
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I was thinking, maybe it's a bit futile to fight against Taeryn [t'would be slightly farfetched to imagine that several wounded teens could defeat what is essentially the entire royal army], soo...

The way to beat her would be more... like convincing her that they are innocent - Taeryn is quite easily influenced, so winning her over would mostly be a case of putting doubt in her mind.

...I'm not saying a major, sudden personality flip though. She'd still be as aggressive and you'd have to win her trust before you just spout out the sob stories.

Please don't let me come back to see this-
Selene/Tarrion: We're innocent!
Taeryn: Oops, my mistake. Off you trot.

It should be fairly subtle, so she almost thinks it's her idea, and would take a few posts...

So, that's my fantabulous plot idea. Though, if you disagree and feel it would be better to place your characters in a situation where they will defeat the bad guys against all belief, it's up to you.
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Wed May 12, 2010 2:39 pm
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That sounds like a good plot...only one thing.
We'd have to convince the guards, too. One or two of them probably remember beating the snot out of Tarrion xD
Selene too. You would think they'd recognize them? Which means that we'd have to add another post or two about Taeryn convincing the guards.
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Wed May 12, 2010 9:54 pm
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Oh, yeah. I was thinking it would happen on the way so that they would just do as she asked, but now they're in the castle so it'll be harder.

Started to make her have less faith in Talen... :D
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Thu May 13, 2010 3:49 pm
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I have a new plan...but I need a few PMs before I explain the last part. (I like...JUST thought it up as I read that xD )
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Thu May 13, 2010 6:58 pm
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What do you mean need a few PMs? You want me to PM you?!
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Thu May 13, 2010 7:37 pm
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I think shes going to pm you and then you pm her what you think
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Thu May 13, 2010 8:40 pm
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Ahhh, okay then. *intrigued*
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