That doesn't sound too bad to me, but if we can, could we have Camilla's human parent be killed by this minion? I really don't care for Camilla, and it can put in an additional reason to her being gone from the race; say, Chiron took her out of the race to tell her the news. I don't know, maybe I'm trying to speculate too far, but that's maybe the best way we can try and bring the situation to a bit more attention of the camp, while at the same time getting rid of an unowned character that I personally want dead, but a relative would do.
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