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Sun Nov 29, 2009 12:11 am
infinite reality says...



Here you go. Talk about the story.

I had an idea though. I think since it starts out on Valentines day that there should be a school dance. So get your characters a date. I'd assume that the characters' powers will start to come at the dance, eventually crashing it I'd guess.
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Sun Nov 29, 2009 8:15 pm
irishfire says...



Oooh I like that idea! :D

Would anyone want to be my chars date? Shes a girl!
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Sun Nov 29, 2009 10:21 pm
LovelessSummer says...



Aww I can't have a date! No touching. This sucks. I'll spend it int he girls bathroom. *sniffles* Have fun without me.
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 1:37 am
irishfire says...



No! Star should totally be included, just tell her date that she burns...literally
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 2:08 am
LovelessSummer says...



Haha, I'd just say I'm hot. I mean that literally. How perfect! :smt005
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 2:21 am
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Haha I second that notion!
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 2:31 am
pudin.junidf says...



Does someone want to be Arie's Date?
She's a girl just in case you needed to know.
Les sanglots longs
Des violons
De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
D'une langueur
Monotone.

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Mon Nov 30, 2009 2:33 am
LovelessSummer says...



We must organize dates. :smt005 Do we have an even number of girls to guys. Someone post this when they post their next entry, or I can do it. :oops:
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 2:38 am
irishfire says...



I have no idea, lol.

So does Star wanna stick with Andrew throughout the entire book? Hmmm?
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:02 am
LovelessSummer says...



Yeah, that will be cool. We could be like the three musketeers, me, you, and Envie. :smt005
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:04 am
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Woo! That'd be awesome!

But who should we go to the dance with?
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:04 am
EmiSukotto16 says...



I like that idea!
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:05 am
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Hmmm we need dates. I'll post a notice. :smt005 If I even go with a date.
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:07 am
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Do I need to delete my newest post?
Llama 1:"Shh! Do you hear that? That's the sound of forgiveness."
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:07 am
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Do I need to delete my newest post?
Llama 1:"Shh! Do you hear that? That's the sound of forgiveness."
Llama 2:"That's the sound of people drowning, Carl!"
Llama 1:"That is what forgiveness sounds like; screaming and then silence."
  








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