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Mon Mar 15, 2010 8:06 pm
Lauren2010 says...



We can chat about the storybook, or just life, here!

By the way, I'm really pumped about the story so far. Even though we just started, it's awesome. :D
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Mon Mar 15, 2010 8:37 pm
*writewatiwant* says...



Good =D

To answer Fire's question, he could have met him a couple times in different places. Stephan would travel for business for his father, so they could have met? And at least know each other? He wouldn't know his past, though.

I'm sorry, I need relationships for my characters xD
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Mon Mar 15, 2010 9:22 pm
pudin.junidf says...



Have a question Kat.

Since Stephan is Jane's brother, can he be friends with Charlene too?

Oh, by the way, this is awesome Lauren really.

Just one question.

Are we going into the elf city?
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Mon Mar 15, 2010 9:36 pm
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Yeeep. I see somethin' there <.<
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Mon Mar 15, 2010 10:57 pm
Lauren2010 says...



Hee hee. I actually have a plan for Peter and Ana concerning the elf city at some point. But as for now, there seems to be an air of mystery around Fallacre. Merriwood (the elf city) can wait.

I'd really like for this storybook to last a while, so none of you guys can give up on me! :D
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Mon Mar 15, 2010 11:03 pm
pudin.junidf says...



That's ok

So just something I wanted to say. I really like the gypsy part that Scarlett has, so I was wondering if we could make some plot out of that? I mean, it sounds interesting and I was thinking if maybe Gwen kind of escapes to Fallacre maybe or Merriwood. And maybe not for all of the citied but it would be interesting in Westhaven.
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Tue Mar 16, 2010 6:53 am
ScarlettFire says...



Great Ideas guys... So, Stephen would know how dangerous it is to be talking to Chris? I was planning on having Gwen and her brother being caught by the guy who killed the rest of their family. :) Maybe Gwen and a few others run off into the forest?
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Tue Mar 16, 2010 5:53 pm
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Stephan has absolutely no idea of how dangerous it might for him to talk to Chris. For him, Chris is just as guy he met one of his trips and had a few drinks with.
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Wed Mar 17, 2010 1:11 am
Lauren2010 says...



So it looks like this is what we've got goin' on right now:

Mystery around Fallacre
Gwen and Chris the gypsies on the run
Peter and Ana's connection to Merriwood

Though, Peter and Ana's connection to Merriwood can be put on the back burner. I'll bring it around whenever it seems to fit, so it may be sooner or later.

It looks like Tallow is interested in both the gypsies and Fallacre right now, so those two might be brought in together. I actually kind of like that idea ;)

So, in other news. Spring is coming :) It makes me happy.
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Wed Mar 17, 2010 7:33 pm
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Anyone willing to work at Green Farm? Pay is little, but Ana is all on her lonesome there. It could provide for some interesting interaction. Though, no one has to. Ana can just hire vague strangers. xD
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Wed Mar 17, 2010 10:58 pm
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Hm. Where am I to insert Robin in all of this?
  





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Thu Mar 18, 2010 6:13 am
ScarlettFire says...



I guess wherever you like, Stori.
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Thu Mar 18, 2010 1:32 pm
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I've drawn up sort of a crude map on Paint. It's just how I sort of see the place. I'll write up all the places again here:

Westhaven - the largest city in this area of the country. Most of the characters live around here.
Hollsworthy Hills - a mining community
Fallacre - a mysterious abandoned village
Upper Downs - a village
Waterly - the port city of the country, right on the Great Silver Sea
Lower Downs - a village
Aldlyn - a smaller city known to mages, sorcerers, healers, and others of magical tendencies
Morston - the last established town before the unknown parts of the country
Merriwood - the rumored location of an elvin city. No one knows exactly how to get here.
The grey lines are major roads
The spray-painted green is forest
The purple dot is Peter and Ana's farm
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Thu Mar 18, 2010 4:51 pm
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sorry for not posting <.< I'll post tonight with Jane and Stephan =D
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Thu Mar 18, 2010 4:55 pm
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That's okay... I was waiting for you to post as Stephan before posting something for Chris.

Oh, and thanks for the map. :xd:
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