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Sun May 02, 2010 8:46 pm
IndisBubbles says...



Status: Beginning, yet accepting characters.

This is the DT for the Sickness. So here you write your ideas and anything else you seem fit to fall under this category.

:arrow: I was thinking that every member should be in the one tribe. I think that is what was intended in the first place, though?
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Sun May 02, 2010 8:51 pm
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I was thinking that every member should be in the one tribe. I think that is what was intended in the first place, though?


Yeah, that's what I assumed. Although thinking about it, two enemy tribes could be quite good? I do mostly like the one tribe idea though...

Thanks for making a D.T by the way Indis!
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Sun May 02, 2010 8:55 pm
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hm. Maybe, since most people aren't in a tribe. You can start the story off with them getting absorbed into tribes. I think two tribes sounds good.
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Sun May 02, 2010 9:19 pm
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Okay then. That souns good, though we have to decide who is on different tribes and who isn't.
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Sun May 02, 2010 9:47 pm
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I posted, not sure what you want to happen so I kept it short and vague.
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Sun May 02, 2010 10:16 pm
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I've posted too!
I wasn't too sure what to write though... :lol:
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Mon May 03, 2010 12:25 am
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You guys, those are really good posts! :D I thought no one was going to join this! :) I hope mine have been okay to, sorry if I have gotten anything wrong. If you have read my new post I was thinking Kamilah (I think that is how I spelt it) should be like the big "lord" over hte unnamed city...or something.

EDIT: I should mention that they (Kamiah and tribe) want everyone (All participants in the SB)to die, but Aerrow is the one they want first to cease living for some reason which I haven't really thought of yet.

Is that okay? I'll change it if you'd like...
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Mon May 03, 2010 1:12 am
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Hey! I posted. Hope it's okay. Wait, there's another person named Kamilah?
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Mon May 03, 2010 3:36 am
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Yes actually, there is another person called Kamilah. I thought that was rather funny, cause it was a name I typed in randomly. :lol: I also added your character into my recent post Jasmine.

EDIT: No it's called Kamiah, sorry I added and L. :lol: Whoops.
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This is starting off really well :)
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Mon May 03, 2010 4:08 am
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Yeah, thankfully! I thought it was going to crash and burn, but I guess it can still do that...hopefully not! I also wanted to know what about the other characters, do they want to join our little tribe or make one of their own???
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Mon May 03, 2010 11:45 am
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I'm really liking this! I reckon we should try and make this the longest storyboook ever... :thud: Sue me, I dream big. :roll:

As for your tribe question Indis; I'm not sure what to do with my character, tribe wise. He's a bit of an outsider really. I might just see what happens.
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Tue May 04, 2010 10:05 am
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I hope everything is going well on my part so far. Are my posts to long? I've noticed that I tend to type a 'lil to much! :lol: Whatcha ya' gonna do. So has anyone got any ideas so far?

I was thinking we should meet a mutation soon, so we can get them involved into the others life. I also thought that what Jasminebells said about her sister becoming a mutant was rather a good idea, though that's if she still wants that to happen?
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Tue May 04, 2010 3:43 pm
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Sorry my posting is a bit dodgy guys, stupid time zones.

Indis, your posts aren't too long! I like long posts... :xd:

As for ideas... not that I can think of, or are any good!
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Thu May 06, 2010 12:00 am
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So what should we do for Aerrow's secret? I kind of kept it vague but I really don't know what to do with my character as of now. :'(
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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