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Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:12 am
LovelessSummer says...



No.
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:15 am
EmiSukotto16 says...



Alright. So, as i counted it, we have 8 girls to 3 guys.
Llama 1:"Shh! Do you hear that? That's the sound of forgiveness."
Llama 2:"That's the sound of people drowning, Carl!"
Llama 1:"That is what forgiveness sounds like; screaming and then silence."
  





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Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:17 am
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No, it's fine.
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:19 am
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Lol well that makes things a lot harder.... Poor guys are gonna be mobbed!
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:23 am
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We need more guys!
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:27 am
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Should we make second characters?
Llama 1:"Shh! Do you hear that? That's the sound of forgiveness."
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:29 am
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Ask infinate! Its her SB
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:40 am
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Well, my idea would be to just go with some background students, and not make full profiles. We can lose them after the dance, unless we just want to keep them around. We could also bring them up from time to time, just for writing's sake, I guess.
Llama 1:"Shh! Do you hear that? That's the sound of forgiveness."
Llama 2:"That's the sound of people drowning, Carl!"
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 4:07 am
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Uhh.. DJ's one of the few guys, and he doesn't feel like getting mobbed

(Not that anyone would like a guy in anger management issues buuuut)
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 5:21 pm
pudin.junidf says...



Have a quetion?
Can we add some action?

I mean, since most of you are inside a truck and Arie is outside. Say, you can use your powers from the inside and Arie can help you from the outside. I mean, after all she moves stuff, no matter how big or heavy.
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 7:48 pm
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My oh my, I do have some catching up to do.

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Mon Nov 30, 2009 10:17 pm
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Well, Envie's going to try and teleport out, but I think it would work if she couldn't focus enough and could only get herself out. I was going to have her teleport to the driver's seat and take off with the truck, or go around and let them all out. Since the Uniforms already know that Calvin and DJ have powers, we might have to hide and sneak back in to the school life when the Uniforms leave. I'm not sure. What do you guys think?
Llama 1:"Shh! Do you hear that? That's the sound of forgiveness."
Llama 2:"That's the sound of people drowning, Carl!"
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 10:53 pm
LovelessSummer says...



Yeah that would be great, *sigh* times like this we need someone with mind control.
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 10:54 pm
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It would make things easier.
Llama 1:"Shh! Do you hear that? That's the sound of forgiveness."
Llama 2:"That's the sound of people drowning, Carl!"
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 10:55 pm
infinite reality says...



well for one thing, Im a guy...... and read this, it's a reply to the question.

I think anybody can feel free to make another character. It would be nice to have some kids that disappear because the authorities find out about their powers. But, if people don't want the responsibility of another full character for a while, then they can go with somebody that is normal and not "real"
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